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1)Simran 13 43.33%
2)Pammi 5 16.67%
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4)Manjeet 1 3.33