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Love with a Rapist/or Rapist in love - Ek Darinde se Pyaar(Completed)


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Ek Darinde se Pyar?






Intro:


Kaha jata hai ke pyar andha hota hai. Yeh bhi suna hai ke pyar par kissi kaa zor nahin chalta. Aur yeh bhi kehte hein ke Pyar na to jaat dekhti hai, na umar, na samaaj, na hi pyar ko kissi ka darr hota hai na khauf.
Pyar ko khuda kaha jata hai. To kehte hein jo pyar karta hai unn mein rab baste hein, aur jiss dil mein pyar na ho woh shaitaan ka ghar hota hai.
Ab sunne mein yeh bhi aya hai ke apne dushman se bhi pyar karo to dushmani bhi khatam ho jaati hai? Kiss had tak yeh sahi hai? Yeh wohi jaane jiss ne eisa kabhi kiya ho!

Kia ek ladki ko apne rapist se pyar ho sakta hai kabhi? Rapist yane balatkaari! Ek balatkaari se kissi ladki ko pyar ho sakta hai? Kia yeh mumkin hai?
Iss sawaal ka jawaab iss kahani mein aap ko ek eisi ladki se milegi jissko apne rapist se pyar hua. Magar keise aur kyun hua, halaat keise the, kiss ki haalaat kiss se judi hui thi, eisa kyun hua, rapist kaun tha, usski kia kahani thi, usska kia assar pada ladki par, aur ladki ki kia assar para rapist par….. Yeh sab kahani padhne ke dauraan aap sabko pata chalega.
Yeh Shayana aur Samir ki kahani hai. Inko haalaat ne kiss tarah milaya aur kaun si mod par kiss ko kiss se pyar hua kahani padhne ke baad aap ko pata chalega.


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Introduction
Some appreciative comments from this thread and some of my replies as well.
Update 1 - Shanaya
Update 2 -Samir
Update 3 - Tough training continues
Update 4 - More About Samir
Update 5 -Termination of training, but to stay stand by! Relax moments at last.
Update 6 -Sea guarding – away from the world – Samir missed love
Update 7 - Back to earth amongst dear ones – Afzal gets married
Update 8 -Samir & ?? (his girlfriend’s name?)
Update 9 - The especial meeting
Update 10 - The special meeting continued….
Update 11 - Wedding of Samir & Samira
Update 12 - Both friends after wedding
Update 13 - Changes in the livinghood
Update 14 - Afzal behaves odd!
Update 15 - Afzal locked up! Samir back
Update 16 - The friends together again
Update 17 - Samir becomes violent
Update 18 - The plan of both friends
Update 19 - Afzal with Samira
Update 20 - Samir back home next morning
Update 21 - Afzal at Samira’s again B...U…T….
Update 22 - Afzal’s dismissal from Comandos & surprise
Update 23 - Samira betrayed
Update 24 - Afzal on the way
Update 25 - Samir & Afzal back to the flat – Samira gone, but left something
Update 26 - Samira’s life
Update 27 - Afzal calls Samira
Update 28 - Both friends drunk and Shanaya passes by
Update 29 - Samir looking for Shanaya & Afzal and Samir what??
Update 30 - Samir stars planning after being promoted
Update 31 - The sugar cane field and Shanaya
Update 32 - Shanaya kidnapped
Update 33 - At the sugar cane field
Update 34 - Inside the field
Update 35 - The Rape
Update 36 - The Rape part II
Update 37 - Still inside the field
Update 38 - Geting ready to return
Update 39 -The state of mind of both after the rape
Update 40 - The terrorist Attack and what Shanaya discovered
Update 41 - Shanaya very upset and worried
Update 42 - Samir texed her more sensitive words
Update 43- Shanaya’s collegue – a huge problem
Update 44 - Samir misunderstands
Update 45 - Samir goes away again
Update 46 - Suspense
Update 47 - It happened but…
Update 48 - KEISA JUNOON?
Update 49 - People doubt
Update 50 - Shanaya in trouble
Update 51 - Shanaya discovers that…
Update 52 - The SMS
Update 53 - Samir back
Update 54 - The Romantic meeting
Update 55 -Both back in the field once more
Update 56 - Both Still in the underground
Update 57 - The sexual encounter with love
Update 58 - Inside “Hamara Ghonsla”
Update 59 -At Shanaya's place Samir in mental turmoil
Update 60 - Samir with Shanaya at her home
Update 61 - Samir with his dad
Update 62 - Trouble again
Update 63 - The separation and …..
Update 64 - The detective
Update 65 Diwali especial THE END











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Some appreciative comments from this thread and some of my replies as well.

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Originally Posted by kabira91 View Post
shanaya ki khubsurti aur uski khushnuma zindagi ki bahut hi behtarin tashveer rakhi hai aapne. Achhi shuruat keh sakte hain. Casinar ji aap bahut purane writer hain. Lekin main pehli baar aapki kahani padh raha hoon. Aap spelling mein thodi sudhaar karein. best of luck
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congratulations sir ji for new story.....ummid h ki ye story bi apki aur stories ki tarah superhit story hogi....bahut achha shuruat kiya h...waiting for next update
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Congrats dear for new thread

i really missed you here a lot for long long long time...


i hope i will find here a regular update


thanks


keep writing

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Casi Bhai for new story.
Hindi story section aap ko bahut miss kiya bhai.
Intro jitna zabardast tha, pehla update us se bhi bhadkar.
Shayana ki jo tasveer hamare dil main banayi hai uska kya kehna.
Adhbut aur atulniye chitran kiya hai Shayana ka. Uski soorat aur seerat per to char chand laga diye bhai. Ab dekhna yeh hai ke aisa kon ho sakta hai jo is apsra swaroopi ladki ko bedaag karne per aamada ho geya aur aisa kya hua ke Shayana ko us se he pyar ho geya.
Bhai keep updating.

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chachu tumhari kalam mein jadu hain app readers ko attract karna janta ho

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bahut badiya update shanaya ka character apna massom aur bahut mature likha hain very well written chachu keep it up
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update 2

Nice update doston ke beech ka conversation bahut hot aur mazedaar tha. Har naujawan ka dard yahi hai. Ladkiyon ne jeena haraam kar diya hai. Khash kar sameer jaise sharif logon ka.
Sameer training mein awwal aa raha hai. Dekhte hain uski kismat use shanaya se kab milati hai.
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Casi bhai, Second update bhi zabardast tha.
Sameer ke man ki baaton ko anukool tarike se utarker aapne hame uska chitran bakhubhi karwaya hai. Maza aageya.
Ladkiyon ke bare main uski soch ekdam sahi hai. Sab sali aisi he hoti hain.
Rahi baat uski training ki to bahut he kathin odar se guzar chuka hai Sameer aur ab Ist commando ke roop main uski selection uske liye baut he behtar inaam hai.
Dekhte hain ke aage kya hota hai.
Sameer aur Shayana ki mulakaat kab hoti hai aur kab kahani aisa mod leti hai ke Sameer ne uska rape kar diya.

REPS pending.
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chachu tum kya likta ho zabardast update character likna koi app sein likha phela shanaya Aur aab samir zabardast chachu keep it up u r a inspiration to many young writer's in xossip and everywhere else Sorry Chachu NTS

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Casi bhai, ekdam jhakkas update raha bhai.
Training academy ko bahut kareeb se dekha hai aapne shayad.
Itne rules, sala apun ka to bheja fry ho geya. Sach main yar kamaal ki mehnat ki hai is update per.
Udhar Samir bhi kamaal ki mehnat karne main laga hai. Lagta hai wo is training ke douraan fouladi jism ke sath sath ek pathar-dil insaan bhi ban jayega. Aakhir itni yatnayein bhogne ke baad koi sehaj kaise reh sakta hai.
Bhai update dete raho to dil ko thandak padti rahegi.
Keep updating and keep rocking bhai.
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good going story....aur shandaar update...aage kya hota h janne ke liye bahut utsuk...waiting for next update..
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I must say that the details you have put in regarding the training is well researched, you really did the homework well, I did not read the whole but had a glance, it's eye opener for readers to understand the hardship a Commando goes in and what a misuse our politicians are doing. Keep going man
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Abhi tak ki story bahut hi lajwab rahi hai casi bro. Apne sanaya ka kirdar bahut khubsurti ke sath ukera hai.uske har pahlu ka apne badi sanjidgi se chitran kiya hai.
apne samir aur uske dosto k beech baton ko ekdum vastivik roop me pes kiya hai.
Aur apne to training ki puri detail hi de Di hai uske niyam kayde kanoon kya baat hai casi bro. Bahut hi behtareen start.
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Ek ke baad ek jhakaas update chap rahe ho Casi bhai. Samir ki training khatam hone ke baad ka pehla task sach main dil dehla dene wala tha.
Samir to sach main ek patthar dil aur kadak noujawan ban geya hai. Uska bas chalta to wo har ek dangai ko pakad pakad ker marta. Tab jaker uske dil ko thandak pahunchti. Samir ka yahi ravaiya shayad uske dwara kiye jane wale rape ka karan banega. Duniya se kat ker ek insaan kab tak sabhay reh sakta hai, Tamsik pravriti ka jagrit hona to lazmi hai bhai.
for such a great effort.
Keep updating.
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casinar ji maine aapka bda naam suna is site par bahut hi charchit person hain aap.axba bahut hi tarif krte the aapki apne thread me.vaise mai axba ka fan tha phir jab axba se jab maine aapke baare me jaana tab se mai aapka b fan hua.maine aapki story faraar padhi hai.vaise axba kahi najar nai aa rahe hain.kya unhone is site ko chhod diya hai ya kuch aur baat hai.leave it.mai is story ko padh kr comment dunga.
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casinar is back with a bang...
keep it up sirji..
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waah casi bhai waah

aapne kaise bhi sahi mujhe apni story me le hi liya

ab dekhna ye hai ki sameer or shanaya ki mulakat kya naya rang le kar aati hai

behad dilchasp mod par le aaye ho aap kahani ko

next update ka badi besabri se intajaar rahega



ur awesome writer u my dear
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Sach bataun aapko kashi bhai bahut dino baad ek leek se hatkar ek naye raste par sarpat daudati hui bahut hi achhi dil mein alag ahsaas dilane waii story padhi hai.aasha krta hun ki ye story aishe hi hum readers ko entertain krti rahegi.waiting next
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Update to zabardast tha he lekin pehli mulakat kya zabardast karwayi hai bhai.
Samir ko pata bhi nahin ke use kisi ladki ne dekh liya hai aur shayad man he man pasand bhi kar liya hai. Wahin dusri aur Samir ke khawabo- khayal main Shayana naam ki koi ladki hai he nahin.
Sach main badi vichitr mulakaat thi. Samir aur Shayana dono ka he shadi ke liye inkaar karna dono ki zindagi main toofaan lane wala hai.
Samir ka jo chitran hamare zehan main basaya hai uske liye shat shat naman bhai.
Bada he kathor dil aur duniya se alag manushay ke chitran karna behad durgam hota hai bhai aur tumne ise bade he saral shabdon main prastut kar diya. Sach main kamaal ka likhte ho bhai.
Keep updating.
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Reading this story a while... And read all the updates..

Story plot is unusual really very different selection ... and different writing too..

Training part ko jis tarah describe kiya hai vo sach mein brilliant tha..so far very good very good begning....

Shanya charcyer jaisa sabhi ne kaha really baht hee cute aur behad pyara hai...

Par mujhe kuch kuch jagh laga ki kahani ko khicha gaya in someplace...apart from tht... till now story is going very well..

Waiting for the next update...!!

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Kahani ka title bahut hi attractive hai padhkar maza aayega. bhai aabhi kai sare threads parallelly padh raha hoon is wajah se thoda time lag sakta hai main bahut jald aapki kahani se judunga.
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vastav me aapne vipatti me phanse vyakti ki awdharna kya hoti hai iska bakhubi chitran kiya samir k madhyam se is story k ukt update me.keep it up kas bhai.

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Casinar bhai hats off to you hum to kayal ho gyi aapki writting ability se, maja aa gya ye story padh k humtoh aapki aajkal ''AUR EK PREM KAHANI PADH RAHE H'' but socha ye kahani b padh k dekhte hai kaisi h... Ye to aur umda story h.... Aapki farar toh padh li h maine... Aur ek baat aapne jo iss story me samir aur shanaya ka introduction diya h na age wise superb h.. Koi writter age wise itna achha intro nhi deta h... Keep writting bro...

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waah kitna shandaar shabdo ka jaal buna hai ki padkar aisa lag raha hai mano me khud ye sab kar raha hun




lajwaab

bilkul realty me le gaye aap apne readers ko







is seen ko likhna itna asaan kaam nahi tha lekin aapne jis khubsurti se drashya ko uprastut kiya hai wo wakai me prashansniye hai


pure update me ek bhi line aisi nahi mehsoos hoti jo banawti lage sach much ka drshya prateet hota hai ,,


casi bhai aap ki ye pehli story hai jisko me shuru se pad raha hun or maje ki baat ye bhi hai ki is kahani me mujhe itna maja aa raha hai ki bar ar update chek karne aata hun ,,


:you are awesome
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Bahut hi behtareen update casi bro
shanaya k dil k andar uthne Wale prashno ko apne bahut hi behtareen dhang se prastut kiya hai.uske dil me ho rhi samir ke liye uthte huye bhawo ko achche roop me dhala hai. Uske dil me samir k liye Dabe huye bhav samir ki shadi ki baat jankar ubhar aye hai. Really a nice update casi bro.
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Nice One Casi dear jaise jaise kahani parhti ja rahi hun dilchuspi barhti ja rahi hai

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khusurat update.ek stri k manobhavon ko saphalta k sath chitran kiya hai aapne.sanaya k man mein samir ne ghar kr liya hai.ye lekhak k lekhani ki saphalta ko darshati hai ki ek uchit samay pr uchit manobhavon ko darshaya jaye jo aapne bakhubi kiya hai.stri man k pachatave aur prem k samagam ka adbhut mishran dekhane ko yahaan mila jo ki hindi k jo purane jamaane k lekhakon me milta tha saath hi saath aadhunikta ko bhi nahi chhoda hai jo aapke andar k ek criative lekhak ko darshata hai.aise hi sabhi update k intajar mein.
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update 4
nice update casi bhai. dange mein sameer ke bhayanak roop ko sahi dhang se dikhaya hai aapne.

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Casi bhai yeh to sarasar zulm ho raha hai Dono naye vivahit jodo per.
Raat ko duty barkraar karwate hue inko tadpana theek nahin.
Kahin kuch gadbad no ha jaye bhai. Dono he dost bekraar hain aur wahin unki biwian bhi tadap rahi hongi.
Waise subha subah sex karne ka maza sach main aur he hota hai jab ladki ekdam fresh ho.
Maza aa geya bhai. Samir aur afzal ki tarah apun ko bhji adjustment karni padi.

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Bhai ab kahani me twist aya h.... Ye shireen ka lafda lag rha h kisi k sath.... Kuch toh jhol h bhai....?
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ek naya suspense aur ladies secret

its hard to wait

update soonest
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13@ is update ko kal main nahi padh paya tha aaj padh kr reply kr qha hun.aakhir afjal ki bv kiske saath gayi ek new suspense creat kiya aapne ek achha turn diya is story ko.ek baat samajh nai aayi ki samira aur sairein lesbian hain ya kuch aur mattar hai.aasha krta hun isko jald hi aap open karenge.update more

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Shuruwat bahut aachi hai aur aaj hi Pehla update padha shananya ka life simple hai aur aab wo apne pariwar mein help kar rahi hai ab dekhna ye hai ki shananya ke zindagi mein kaun sa mod aata hai. very nice update dear.
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aakhir kiska murder kr diya afjal ne.ek par ek suspense dalte jarahe hain aap.ye wastav me love story hai ya suspense thriller.ye to aage chalkar pta chalega.waiting next
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Nice update casi bro ek jabradaast suspance ke saath
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Update 13
nice update casi bro
Abhi tak story bahut hi rochak ho gayi hai.in dono jodo ki mauj masti ko badiya roop diya hai. samir aur afzal ki duty me ferbadal ho gaya hai aur ek dusre k sath rahne k liye badi koshish kar rhe hain.
Aur ye afjal ki bibi sherin kiske sath ja rhi hain.Dekhte hain age kya hota hai.
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Update 14
bahut hi behtareen update. isme bahut sare twist aye.pahle ajmal ka yu vyvhar parivartan aur uska samir ki baat p ekdum se jhallana. Aisa lagta hai shayad use shirein ki kisi baat pata chali hai.
Samira ka shirein se mil kar ana aur uska bahan se golmol baate karna kuchch aur hi darshata hai.
Aur ajmal ne kiska murder kiya hai shayad apni wife ka.bahut sare prshn uth rhe hain
dekhte hain age kya hota hai.

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thanks kavya and aar ki baki dears .....

Muthh dear, i just updated innocent wife today... now you are talking of "the incestuous encounter of a bahu" well there i got to take a break after so may updates, a break was important after 173 updates, but that story is left incomplete because they still have a long way to go with sarjoo story 122 updates as well. both are incest stories and like mega serials they will still move on... but this story is one which will be completed and not hanged, so i give priority to threads which have an end. Hoe you got me dear, and thanks for support on that other thread
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SHIREEN Ka Murder Hua Hai Ye Toh Confirm Hai Dusra Murder Kiska Hua Shayad Yaha Se Kahani Mein Naya Mod Ayega AFZAL K Saath-Saath SAMEER Ki Zindagi Mein Bhi Badlau Ayenge SHAYAD
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Aaj aapka dusara update padha samer ke bare mein uska selection aab commandos mein ho gaya aur bahut kabil officer ke roop mein. dekhte hain aage kya hota hai very nice update bro
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Casi Bhai ek ke baad ek fadu update diye ja rahe ho.


Keep updating and entertaining.
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Update 15
nice update casi bro.samir k andar chal rhe uthal puthal ko bahut hi badiya dhang se samne laye hain.
Uska mastisk poori tarah ajmal aur uski baato me uljha hua hai.
Samir ka boat se wapas lautna aur sameera k paas use dilasa dena. Sach me badiya vyakt kiya hain.
Par ajmal ne kin do logo ka murder kiya hai ye abhi tak saaf nhi hua.shayd shirein aur uske kisi dost ka. Dekhte hain sameera samir se kya kahti hai.
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Update 16
nice update again casi bro is update me to clear ho gaya ki ajmal ne shirein aur uske dost ko mara hain.
Sameera samir k prshno se kafi ghabra rhi hai kahin wo shirein aur uske dost k baare me to nhi janti hai
Ajmal ki samir ne bail kara Di hai. Ab ajmal samir se apni bibi k murder ka reason bata rha hai aur uski baato se samir ka sameera par bhi vishwas dagmaga rha hai.
Story me bahut sare dilchasp mod aa rhe hain.
Dekhte hain age kya hota hai.
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Bhai Ab tak 3 updates padh ke ho chuke hai.............................

Story toh bahot hi interesting lag rahi hai......................................



86442 + 10 = 86452
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Dear Casi Bhai Such Main Story Bahot hi Interesting Lag rahi Hai..........................

Ab Tak Sameer Aur Sameera ki Shaadi Aur Shayana ke Armanon ko Tutata huya Padh raha hoon............................

Hope Aage Kuch Mazedaar Hoga...................................

Best Wishes to the Story.....................

Already Rated the Story with 5 STARS....................
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Marvelous chachu. Hats off to you. Aap ek behad hi umda lekhak hai is baare me koi do-ray nahi hai.

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bahut hi alag vichar vyakt kiye hain aapne is last update k madhyam se ki aurat ko to upar wala nahi samajh paya ham jaise sadharan inshan kya khak smjhenge.yani samira ne apna asli roop dikha hi diya hamsab ko but samir afjal bechare pagal thahre unhe to triya-charitra ke baare me kuch b nai pta bechare samira k jaal me phans gye.
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Story bahut hi rochak dhang se badti ja rhi hai. ab sameera ne afjal ko badiya javab dekar use samjha diya hai.
Afjal aur sameer dono ko sameera k charecter k sahi hone p pura bharosa ho gaya hai.
Par ye phone aur ye muskrahat ka kya raaj hai
kya sameera sach me jaise in logo ko dikhti hai vaise hai...?
Ya ye sab uska dhong hai.
kuchch na kuchch to chchipa hai is sabke pichche.
Dekhte hain age kya hota hai.
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Bahut hi shandar update bhai
sach me afjal ki dismissal ki ceremony ko apne jis tarah se dikhaya wakai ye emotional kar dene wala tha.
Afjal aur samir k dard ko apne bahut badiya darshaya hai akhir afjal ki itne salo ki mehnat aur uske khwab Jo toootkar bikhar rhe the.
Aur Ajmal ka sath shayd yahan tak tha. Ab wo in sabko chchod ke chala gaya hai Sayd hi wapas aye.
Ab ye naya twist sameera k sath uske flat me kaun hai Jo uske sath is halat me hain ye wo phone wala banda to nhi.
Ab samir kya karega.............
Bahut hi rochak mod pe story ruki hai dekhte hain age kya hota hai.
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zabardast twist Mara hai apna story main chachu hosh uda diya
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nice update bhai

jabardast twist ab kya krega sameer dekhte h

Ab lgta h afzal ne jo kiya vo shi tha fir bhi aage kya hota h iska intzaar rhega
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update 5
apni kasam ye wala scene bilkul mere real life ke scene se match karta hua tha. Main bhi shadi nahi karna chahta tha par ghar walon ne mujhse puchhe bagair rishta tay kar diya tha. Gusse mein maine keh diya ki main ladki nahi dekhunga, luli langdi jaisi bhi ho mere gale baandh do. Sara dosh aap logon par jaayega. Par main ladki nahi dekhunga. Mere do doston ne dhokhe se mujhe ladki ke ghar le jaakar aise hi baitha diya tha jaise sameer ko uske ghar walon ne bithaya tha.

Bahut badhiya update tha casi bhai. Kahani dilchasp hoti ja rahi hai.
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Kitni Mushkilo Ka Saamna Kar K Yaha Tak Pahuncha Tha AFZAL, Sirf Ek Ghalti Ne Uski Saari Mehnath Par Paani Phir Gaya Bechare Ko Bohath Be-Izzat Kar K Nikala Gaya



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Story abhi Sirf aghaz mein lag rahi hai .... Story ke naam aitbar sy abhi kahani ka aghaz baki hai i think sahi maino mein yeh story yunhi chalti rahi to mumkin hai story Of the Year bn jaye ... Crry On Dear ...
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Behtareen update casi bhai
smir ne un dono ko jis halat me dekh kar khud p control kiya sach me uske liye ye kafi mushkil pal the.
Uske andar chalne wale utar chadav ko apne bahut behtareen dhang se prastut kiya hai.
Humare Dil par jab kabhi koi gahri chot lagti hai to us waqt kaisi halat hoti hai ye apne samir k madhay se badiya chitran kiya hai
samir puri tarah toot gaya hai.ab afjal use Sahara dene aya hai dekhte hain age kya hota hai.
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jabardast update bhai shi kiya sameer ne jo apne aap pe control kr liya fir bhi use kisi bhi trh sameera ko sbk sikhana chahiye

Phle pta to chle ki in dono ke bich ki kya story h agle update ka intzar rhega
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Nyc Update...
I have read few stories of u.. very nyc writing style
But ur last portion of evry story make me cry. Really heart touching ur last portion of evry story
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Update 5 bahut behatreen update bro to sammer apne ghar wapas aa gaya aur uske papa ab uski shadi karwana chahte hain aur wo sammer ko bin bataye shananya ke ghar le gaye. magar dono aabhi shadi nahi karna chahte dekhte hain unki zindagi mein kaun sa mod aata hai
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aakhirkar samira pakdi gayi apne yaar k sath sote hue.aur ye achha kiya samir ne jo samira ko chhod diya mara nahi but mere mutabik use koi to sja deni chahiye thi jisase samira sari jindagi apne kiye pr pchhtati aur aage ki jindagi khoon k aansu roti aur wo saari jindagi ye sochati ki kaash maine aisa na kiya hota.anyway update vary interesting.
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u chachu dil chu Lena wala update diya
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'nympho' ek new word ka knowledge hame sir g.dekhate hain ki is sms k baad samir ki life me kya bdlaw aate hai aur samir kya decision leta hai.ye fix hai ki story jabardast mod(turn) lene wali hai.aur afjal kya sochata hai aage k liye samira k baare me.by the way nice update.waiting next
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Casi Bhai
Samira ne to apne rang dikha diye.
Samir is wakt bahut depressed hai.
Ab dekhna yeh hai ke uska agla kadam kya hoga.
Keep updating bhai.
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Behtareen update casi bhai
jaise jaise samira ki haqiqiat samne ati ja rahi hai us vishay me janne ki hum logo ki ustsukta badti ja rhi hai.
Afjal ke sath sath hum sab ko bhi uske is roop ko dekh kar hairani ho rhi hai
ab dekhte hain uske aur kaun se pahlu samne ate hain.
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bahut hi dil ko dehla dene wala tha ye update. jis tarah beech sagar mein sameer aur uske sathi dekhte hain wo is musibat ka kaise samna karte hain.
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4 u bro

A fantastic Writer
Very nice story

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casi bhai 4 century in very short time
relly superb
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for 100 page casi bhai
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Behtareen update casi bro
sameera khud k kiye ko galat jaan kar bhi aisa karne se khud ko rok kyon nahi pa rhi ye apne uske madhyam se badiya roop me samne rakha hai.
"Libido" ka kya khoob describe kiya hai.kafi rochak jankari Di hai apne.
Ab age samir ki jindgi me naye mod ane wale hai.ab wo kaun sa rashta akhtiyar karta hai...?..dekhte hai.
Agle update ka wait rhega casi bhai
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good update bhai
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100 pages pure hone k liye badhai casi sir.thodi der se badhai de rha hun sir g time nai mila login krne ka.
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Aur Mubarak ho for 100 pages
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2 hafte aur 4 din huwe hein sirf aur 100 pages






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Behtareen Update CASI BHAI
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SAMEERA Ka Toh Chapter Close Ho Gaya Ab SAMEER Ki Zindagi Mein Kya Naya Mod Ata Hai Yeh Dekhna Hai
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Originally Posted by Prakash verma View Post
Nice update,bhai ye samira to randi se bhi jyada battar hai...
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Originally Posted by P1lovely View Post
Update 27

story bahut sare mod ek sath le rhi hai.aslam ka khud k prati akarshan sameera ko pahle se pata tha.ab to ye dono k samne khul chuka hai.aur aslam k samne samir ko dokha dene wali baat nhi rhi.kyonki ab sameera ka samir se koi rishta nhi rha.
Phir bhi ye baat jab samir k samne ayegi to use bada dhakka lagega aur abhi to usko sameera ki puri haqiqat ka bhi pata nhi hai.
Dekhte hain age kya hota hai.
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as always nice update
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Originally Posted by rdxhot View Post
nice update bhai
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Originally Posted by aditya1991 View Post
update-26reply.libido shabd ka arth aaj maine jana jise maine facebook pr like kiye gaye page se jana tha.waise samira jaisi ladki ko dekhkr uske vishay me jaankr kisi k bhi muh me pani aa skta hai.to afjal bhi to jawan ladka hai to swabhawik hai ki uski bhi niyat kharab hi hogi.waise ladko ki to prabritti hi hoti hai ki koi bhi ladki dekhi nahi ki muh se lar tapkna chalu mai sabhi ladkon ki baat nahi kr rha hun.then waiting next
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update 27 reply-dekhate hain ki kya afjal samira k pass jata hai ya nahi.agar jata hai to kya krta hai aur samira aur afjal ka chapter close kaise hota hai nd bcoz ye lead role mein nahi hai to ye kb tak thread mein se kaise hatte hain kyonki yetopic kuch jyada khich rha hai.
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Nice update,lagta he samir bibi ke sadme se jyada hi bhokhala gaya hai ,ab story me interesting mod aane wala hai...dekhate hai aage kya hota hai
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Originally Posted by ksumit752 View Post
Bhai Sameer aur Shayana ko Milane ke liye bahot hi bada Plot Bana Dala...................

Waiting for next update........................
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Shaandar Updates CASI BHAI
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jabardast update bhai
Story ab apne plot pr aa rhi h
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main part of the story has begin now


nice update
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yani ab rape ka woqt aa gya hai.aur jab sanaya ,samir ko dekhegi to kya reaction hoga ye sochkr romanch generate ho rha hai.nice update sir.waiting next
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Originally Posted by The_lost_love View Post
Bhai aapne to gand hi phad di... Ye samira to badi wali randi nikali... Hey bhagwan.. Kya bhai har ladki aisi hi hoti h kya? Apne to mere dil me b shaq bhar diya h...
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very hot update

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sath hi sath Samir aur Afzal ki dosti tutne ka bhi dukh hai..
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faadu pdate bhai
Isne in dono ki dosti bhi khtm kr di shi h yar

Ab story me aur jyada mza aane lga h
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kuch aisi hi aasha kiya tha maine samira k baare mein.yani samira apni chal me kamyaab ho hi gayi.aur samir aur afjal ki dosti todne me kamyab ho gayi.nice update.waiting next.
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Ab story bahut jabarjast ho gayi hai casi bhai.ye story apne main track pe dhire dhire aa rhi hai.
Shanaya ki bhi ab wapsi ho gayi hai. Aur samir ka ladki ko dekhne ka nazriya bhi badal gaya hai.
Uski nazar me duniya ki har ladki sameera k tarah dikhti hai.
Aur ab to afjal aur sameera k is wakiye k baad wo poori tarah toot gaya hai.
Dekhte hain age kya hota hai.

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nice update

bahut saatir dimaag hai samir

achche se plan kar raha hai..

dekhte hain aage kya hota hai
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Behtareen update casi bro
samir shanaya ko fansne k liye poori tarah apna jaal bichcha rha hai.
Ab wo sahi galat samjhane ki sari shakti kho chuka hai.
Shanaya ko bina kisi jurm k saza dene ja rha hai
dekhte hain age kya hota hai.
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kasi sir mujhe aapki bhojpuri pasand aa gayi.vaise samir kuch galat kr rha hai aur apne rights ka galat fayada utha rha hai iski khabar agar uske head quarter ko ho gayi to fans skta hai samir.aur shayad isiliye aapne uske adhikaron ka bakhan kiya hai.its my only guess.ye galat bhi ho skta hai.nice update.waiting next

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update 7 padha jis tarah sameer aur uske saathi samundari khatron se bachkar wapas aayein ussey dekhney to to nahin lagta tha ki wo sab bach payengey. aur khushi ki baat ye hain ki aab sameer ne bhi saadi ke liye haan keh di hain. aab dekhna ye hain ki uski zindagi mein kaun aati hain... very nice update bro...............
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Originally Posted by Prakash verma View Post
Update 29 bahut hi hot update tha casi bhai ,ise story ka ab tak ka sabse jyada hot update,lekin afzal or samir ki dosti tutne ka bhi dukh hua,shayad isme bhi samira ki koi planning thi, ya wo pagal ho gai hai mere khayal se...dekhate hai aage kya hota hai
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update 6
Very thrilling update

Ek ek shabd rochakta se paripurn tha. Padhte waqt palak tak nahi jhapki, ab tak ka sabse best update tha ye. behtarin writing ka pradarshan kar rahe hain casi bhai.
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Originally Posted by Prakash verma View Post
Update 30 bhi mast update tha casi bhai,samir ke haath me kai power aa gayi hai,shanaya ke liye bhi usne bahut khatarnak planning kar li hai,ab lag raha ki story apne title par aa gayi hai...
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Bohath Khatarnaak Planing Kar Raha Hai SAMEER Toh SHANAYA K Liye SHAANDAR Update CASI BHAI
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Originally Posted by syed arshad View Post
Agle Update Ka Be-Sabri Se Intezar Rahega CASI BHAI
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Originally Posted by The_lost_love View Post
Bhai... Ab ye shayana chudne wali h samir se ..... But yaar bura lag rha h shayana k liye...
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Originally Posted by The_lost_love View Post
Bechari kitni sidhi item h shanaya... Aur aap uska samir se rape karwa rhe h..
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Originally Posted by kabira91 View Post
update 7

Very nice update casi bhai. Samir aur uske sathi samundra ki lehron se bach kar nikal aaye. lehron ke beech maut se jujhna waqai sher dil insaan ko bhi dara sakta hai. Aapne us mahaul ka bakhubi chitran kiya hai.

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update,shanaya sameer ke jaal me fansh gayi shayad
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update, story bahut hi interesting mod par pahuch chuki hai
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Originally Posted by aditya1991 View Post
mast update.ab story sanaya k character ko show krne wali hai aur story adhik romanchak ho jayegi.waiting next
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Originally Posted by P1lovely View Post
Behtareen update casi bhai.jis tarah apne samir ko ganne k khet me is tarah apna adda banate dikhaya hai sach me kya baat hai.
Wo bade hi shatir dhang se apna kaam karta ja rha hai.
Aur usne apna adda to badiya dhang se jama liya hai.
Shanaya ko bhi shayad samir hi nakabposh k roop me kidnap karne ja raha hai.
Story bada rochak mod p aa gayi hai.
Dekhte hain age kya hota hai.
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Originally Posted by The_lost_love View Post
Bhai update no. 29 bahut hi jabarjast tha... 2,2 khtke diye aapne... Ek to samira aur afzal ki suhagraat aur phir afzal aur samir ki dosti ka tutna....

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Update 8 bahut mast update bro to sameer ki sagai ho gayi sammera ke sath. aur dono pyar ki rahon par chal padey hain dekhte hain aage inka naseeb in dono ko kahan lekar jata hai.
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u chachu ur story
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Originally Posted by Cute Gunjan View Post
Story kafi achi jaa rahi ...
samir plans woowww... (y)
waiting for next

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brillant update chachu keep it up luv ur story
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update 8

behad matured writing
Kisi daarshanik ki tarah aapne aaj ki yuva pidhi ka chitran kiya hai. bahut gehra anubhav rakhte hain aap. Main samajh sakta hoon ki hindustani na hokar bhi hindi mein likhna kitna mushkil rehta hoga aapke liye. Lekin aapne is update mein shabdon ki kami mehsus nahi hone di. Great update
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wah re shanaya ki masumiyat.iski masumiyat to dil ko ghayal kar gayi.sach jabardast taur pr likhate hain aap.aise hi likhte rahiye janaab nd hame entartain krte rahiye.

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SHANAYA Itni Masoom Hai Jo Kidnaping Aur Tv Game Show K Baare Mein Nahi Pata
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Originally Posted by syed arshad View Post
Nice Update CASI BHAI
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Casi bhai
Bhai apun ne kuch din ki chhuti kya li tumne to sabki chutti kar di.
Bhai is kahani ko chhodker kahin aur jane ka dil he nahin karta. It is one of the best story I have read on Xossip in my life till now.
It includes everything to glue the readers.

Bhai Shayana ko kisi mask pehne aadmi ne gadi ke andar se hath pakad ker kheench liya hai. Yahan tak pad chuke hun.
Jald he baki ke updates padker review dunga. Is update se andaza lagta hai ke aage ke updates hot hone wale hain.
Ek guzarish hai bhai. Kahani rape per aadharit hai to main chahta hun ke rape aisa ho ke sadiyon tak aisa rape scene koi likh na paye aur hamare dimag main is tarah bas jaye ke bas sochte he sab kuch khada ho jaye
Ho sake to mera fav, scene bhi dalna. Tum shayad sex main mera fav. scene jante he honge. Waisa bhi Xossip aur real life main main "Ass Fucker" ke naam se mashoor hun.
Mera ishara to samaj he gaye honge bhai.


with
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Nice update casi bro
story bahut behtareen mod pe hai samir ne akhirkar shanaya ka kidnap kar hi liya.
Par kidnap hoti shanaya ka bholapan dil ko chchu gaya.vaise shanaya ka rape hota dekhkar thoda bura to lagega.
Par lagta hai ye shanaya hi hain Jo samir ka auraton ko dekhne ka nazriya badalne wali hai.
Jo bhi ho kahani apne asli bindu par aa chuki hai.
Dekhte hain age kya hota hai.
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Originally Posted by aditya1991 View Post
sir g aaj two update dena.bahut excitement ho rahi hai.aur aaj update jaldi de do.kab se aapki thread pr aankhen bichhaye baithe hain.
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nice update sir.is update me gajab k imotions ka use kiya gya hai.aur isne to apni bv ka naam b bta diya hai aur sanaya to shayad janti hai samira ko aur yahi samir ki glti sanaya ko uski pahchan kra degi.waiting next
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Originally Posted by P1lovely View Post
behtareen update casi bhai
2-2 update aur pata hi nhi chalta kab khatm ho gaye. Kya jabarjast likha hai apne. Vaise story bahut rochak mod pe ruki hai. Shanaya k bholepan ka kya khoobsurat chitran kiya hai apne.
Ab shayad shanaya ka samir k jonoon se bachna mushkil hai.par wo shayd samir k dil me aurto k liye nazriya badal k rakh degi.
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Kya baat hai bhai ek din me do update wo bhi story ke intersting mod par...:read:
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anyone update ,last ke 3 update me shanaya ki masoomiyat ka bahut achhe se viwran kiya hai aapne,shanaya ka bholapan sach me dil ko chhu gaya...samir ko bhi baad me shanaya ke bholepan se hi apni galti ka ehsaas hoga...dekhate hai aage kya hota hai
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Bhai jabarjast update the dono... Maja aa gya.. Ab dekhte ye samir kaise leta h shanaya ki... Bechari...
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Originally Posted by The_lost_love View Post
bilkul sahi bola prakash bhai aapne...
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Originally Posted by syed arshad View Post
Waqai Mein Bohath Ache Tareeqe Se SHANAYA Ki Masoomiyath Ko Dikhaya Hai Aap Ne
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Ek-Saath Do Dhoke Kha Kar SAMEER Sach Mein Pathar Ho Gaya Hai SHANAYA ki Masoomiyath Ka Bhi Us Par Koi Asar Nahi Ho Raha Hai
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Bohath Shaandar Updates CASI BHAI
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Bhai jabarjast update hain dono

Maza aa gaya....


waiting for next
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gr8 story dude
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update 9

very nice update casi bhai. Sameer aur sameera dono ki tadap ne dono ko hotel ke kamre tak pahuncha diya. Aur bina kisi formality ke dono apni jigyashaon ko pura karne mein jut bhi gaye hain. Dekhte hain next update mein sameer aur sameera ka milan kitna anand se bhara hua milta hai.
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Originally Posted by Prakash verma View Post
Nice update casi bhai,dono update mast the kewal ek kami lagi mujhe ki shanaya ka rape ke dauran wo response nahi aaya jo ek ladki ka rape ke samay hota hai, bahut buri sthiti hoti hai rape ke samay ladki ki, haan sameer ke character ko aapne rape me bahut achhi tarah se dhala hai,use se pratit ho raha tha ki rape ho raha hai....
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Originally Posted by a.d rock View Post
mast update casi bro kahani bahot achi ja rhi hai maine apki ye b to mohabat h, ek aur prem kahani ek silent reader ki trha padhi 2no hi bahot umda story umeed ye kahani b lajawaab hogi.
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Originally Posted by Cute Gunjan View Post
Vry Nyc update...
I m read only to the Inside the field..
Sanaya ki baatein bhut hi cute thi.. Aur samir ka gussa bhut jyda acha tha.. aisa laga raha ki koi nok jhok chal rahi thi...

Baki updates padh kar raply krugi tak tak please update...
One more thing actually i m not so gud in hindi then please yeh jaroo btna peshaani kya hot hai
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Originally Posted by lovenaeem88 View Post
nice updates bro.

waiting for next update bro.....?
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bade dharmsankat ki baat hai ki ab is update ko like karun to kaise.karan ye hai ki is story ki lead role shanaya k sath aisa hua.but kr bhi kya sakte hain ye to story ka theme tha ki rape hona hai.aakhir apne pasandida role ka rape hote kaun dekh sakta.ab to bs ye dekhna hai ki kis tarah se story ghumao leti hai apne main maksad ki taraf yaani ki shanaya nafrat ki jagah samir se mohabbat kaise krti hai.bs isi ka intajaar hai.thanx for this update
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Originally Posted by bondjamesbond09 View Post
dil dahlane wali update h

bhagwan shanaya ko ye sab sahan karne ki shakti de

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Originally Posted by P1lovely View Post
Badiya dhang se describe kiya sach me shanaya ke sath Jo ho rha hai wo na chahte huye bhi sweekar karna pad rha hai.
Ab shanaya k sath samir badi bedardi se pesh aa rha hai.
Samir k is ghinaune kary k baad shayd hi itni jaldi shanaya khud ko sambhal paye.
Aur jab use pata chalega ki jisese wo kabhi pyar k khwab sanjoti thi wohi uska rapist hai to uske Dil par kya bitegi.
Ab dekhte hain age kya hota hai.
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Originally Posted by kabira91 View Post
update 10 part 2

Sameer aur sameera ka milan to behad hot raha. hone wale husband ke saamne sameera ke haav bhav bilkul natural tha. Aapne us lamhe ka bahut khubsurti ke sath likha hai.
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Originally Posted by syed arshad View Post
SAMEER Toh Jaanwaro Jaisa Salooq Kar Raha Hai SHANAY K Saath Ye Episode Jaldi Khatm Karo CASI BHAI
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Originally Posted by rdxhot View Post
mast update bhai

5* rated
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bohot badhiya kahani hai casi bhai... maja aagaya kahani padh kar...

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Bhai bahut hi achcha update tha... But dukh hua... Shanaya k sath aisa hua to....
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Originally Posted by aditya1991 View Post
nafrat prem nd bhavanao ka mila jula sangam yahan dekhne ko mila .yah sab ek great writer hi likh sakta hai soch sakta hai.aapki to aapke virodhi bhi aapki badai karte hain.raka sir jaise member bhi aapki prashansha krte hain ye koi chhoti baat nahi hai.halanki kuchh kamiyan bhi hindi se related wo bhi naganya(verysmall)hi hain.nice update sir.waiting next.
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Awesome work bro.......

RATED 5*****
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Originally Posted by P1lovely View Post
behtareen update casi bhai
shanaya k sath rape karne ke baad smir ko ab pachchtawa ho rha hai par ab kya hota hai.
Shanaya poori tarah toot gayi hai phir bhi samir k liye uske dil me kahin na kahin hamdardi bhi hai.
Vaise Ab lagta hai samir kisi na kisi tarah shanaya se contact karne ki koshish karega.
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Bhai jabardast update hain dono

shabd nahi hain mere paas aapki tareef karne ko
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update 11

waah....kya update diya hai aapne

kuchh log is update ko filmi bhi keh sakte hain, magar aisa wohi log kahenge jo kisi kunwari ladki ki bhavna se anjaan ho. Shanaya ke dil sameer ke prati uthte zazbaaton par main bhi ek geet likhna chahta hoon.

"na jaane kyyn hota hai ye zindagi ke sath....
Achanaka ye mann kisi ke jaane ke baad...
kare phir uski yaad....
Chhoti chhoti si baat..."

Aisa hi hota hai. Jab koi achhi cheej aapke saamne ho aur aap use ignore karte hain. Tab wohi cheej, jab aapse chheen liya jaata hai to uski kami mehsus hoti hai. ye update mujhe bahut achha laga. Very nice, very sweet update.
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u chachu excellent storry

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aapki ki story me dam hai
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Very well written story with good narration....Eagerly waiting for next update.

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Update 9 behatreen update bro ye update kafi garma garam tha aur samir aur sameera ka conversation mast laga. aage jald padhkar second part ka reply doonga
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Pahla wala Nice update & dusra wala nice update tha khaskar ke end ka aadha update sach me mujhe bahut achha laga,samir ko apni galti ka ahasas ho gaya, shanaya ka aage ka expression bhi dekhana hai bhai ,ab kahani ko padhane me or interst aayega,update ko padh kar maza aa gaya aaj to buy one get one free....
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What happening nxt,pls bhai ab to update de do dekho 48 hour hone wale hai last update ko diye hua mere khayal se
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nice update sir.vaise ab to shanaya bhi samir se baat krne lag gayi ab lgta hai ki story turn legi but aapne kahaa tha ki ek lambi prakriya hogi shanaya ke samir se prem hone mein.isi k intjaar mein.
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Nice update bhai,pyar se bhara hua,maza aagaya padh kar
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Bohath Shaandar Update CASI BHAI
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Very Nice update Casi Bhai

Keep going

congrats for completing 150 page so fast..

keep this speed you will break all records
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kya baat hai casi bhai
samir ki ye bechaini kahin koi naya rang na khila de.
Samir ki shanaya k liye itni fiqr sach me ab shanaya se hi uski jindgi k rang badlane wale hai.
Na chahte huye bhi shanaya samir k baare me sochne lagti hai aur akhir usne samir ka phone utha hi liya.
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update 12

Sameer aur afzal ki apni apni patniyon ke baare mein baat cheet bahut mazedaar thi. unki farmayish thukra di gayi. Ab to aise hi tadpa karenge aur baaten kiya karenge.
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SHANAYA Kitni Masoom Hai Apna Dard Bhool Kar SAMEER K Liye Ro Rahi Hai Jisne Usko INa Bada Zakhm Diya Hai
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Bohath Bohath Shaandar Update CASI BHAI
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SAMEER Commando Hai ye Pata Chal Gaya SHANAY ko Magar Wo SAMEER Hi Hai Jisne Uski Zindagi Tabaah Kar Di ye Kab Pata Chalega SHANAYA Ko
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mast update tha sir ye.bhawuk update tha.ab ye dekhna hai ki shanaya ne to samir ko maaf kr diya.ab ye kaise baat kaise aage badhti hai.ye dekhna hai.
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jitni bhi tareef ki jaye kam hai

har update pshke aisa lagta hai jaise sab real ho raha hai aur hum ass pass hi hain

very nice update
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shaandaar..maja aa gaya casinar bhai
+25 reps added
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Bhai lagta h ab to item b fida ho gyi samir pe.....
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update 40
sach me bahut hi behtareen update shanaya k andar us nakabposh k liye nafrat aur pyar se bhare vichar uth rhe hai.
Jis tarah samir k atankvadiyo se bhidne se pahle usko msg kr mafi mangi aur apni haqiqat batayi shanaya k dil me uske liye nafrat kam hoti maloom pad rhi hai par shayd uska dil use itni jaldi maf na kare
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Very Nice Story. Waiting For The Update.

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Bhai this is not fair...aapki Ye story mujhe bahut pasand h... Isliye iske update mujhe jaldi chahiye... Waise ye bataiye innocent wife kis type ki story h... Tabi wo padhunga main... Usme incest rahega to maja nhi ayega... Story ka jara short me description dena bhai
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Last update awesome
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Achanak Se Aya Magar Idea Bohath Zabardast Aya BHAI Waqai Mein Kahani Ka Sabse Behtreen Update Hai
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Arey bhai...heera to hamesha hi chamakta rhta h uski tarif kya karun? Apke update hamesa hi solid rahte h to kya bolun aapko? Waise badhiya update tha.... Maja b aya tha but... Bus bhai bahut si bichadne wali love stories padhi... Iss story me shanaya ki setting karwa hi dena samir se end me...
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Originally Posted by Cute Gunjan View Post
Story going awesome.
Samir ka sms bhut hi ache se describe kiya hain...
hatss off to Ur writng style , narrration ...
i have no wordss to say anything.

Keep writing ... and waiting for next
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Originally Posted by bondjamesbond09 View Post
nice update

Akhir Shanaya ne Samir ko maaf kar hi diya..

aur uske dil mein samir ke liye pyar bhi jaga diya
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Originally Posted by The_lost_love View Post
Thanku bhai update dene k liye... Mast update tha... Ab dekhte h shanaya samir se kab milti h..
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Originally Posted by syed arshad View Post
Aakhir SHANAYA Ne Muaaf Kar Diya SAMEER Ko Bohath Bada Dil Hai SHANAYA Ka
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Superb Update CASI BHAI
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Jisne zindgi barbad ki usi se pyar kabhi socha na tha esa b hoga, par hota h esa, jo hume dard deta h usi ko ham chahne lgte h
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WOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWW ZABARDAST STORY HAI BHAI
BAHUT ACHA LIKH RAHE HAIN
SHANAYA KA CHARACTER BAHT ZABARDAST HAI KITNI MASOOM , SOFT HEARTED HAI. WOOOWWW
SAMIR K SATH B BAHT BURA HOWA
HAAR UPDATE ZABARDAST HAI
SAMIR BAHUT STRONG AUR BRAVE HAI
BAHUT BARA DIL HAI SHANAYA KA K PRAYING 4 HER RAPIST
4 UPDATE
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Mast update tha casi sir. Puri tarah bhavnao se bhara hua. Shanaya ka dil kaafi bada h. Nice update sir.

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update 13

Very nice update

Sheireen aur sameera ka secret...kya hai inka secret? Aur seireen kiske sath gayi? Kayi sawal uth rahe hain mann mein. Lovely update casi bhai
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Guru jhaakkkaaasssss update tha.... Ab age dekhte shanaya kya reply karti h samir ko
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Ghussa Aur Nafrath Mein Insaan Ki Sonch Aur Samajh Par Parda Padh Jata Hai Ache-Bure Ka Lehaaz Nahi Rehta Aisa hi SAMEER K Saath Hua Hai Ghusse Aur Josh Mein Ghalath Khadam Utha Toh Diya Magar Ab Pachta Raha Hai
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Superb Update CASI BHAI
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Ab Kahani Mein Aur Bhi Intrest Badh Gaya Hai Agle Update Ka Be-Sabri Se Intezar Rahega

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Some appreciative comments from this thread and some of my replies as well. continued from above post


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Originally Posted by munshi_ji.1 View Post
casinaar bhai, aaj aapki kahani ke 3 updates padha. Bahut hi shndaar kahani lagi. baaki ke updates baad mein padhunga.
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Originally Posted by A_O_M View Post
Casi bhai
Aaj do updates aur pad liye bhai.
Shayana apne ghar pahunch chuki hai aur bemari ka bahana banaker apne bistar per leti hui hai.
Samir ki call ko ignore karke usne shayad galti ki hai. Is se Samir aur khunkhar ho sakta hai. Dekhte haain aage kya hota hai.
Keep updating.
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Originally Posted by blacklisted_Akkkiiii View Post
Awwwwwssmmmm story casiner bhai.... :hatsoff: bhot hi badhiya . . Apki story me vo sb kuch h jo kisi padhne vale ko chahiye
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Originally Posted by P1lovely View Post
ab tak story sach me bade hi shandar dhang se age badi hai.shanaya k dil me samir k liye bhav badal rhe hain. wo uske prati chinchit hona ye daarshta hai.
Samir ke sms sach me to apne uske dil ka poora Hal shabdon me bayan kar diya hai.
Samir aur shanaya ki story ab prem kahani ka roop le chuki hai.
Dekhte hain ab in dono ki kahani me age kya kya utar chadav ate hai.
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Originally Posted by uzair3432561857 View Post
UPDATE 1
SHANAYA KITNI LOVELY
JAISE CHAMKTA HOWA STAR JO HAR KISI KO BAGAIR MATLAB K AIK JAISI ROSHNI DETA HAI
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Originally Posted by uzair3432561857 View Post
UPDATE 2
KITNA BURA HOWA YAR SAMIR K SATH
KAVITA KI WAJA SE SAMIR KI THINKING GALAT HOGAE
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Originally Posted by uzair3432561857 View Post
from 1-update 7
STORY BHHHHHHHUUUUUUUUTTTTTT ZABARDAST CHAL RAHI HAI
UUUFFFF ITNI HARD PRACTISE 4 COMMANDOS WOOOWWW
Shukar k tooofffaaann se sab khairiat k sath bach gae,
owwweeeesssuuuummmm update
waing 4 next updates

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Originally Posted by uzair3432561857 View Post
wooooowwww nice name
samir & samira
chalo samira se samir ki thinking tho change hoi about girls
nice going story
wooowww dono doston ki shadi hogae ye acha howa sudhar jaengay
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Originally Posted by thakur zaalim singh View Post
waah shanaya ke baare mein kitna achha likha hai aapne. Bahut achha.
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Originally Posted by kabira91 View Post
update 14

lagta hai dono ki biwiyon ka koi chakkar hai ghar se baahar. aur ye baat afzal ko maalum ho gaya hoga, yahi wajah hogi uske upset rahne ka. par ab lagta hai usne sheireen ka murder bhi kar diya. sameer ko jab ye pata chalega to pata nhai uski kya haalat hogi. dekhte hain aage kya hota hai. very intrestin update casi bhai
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Originally Posted by thakur zaalim singh View Post
Nice update bhai, sameer aur uske doston ka ladkiyon ke baare mein jo sochna hai wo bilkul sahi hai. Aaj kal ki ladkiyan aisi hi hoti hai
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Originally Posted by akela93 View Post
Update 5 tak padh liya. Training ke dauraan kya kya guzarti hai aapne bahut achha likha hai.
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Originally Posted by Prakash verma View Post
Update 42 me,sameer ke dwara likhe gaye sms me sameer ke dard ko bahut achhe se describe kiya hai aapne...
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Originally Posted by uzair3432561857 View Post
UPDATE 42
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWW ZABARDAST OWWWEEESSSUUMMM UPDATE BHAI
UUUUFFFFF INTI DUAEN SOOOO CUTE
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Originally Posted by uzair3432561857 View Post
AAARRRRAAAAYY AIK DAM SE KIA HOWA
KIA SHANAYA NE MAAF NAI KIYA SAMIR
WAISE ITNI JALDI MAAFI BANTI B NAI HAI
OWEEESSSUUUMMM UPDATE

WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE
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Originally Posted by P1lovely View Post

Behtareen update tha casi bhai
shanaya k rape ki baat reeta bhi jaan gayi hai. Wo shayad ab chup nhi baithne wali.
Ab lagta hai shanaya aur samir ki mushkile badhne wali hai.
Dekhte hain age kya hota hai.
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Originally Posted by munshi_ji.1 View Post
update 4 mein aapne danga wala part likha hai. Is update mein aapne sameeer ka jo gussa dikhaya hai wo ek dam sahi laga. uska jo gussa apne trainer officer par tha wo sab utaar diya.
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Originally Posted by kabira91 View Post
update 15

Afzal ke hathon do logon ka qatal...? Jarur usne shireen ka hi khoon kiya hoga. Sameer ki haalat to bahut buri hai par jab use saari sachai ka ilm hoga uske hosh ud jaayenge. Par asal baat to main bhi nahi jaanta ki usne kiska aur kis liye khoon kiya hai. Bas andaaza laga raha hoon ki usne apni biwi ki bewafai par tang aa kar uska aur uske bf ka qatal kiya hoga. Par dekhte hain next update mein kiska qatal hua hai. Very nice update bro
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Originally Posted by shashank068 View Post
shanya ka kirdaar aapne bahut achha likha hai. Kahani achhe plot par hai. Aage padh kar reply deta hoon
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Originally Posted by aditya1991 View Post
pyar mein galatfahmiyan to hoti he hain aur do dil galatfahmi ki wajah se alag ho jate hain.ab to story aur romanchak ho gayi hai.ab ye dekhna hai ki kis tarah se story aage badhti hai.waiting next
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Originally Posted by akela93 View Post
nice update samandar ke beech jahaaz wala scene bahut achha laga. Wo khaufnaak manzar hoga, ye wahi jaante honge jisne us pal ko dekha hoga
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Originally Posted by P1lovely View Post
sach me is update ne dono ke beech badhti nazdikiyon pe ekdum de break laga diya.
Jahan Shanaya ne reeta ki baato se tang akar samir se pyar ki baat sweekar kar li. Wahin reeta ki maa k sath aye policewalo ko dekhkar samir k shanaya se vishwas dagmaga gaya.aur bina haqiqat Jane hi wo shanaya se Sara rishta khatm karne ki soch kar chala gaya hai.
Dekhte hai ab kya hota hai
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Originally Posted by The_lost_love View Post
Bhai jaan ye kya jhol kar diya aapne... Apne hero ko heroin k khilaf kar diya aapne?
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Originally Posted by Bbjamboo View Post
aab intjar nahi hota jaldi se next update de hi do
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Originally Posted by aditya1991 View Post
commando office mein kya samir k baare mein kuch information mil payegi ya nai.office wale samir k baare mein kuch batayenge ki nahi.ye dekhna hai.ab dekhte hain aur kitne turn aate hain story mein.
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Originally Posted by kabira91 View Post
update 16

behtarin update casi bhai
afzal ne shireen ka khoon kar diya. par uske jagah koi bhi hota to yahi karta. koi bhi mard ye sahan nahi karega ki uski biwi kisi gair ki baahon mein machle. mujhe lagta hai sameera sab kuchh jaanti thi. aur ye bhi mimkin hai ki uske bhi najaayaz taaluqaat gair logon se ho. par dekhte hain, sameer uski sachai pata laga paata hai ya nahi.
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Originally Posted by munshi_ji.1 View Post
update 15 mein aapne jabardast twist daala haI. Afzal ke hatho murder...? Jarur usne apni biwi ka khoon kiya hoga. bahut badhiya update bhai
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Originally Posted by thakur zaalim singh View Post
Update 17 tak padha bhai. Sameer to sachmuch jaanvar ban baitha. Waise kahani kaafi intresting ho gayi hai.
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Originally Posted by Bbjamboo View Post
oh sir aap sahi the suspense to zyada badh gaya
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Originally Posted by sarika_jaiswal View Post
Romantic turn story keep rocking
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Originally Posted by The_lost_love View Post
Bhai de hi diya update... Acha tha... Bahut badhiya tha... Fantastic tha... Aur kaan khol k suno, jaldi jaldi update diya karo...
Hehehehehe
kya yaar itne achche writter ho aur gayab ho jate ho...
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Originally Posted by prem_pyasa View Post
casi bhai, aaj se is thread ka reading bhi start kar diya. Aaj pehla update padha. Shanaya ke baare mein bahut khubsurti ke sath likha hai aapne.

Next update baad mein.

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STORY IS GOOD PLEASE STORY KA END ACHA RAKHA
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Originally Posted by Bbjamboo View Post
sanaya ki mout nahi honi chahiye
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Originally Posted by The_lost_love View Post
Hatsoff to u bro.... End suspense khol diya acha hua... Nhi to gali hi deta aapko
hahahahaha.... Bhai aisa mat karna we need happy ending yaar... Bahut darra diya tha yaar tumne... But mst update... Thanku aisa kuch ulta sidha hua nhi story mujhe to laga tha... Story khtm....
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Originally Posted by baketi_expert View Post
Dil dahla dene wala update tha, nice job
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Originally Posted by Bbjamboo View Post
unbeliveble update

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Originally Posted by Cute Gunjan View Post
read awl update to till

Very well decriptive lines..

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Originally Posted by Cute Gunjan View Post
very touching updates..
jaldi se shanaya aur samir ki misunderstanding clear ho jaye....
aapne jo sapna describe kiya hain bhut jayada touchy tha

very well narration keep it up

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Originally Posted by thakur zaalim singh View Post
Update 18

Sameer ne idea to de diya afzal ko, par ab wo khud darr raha hai ki kahin afzal uski biwi ke sath kuchh kar na baithe. Uska darna bhi jaruri hai. Dil ka jala kuchh bhi kar sakta hai. Uski biwi ne use daga diya uska gussa wo kisi par bhi utaar sakta hai.

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Originally Posted by aavriti View Post
Sapna kafi bhyank tha, acha hua sapna tha. Samir ka kuch samjh ni aata, ek taraf wo guilty feel krta h dusri taraf jb sanaya k liye galatfhmi b hn jati h, sanaya samir ka connection acha lga, agar hum rote h puri rat to kya wo b rota hoga jo hume chor k chala gya
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Originally Posted by The_lost_love View Post
Bhai bahut hi romantic aur dil ko tadpa dene wala update tha... Aap samjh hi ste h... Kisi se pyar karne me jab duri hoti h toh kya haal hota h... Isiliye aapne itna badhiya update likha bhai.... Thanku bhai...

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Originally Posted by jay_jaan View Post
aaj ke dono update bahut hi acchi rahe..

ab shanaya kya karegi.. smir ke bare me sab bata degi...

ab to aage hi pata chalega...

agle update ka beshbri se intzar rahega..
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Originally Posted by P1lovely View Post
Update 45
behtareen update samir ship par chala gaya hai.aur idhar shanaya us se contact na ho pane se tadap rhi hai.reeta ko samir k upar doubt aur gahra ho rha hai.
Dekhte hai commando unit pahunch kar ye dono kya karti hai.
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Originally Posted by uzair3432561857 View Post
SUKAR K SAMIR KI DUA QABOOL HOGAE
OWESUM STORY ZABARDAST UPDATE
WAITING KB SAMIR SHIP SE WAPIS ATA HAI
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Originally Posted by uzair3432561857 View Post
UPDATE 49 50
BICHARI SHANAYA KITNI MUSKHIL MAIN HAI AUR SAMIR SAHAB SHIP PER HAIN
STORY ZABARDAST CHAL RAHI HAI BAHT
HAR UPDATE OWESUM HAI MAGAR HAR UPDATE BECHAINI AUR SUSPENSE CHORTA HAI K AB KIA HOGA
JABI MAI COMPLETED STORY PREFER KARTA HO Q K YAR WAIT NAI HOTA. DNT MIND
WAITING FOR UPDATE
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Originally Posted by stupidbunny View Post
u chachu u r the pride of xossip story section u
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Originally Posted by Bbjamboo View Post
suspense banake ab tadpao mat yarra update de hi do
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Originally Posted by syed arshad View Post
SHANAYA Ki Uljhan Thodi Kam Ho Gayi Magar Bechara SAMEER Beech Mein Kaise Rahe Raha Hai Usko Jaldi Wapas Lao CASI BHAI
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Originally Posted by syed arshad View Post
Agle Update Ka Be-Sabri Se Intezar Rahega CASI BHAI
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Originally Posted by JustFlyingHigh View Post
Read upto update no.21.Simply marvelous and captivating story uptill now.Keep up the good work,Casi bro with
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Originally Posted by aditya1991 View Post
ye story to apne mukam pr pahuchti najar aa rahi hai.shanaya ko ye bhi pta chal gya ki wo kaun sa samir hai.yani ki shanaya ki side se sab kuch clear ho chuka hai.aur samir ki side ki story kafi bachi hai ab use dekhna hai aur kya ghtna kram hote hain.
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Originally Posted by Cute Gunjan View Post
Sare updates awesome the....

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Originally Posted by Cute Gunjan View Post
Shanaya ne samir ko hi suprise kr diya

Keep it up
waiting for next
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Originally Posted by Cute Gunjan View Post
Aaj toh dil bhi kaha raha one more please....

but awl depend 2 u egarl waiting for next

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Originally Posted by thakur zaalim singh View Post
Update 20 tak padh liya. Shandaar ja rahi hai kahani.
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Originally Posted by The_lost_love View Post
Wah bhai... Mst update tha 51 no. Wala..... Aaj main 3 update eksath padhne ja rha hu... Abi baki k do update padh k review deta hu...

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Originally Posted by sarika_jaiswal View Post
Wow wat a romantic turn keep rocking
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Originally Posted by The_lost_love View Post
Wah wah ''rushtame mauritius''
mast update the update no. 52,53
maja aya padh k... Chalo ab dono akhir kar mil hi gye... Bechara samir soch rha tha wo shanaya ko surprise dega aur yaha to ulta ho gya... Shanaya ne hi usko surprise de diya...
Hahahaha...
Bechara samir

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Originally Posted by jay_jaan View Post
casibhai.. aaj ke dono update bahut acche lage...

aur khash shanaya ka.. samir ko surprice dena... its to good...

u rock bro..

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Originally Posted by vipgaurav View Post
wow uncle ki story ... der se aya iskiye sorry

starting se pad raha hun ab ...


thanks dear

+15

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Originally Posted by Armaankhan View Post
Casinar bhai .. Ye mera pehla commnt h is thread pe .. Mene apki abhi tak ki puri story padhi h silnt reader bankr pr bhai ek bt kahunga bht hi zabardast story likh rhe ho ek dam fadu .. Awesome story bhai ... Bht zada acchi lagi ye abhi tak jitni apne likhi kamal ka likhte ho bhai .. Seriously awesome

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Originally Posted by munshi_ji.1 View Post
Update 21

Mast update tha. Afzal aur sameer ka shaq door ho gaya. Par mera shaq badh gaya hai. Jarur uska bhi kisi se chakkar hai.
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Update 21

nice update bro. sameera ke mobile par raat ke waqt kisi ka call aana use shaq ke daayre mein khada karta hai.
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Update 46
behtareen update casi bhai
shanaya aur reeta dono bahut hi buri tarah bezzzat kar k commando unit se bahr nikala gaya hai.udhar samir bhi chief se ye jankar kuchch aur hi samjha. sach me dono bahut hi visham halat me fans gaye hai.
Dekhte hai age kya hota hai.
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Casi Bhai.
Bhai tumhare itne dino ki narazgi door karne aaya hun tabhi thodi der lagi. Kahani kafi aage bhad chuki thi aur main kafi peeche reh geya tha.
Page no 223 tak sare updates pad liye hain.
Shayana jaan gayi hai ke Samir koi aur nahin balki uska apna Samir hai. Jise usne pehle thukra diya tha.
Ab dekhna yeh hai ke jab Samir ko yeh sab pata chalega to uska kya reaction hoga.
Filhaal to Shayana is dukh se ubhar payegi ya nahin ke jis insaan ko wo hamesha ke liye apna bana sakthi thi usi ne uska rape kar diya.
Hats Off to your writing and your thinking Bhai.

NTS
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Bahut hi shandaar update tha bhai... Maja aya... Kya baat boli h last me update khatm hone k tym... Aapko khud hi malum hoga... Kya likha h aapne...
Next update jaldi chhap dena bhai...
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Suprb update casi bhai ... Keep posting .. Bht hi romantic meeting rahi dono ki age kya hoga dekhte hain ...
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Suparb update casi sir. Ab shanaya or sameer k beech saare gile sikve dur ho jaayenge. Waiting 4 next
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lajawab update bro
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back chachu

story, 2din mein hi 30 update padh liye

ye story bhi aapki purani stories ki tarah super hit hogi, ismein koi doubt nhi he
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solid update chachu
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whoaaaa you again started miss ho gaya boss ajse hi padna chalu
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sir g kyon samir aur hamen tadpa rahe hain ye raaj chupa kr samir se.vaise story bahut hi interesting ho gayi hai.vaise mujhe lgta hai ki ek sex scene to yahan bnta hai.
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Hmmm good update bhai... Bilkul romance se paripurn... Solid love story bhai...
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Update 47
jabarjast update casi bhai.
Ek baar to to apne poora hilakar hi rakh diya wo to bhala ho ye sapna tha warna sach me dil ki dhadkane tez ho gayi thi.
Aur shayd aisa end hota to shayd sabko bahut bura lagata.
Jo bhi ho dekhte hain ab samir kya kadam uthayega.
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Update 48
really heart touching update casi bhai.
Samir aur shanaya dono k dil k Hal ko bade hi behtareen dhang se apne likha hai. In dono ka pyar itne utar chadav k baad bhi kam hone ki bajay un dono ki tadap ko hi badha rha hai.
Dekhte hain samir ki ye dua kya rang Lati hai.
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Casi bhai
Bhai Samir ke wapis aane ke baad jo Shayana aur Samir ka jo milan karwaya hai uski jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai.
Dil ke bhav ko Shabdon main likhne ki aapki kala ka apun kayal ho geya hai. Ab Shayan aur Samir fir se dobara usi gaddhe main jane wale hain jahan Samir ne Shayana ka rape kiya tha. Us jagah jaker fir kya hoga, kya un dono ke armaan jagenge. Yeh padne keliye dil utawla ho utha hai.

Keep up the priceless work Bhai.
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Update 49&50
dono update jabarjast the bhai shanaya ki ye azab halat sabhi ki nazar me aa rhi hai.ab uske gahrwale us par shadi k liye zor dal rhe hai. Ab shanaya badi musibat me hai wo ab bahut buri tarah halat me ulajhkar rah gayi hai.
Udhar samir bhi shanaya k office me ane ka karan Jan kar pachchta rha hai.
Dekhte hain age kya hota hai.
Kaise shanaya apne gharwalo ka samna karti hai.
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Great Casi Bhai ke kahani ka theme bhi utna hi great ..! Kya nayaab topic hai Bhai ...koi aap jaisa kalam ka jadugar hi aise kanton aur jokhim se bhaare topic par likhne ki jurrat kar sakta hai.....jahan apne rapist se koi bhi ladki ek aseem ghreena , gussa ,lanchana ke bhawnaon se bhari rehti hai..app ne usi rapist se us ladki ko pyaar karte hue drashaya hai....

Maine shooroo ke kuch updates padhe hain ...bemisaal hain Bhai ..

Samir ke character ko aapne bakhubi pesh kiya hai ...kis tareh wo ek rapist ki manodasha tak pahonchta hai ...seedhe saade shadon mein aur apne alag hi andaaz mein bahot hi prabhawshali dhank se pesh kiya hai ....aap ne ..

Nissandeh yeh kahani kamyaabi ke naye kirtiman staphit karegi Casi Bhai ..


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Update 55 tak read kar chuka hoon really bahut hi behtareen dhang se story age badhi hai.
Samir se door rahkar shanaya ki bechaini aur usko apne paas paakar use mano duniya ki sabse badi daulat hasil ho gayi hai.
Jis tarah shanaya ne samir ko pahchan hai us se samir hairan ho gaya hai.
Vaise ab dono phir se usi ganne k khet me ja rhe hai. Poorane jakhmo ko mitane. Par ab lagta hai un dono premiyo ka milan bahut shandar hone wala hai.
Ab wo dono purani yadon ko mitakar ek nayi shuruat karne ko taiyar hai.
Dekhte hai ab in dono k beeech hasin pal kis tarah guzarte hain.
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nice update bro... dono ke pyar karne ka tarika....

ek dusre se pyar jatane ka tarika... bahut hi accha he...

to good
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Shandaar update tha bhai. Sameer ke to hos ud gaye hain apni biwi ke sath kisi aur ko dekh kar.
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Next update bhi padhe bagair nahi reh sakta, magar thodi der baad padhta hoon
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wwwwwwoooooooowwwwwwwwwwww zabardast update
what a Romance yaar NICE
JO BAAT PYAR MAI HAI WO ZABARDASTI MAIN KAHAN
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Aj k Dono update bahut hi shandar the. Shanaya aur samir ka apne GHONSHLE me Milan ko bahut hi kamuk dhang se apne pesh kiya hai.
Vaise kahin in dono k bare me koi khabar gharwalo ko na lag jaye.

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for 250 pages. Itni raftaar maine kisi bhi thread ki nahi dekhi.
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Update 53,sameer shanaya ko surprise karna chahata tha lekin yaha to shanaya ne hi use surprise kar diya, nice update
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Update 54,nice update,emotional update tha,sach me pyar andha hota hai...
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very lovly updates.hamara ghoshla ye naam is gaddhe ka bahut acha lga.
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Update 56 57,romantic and hot update for both update
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aaj ka update bahut hi majedar tha...

shanaya ur.. samir ka milan.. dono ko pyar se nehlana...

nice update casibhai..
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Mast update bhai dono idhar ab khul kar maje lekar shanaya k ghar nikal chuke hai. Ab samir shanaya k gharwalo se milega to wo sach me surprise hoga ki shanaya k papa hi uske papa ka dost hai.
Dekhte hain age kya hota hai.
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nice update sir.aapne to samir aur shanaya ko nahla dhula kr taiyar kr diya dulha dulhan banne k liye.dekhte hain ki kitna surprise hota hai shanaya k ghar ko dekhkar samir
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update 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22

Superb update.
Kahani ab itna maza de rahi hai ki dil karta hai bina ruke padhta chala jaaun. Shireen ki bwafai se afzal aur sameer ka darna wazib tha. aur unka shaq bhi sahi saabit hua. duniya ke kisi bhi aurat par bharosa mat karna. Aurat kabhi bhi behak sakti hai. sabhi updates achhe the casi bhai. Ek se badh kar ek the. Aur ab to sameer ne kisi ko apni biwi ke sath sote hue dekh bhi liya hai.

afzal to nahi hoga. Uska koi kareebi ho sakta hai. Par mere zehan mein nahi aa raha hai. Dekhte hain kaun hai.
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Mast story hai 1 rare love scene creat karne vala writer mahodya ye kaam aap jaise bde writer kar skte hai is story par update read karte hi next ki mang hoti hai the hot love story nd
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u chachu undisputed king of xossip story writing
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25 repp... 10 lakh hit !! lage raho chachu
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casi ji...just outstandingly out of words
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pen mein ink ki jagah sperm use karte hain kya jo story intni gluing ho jati hai
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update 5 , 6

Badhiya update army training ki achhi jaan kari di hai aapne. Samandar ke beech ke haalat ko bhi aapne behad rochak dhang se likha hai. Har ek lamha aankhon se dikhai deta hua laga. great update

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.. update casibhai...

ab samir ko shanaya ke bare me pata chala...per usko gussa bahut jald aa jata he..

khair accha he jo wo ruk gaya...

+ 9

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nice update casi sir.kasi sir aapne is update me ek suspense create kr diya hai us van wala.kya shanaya ka accident hone wala hai.shayad aisa ho.ya uska apharan hone wala hai.dekhate hai kya hota hai vaise kuch to hone wala hai.
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maine pahle hi kahaa tha ki abhi samir ki taraf se kuch story bachi hai.so aapne samir k gusse wala rup dikhaya jo is story ka aham hissa tha.
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Mast surprise hua or ye kyu bhaga diya chalo ruk to gya dekhte hai kya hota hai waiting for next
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update 23

jabardast update casi bhai

Kya likha hai aapne sach mein maza aa gaya. Lekin is update mein bhi guess nahi kar paaya ki wo aadmi kaun hai? Khair jo bhi hai uski to shamat aayi thi jo fauji ki biwi par chadh baitha. Ab dekhte hain kya hota hai.
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Great update casi sir.
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Bhai bahut hi badhiya update... Shanay ab kaise samjhayegi apne hero ko dekhte h age...
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Update 27
ab afzal sameera se pinge badha raha hai. Mast update casi bhai
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Ab kahani hot hoti ja rahi hai
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Thank you such a nice story bhai, You are one of the dedicated writers who gave regular updates and carried the story with good tempo throughout. The ending was also too good and hope you will back another great story as soon as possible and if possible with a romantic story(request).

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Some appreciative comments from this thread and some of my replies as well. continued from above post



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Originally Posted by rafi_r002 View Post
Very nice back to back update casinar bro.
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Originally Posted by akela93 View Post
Update 30 tak padh liya bhai. Bahut achha likhte ho aap. Sameer ke jo haalat aapne bataya hai wo ek dam natural lagta hai. Ab wo shanaya ke liye paagal ho raha hai.
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Originally Posted by bondjamesbond09 View Post
Very nice update
mata pita ki ahmiyat batane ke liye ke unke faisle hamesha hi sahi hote hain
thank dear
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Originally Posted by prem_pyasa View Post
update 7

Bahut hi badhiya update. Dono kushal mangal samandar ki khatarnaak lehron se bachkar aa gaye. Afzal miya ki shadi bhi ho gayi. Aur sameer ke liye ladki ki talash jaari hai. Koi speecial hi hogi uske liye.
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Originally Posted by Prakash verma View Post
Both very nice update,shanaya sach me bahut masoom hai,sameer ka dil halka ho gaya hai apne pita ko bata kar...sab kuchh bahut achhe se chal raha hai,
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Update 29

Aapne bahut acha shanaya ke routine ko likha hai. Uske office aane jaane aur office ke aas paas ke mahaul ka bhi achha varnan kiya hai.
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Originally Posted by P1lovely View Post
Behtareen update apne pita se bolkar samir k dil ko shayd kuchch raha mile.vaise uske pita ko bhi bahut dukh hua hai. Shayd ab kuchch cheeje sulajh jaye.
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Originally Posted by gangu777 View Post
Very nice updates bhai ,guess story is coming towards a great romantic ending.The emotions depicted through innocent Shanaya's character is really superb.Thanks for such regular and great updates
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Originally Posted by jay_jaan View Post
casibhai.. kal ke dono update bahut hi badhiya the...

shanaya ne samir ko sab bata diya... bahut accha kiya...

lekin samir bhi apni jagah sahi he.. usne apne dad ki beti ke sath galat kaam kiya.. usse apne aap per gussa to aayega hi...

and last .. samir ne apne dad ko sab batake bahut accha kiya.. apne dil ka boj kam kar diya..

lekin ek aisi sachhai apne dad ko batai.. jo kabhi koi nahi kar sakta..
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Originally Posted by jay_jaan View Post


bahut hi shandar update tha casibhai...

samir ne shanaya le dad se wada kiya.. turant hi usse amal bhi kiya...

bina usse mile chala gaya.. aur ab phone bhi band kar diya...

aur shanaya baccho jaise apne dad se bol rahi he ki.. me ab aapse baat nahi karungi...

update
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Nice update dost but in dono ki jindgi m phir se treagdy aa gyi dekhte hai aage kya hota hai kya karte hai sunyana ke bapu ji
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Originally Posted by P1lovely View Post
Behtareen update casi bhai
idhar to sab ulta pulta ho gaya. Sach hai pyar ki rahe itni asan nhi hoti agar itni asani se hi pyar mil jaye to pyar ka maza kaisa.
Ab shanaya k papa beech ki deewar bankar khade ho gaye hain.
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Nice update,lagta hai sharma ji sameer or shanaya ki raah ka kanta ban ne wale hai,waise bhi kisi ko pyar asani se nahi milta hai raah me adachane to aati rahti hai,ab dekhana hai ye dono isase kaise nikal te hai...
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Originally Posted by prem_pyasa View Post
aaj is thread ka update nahi padh paaya casi bhai. :sad:
Abhi writing ke liye ja raha hoon. Agar jaldi pura ho gaya to update dene ke baad is thread ka update padhunga. Nahi to kall subah jarur padhunga. (nts)
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Originally Posted by A_O_M View Post
Casi bhai
Ek ke baad ek badhiya updates diye hain bhai tumne.
Inki tareef kya karun mere paas to shabd he nahin hain is nayaab rachna ke liye.
Bas itna he kehna chahunga ke tum Story Section ke "SACHIN TENDULKAR" ho.
Hats off Bhai.
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Story going more interesting....

Lets see what happen next..???
waiting for next
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sahi kaha bro....casi bhai sach mein is story section ke sachin hain...aur sachin kewal ek hi reh sakta hain dusara koi nahin ...
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Nice story bro. Ise bhi jald hi padh kar current update tak aa jaunga.
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Update 29 tak padha.

Shanaya ke office ke aas paas ka mahaul achha likha hai aapne. Afzal ab pachta raha hai ki usne sameera ko samajhne mein galti kyon kar di. Use pata hota to wo pehle hi dubki maar liya hota. Waise to ab bhi kuchh nahi bigda wo milna chahti hai.
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update 24

Awesome update

Sameer ke dil tutne ki sada yahan tak aayi. Aurat aisi cheej hai ki wo chahen to bade se bade shurma ko khoon ke aansu rula sakti hai. Maine apne niji jeevan mein ek aise aadmi ko apni biwi ke liye rote dekha hai jiski mardangi ki kasme log khate the. Great update bro
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Ye narajgi or upr se phir milna vada todke kya baat hai gjb dhate ja rhe ho dost waiting for next
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Originally Posted by bondjamesbond09 View Post
awesome update dear

jeevan me sab kuch aasani se mil jaye to jeevan saral na ho jaye

sanghrsh ka dusra naam hi jeevan hai

vibinn kathinayiyon ke baad jeevan me jo khushiyan milti hain wo anmol hoti hain
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Originally Posted by prem_pyasa View Post
Update 8

Kaafi paripakvata (maturity) hai aapki lekhni mein. Budhe dwara kahi gayi baat bilkul sahi hai. Uske ek ek shabd aaj ki haqeeqat hai. Maata - peeta na sirf job aur cariar ke liye balki apni niji mauj masti ke liye bhi bachon ko avagya (ignore) kar dete hain. bache sirf pyar aur khushi chahte hain. Jab unhe wo cheej ghar par nahi milegi to wey uski purti baahar karenge hi. Bahut badhiya update casi bhai.
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update 9, 10

Sameera aur sameer ki hotel mein mulaaqaat behad hot hot laga. Dono ke beech ka erotic part achha tha. aaj thoda kaam adhik hai casi bhai, isliye time par reply nahi de pa raha hoon. Cmnts bhi jaise taise kar raha hoon. Bura mat maaniyega.
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Originally Posted by Prakash verma View Post
Nice update,shanaya ke baap ne sameer ke pichhe detective laga diya hai,jab usko pata lagega ki uski shareef ladki hi sameer ke saath thi to uska reaction kaisa hoga ye dekhane layak hoga,or tumne bechare detective ka KLPD kar diya....
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Originally Posted by P1lovely View Post
Kya mast update thala bro to shanaya k papa ne samir k pichche ek detective laga diya. Kya baat hai ab samir ki har harqat par nazar. Aur detective ne ate hi apna kaam start kar diya aur shanaya k papa ko samir k bare me ulta sidha bol bhi diya.pakka ye maar khayega age.
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Originally Posted by A_O_M View Post
Casi bhai

Bhai agle do updates pad liye hain.
Apun bahut peeche hai lekin bhai ke sath hai.
Bahut jald story section per dera jamane aa raha hai. Sari shikayatein door kar dunga bhai ki.

Shayana aur Samir ka GHONSLA ban chuka hai aage dekhte hain aur kya kya hota hai.
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update 11

Sorry for late reply. Is update mein aapne kamaal kar diya hai. bhartiya na hokar bhi, kisi bhartiya ladki ke mann mein uthne wali komal bhavnaon ka jo chitran aapne kiya hai wo prashansha se pare hai. Ati-uttam

Shanaya ab pachhta rahi hai, use dukh hai ki uske hath se sameer jaisa khubsurat mard nikal gaya. Uski chhoti behan ke sath uski baat cheet- sameer aur uski dulhan ko lekar ! Behad dilchasp tha. Us scene ko aapne vastvik roop diya hai.
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WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW OOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEESSSSSSUUUUUUMMMM UPDATE
NICE STORY
AKHIR DONO KI SHADI HO HE GAE
HAHAHAH SHNAYA NE JO SAMIR KO BOLA DAR THO MAI B GAYA K YEH KIA HOWA ACHANAK

BHAI AGAY KA KIA IRADA HAI
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Originally Posted by P1lovely View Post
casi bhai 4 complete story on deewali
abhi to shayd nhi padh pa rha hoon shayd kal hi pad sakoon
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Originally Posted by bondjamesbond09 View Post
ek shaandar story ke liye apko bahut bahut badhayee

ek khusiyon bhara end sach me ye ek diwali gift hai hum sab readers ke liye

happy diwali
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acchi story thi yaar......afjal-samira ka kuch batana tha
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Gud story with cool ending
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Pehle yeh garam ....

Shanaya jhat se usska hath hattate hue uthi, Samir ke saamne khadi hui aur kaha;


“Aaj mera badla pura hua. Tum kia samajhte the ke main tumse pyar karti hoon? No. never! Jiss din tumne mera balaatkaar kiya ussi din se main ne soch liya ke tumse keise badla lungi, aur ek hi raasta mere saamne nazar aya wo thi tumse shaadi karne ki! Lo aaj main kaamyaab hui. Mister Samir, mere tumhare sirf dunya ke saamne husband wife ka rishta hoga, na tum mera kuch lagte ho nah main tumhari. Yehi tumhari sazaa hai. Ghut ghut ke jiyo ab. Main issi ghar mein rahungi magar tum mujhko kabhi nahin chuoge! Mere nazdik kabhi mat ana! Main tumse nafrat karti hoon! Mera rape kiya tha tum ne? Shanaya ki rape. Are main ne kitne sambhaal ka apne aap ko rakha tha, kitni nazuk thi main, kitni bholi aur achchi thi main tum ne mujh jeisi ladki ka rape kiya? Main zindagi bhar tumko maaf nahin kar sakti…. Tum mere dushman ho aur dushman rahoge marte dum tak. Dunya ke saamne hum husband wife ka naatak karenge zindagi bhar, magar honge nahin. Tum iss bistar par kabhi mat aana apne sone ke liye alag jagah dhundo magar issi kamre mein! Mera tumhara koyi naata nahin abhi se!!”

Aur phauran yeh naram rukh :


wo chup chaap utha, ek do kadam kamre mein idhar udhar chala…. aur darwaze ke paas jaa raha tha ke daudti hui Shanaya ne piche se ussko jakarte hue kaha, “Dar gaye meri jaan main bus mazaak kar rahi thi, main tumse door reh sakti hoon bhala, tumhare chehre ka rang dekhna chahti thi ke tum kia karte agar mein ne kuch eisa socha hota to hihihihihihihihi …muuuuuaaaaaaah muah muah muah……. Aur wo Samir ke chehre par darjanon chummi deti gayi……… Samir ke ensoo nikal pade the jo Shanaya apne honton se ponch rahi thi…….

Just like your own temperament Casi Bhai as you declare yourself to be....

What a way to end the story ..only a master story teller like you can think of such a mindboggling end ...! KUDOS Casi Bhai...

And your idea to end the story on Deewali Day as a Diwali Gift to yur loved readers too shows your "naram" avtaar ...

This story of yours will be remembered for a long long time in Xossip ...for the mindblowing concept of yours ..its a glaring example of your highly calibered creativity ..to make a girl love her rapist ....and the way you have narrated the whole situation not only Shanaya , even the readers start loving Sameer ...

Accept my congratulations Casi Bro' for the grand success of your story ...


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Suparb story casi sir. & nice ending as well. This really a nice gift of diwali 4 us. Thanks 4 such a nice story.
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4 ur next creation.
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Casi bhai, main aap se nayee kahani ka ummid rakh raha hu.

Main aap se request karta hu aap koi incest kahani maa beta aunty aur bhabi koi vi ek relation me kahani likh dijiye.

Aap bahut ache likhte ho. Sarjoo ki kahani achhi hai lekin kahani charotarf se sex attacking hone se jyada wild hogaya jese ki mainstream movie se porn ki tarah hogai ho. Main aap se yese hi lekin seductive and intensive incest kahani ummide rakh raha hu.

Than you ..

You are the best writer in Xossip I ever known.
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casibhai.. bahut hi shandar end raha story ka... padhke maja aaya..

sorry for late comment.. per kya karu.. office me itna buzy tha ki...

2 din aur 2 raat ghar hi nahi jaa paya tha...

for complate the story...
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AweSome Finsih of the story...
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Aapki Kahani bhut achi thi..
kafi kuch aise cheezon ke bare mein knowledege bhi mile..
jo shayad nhi pta thi..
Kuch Cheez Aapke bare mein
Awesome Writing style
Awesome Narration
Awesome Description
And Last U r Really Awesome Writer..
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Nice story casi bro akhir happy ending k sath story complete ho gayi. aur last update me bhi apne ek pal k liye sochne par majboor kar diya ki ye kya ho rha hai. apne shanaya ka aisa roop dikha kar hosh hi uda diye the Chalo khair wo mazak nikla. Aur samir aur shanaya k Milan k sath story complete ho gayi.
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Thank you such a nice story bhai, You are one of the dedicated writers who gave regular updates and carried the story with good tempo throughout. The ending was also too good and hope you will back another great story as soon as possible and if possible with a romantic story(request).
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is kahani ko update 20 tak padh liya hai. Shandaar kahani hai. Abhi tak kahani mein lead character shanaya ki entry nahi hui hai.

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Dear bro.
I have no any word for this story.superb , great all are small for this story.saniya & samir both are amagzing .dil se kauh to pchle teen dino se is story ko padh raha ho.kahani ke neration jabardast hai.
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Mujhe lagta h isse better kahani koi ho hi nhi
sakti
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Casi Chachu kya kahu shabd nahi mil rahe mujhe. Kya kahani likhi hain one of best in xb(xossip). Kal raat hi padhna shuru kiya aur padhta chala gaya jab tak complete nahi ho gayi.


Ek alag hi kathanak chuna hain aapne Romanch, Pyar, Dhoka, aur Bhavana(emotions) se bharpur, Shabdon ka maaya jaal aur saral bhasha . Commando training ka ekdum satik chitran kiya hain dost kahi Aap ne bhi commando training to nahi le rakhi na. Apne aas pass ghatnao aur vatawaran ka ek yuvak ke mann par padhta prabhav bahut acche tarik se darshayaan hain. Apne sath hue dhoke se dil mein utha krodh aur badle ki bhavana ko behtreen dhang se prastut kiya hain.

Nayika ka character bhi bahut acche dhang se pesh kiya hain. Sach hi hain hum jis mahol mein palte hain jaise humari parwarish hoti hain, jaise hume sanskar milte hain hum waise hi ban jaate hain yeh baat Nayika ke ke charater ne bakhubi darshayaan hain. Apne sath kiye atyachar ko bhool kar apne hi atyachari(rapist) ke liye uski aap beeti jaan sahanbhuti aur pyar :kisses: too cool.


to you with Casi Bhai


Aur haan ek aur baat yeh sach hain ke jodiyan upar se banke aati hain har kisike liye koi na koi pehle se bana hota hain. Hume bas use pehchan na hain aur uparwala hume is ke liye mauka(chance) jaroor deta hain ab yeh humpar nirbhar kar tha hain hum uska kaise upyog kare aur agar hum use thukrate hain toh uska anjaam bhi yahi bhugatna padta hain dost. Casi bhai for this master piece on of the marvell's of xossip

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The most unique love story i have ever read . . . and your mind blowing writing style awesome . . casi bhai

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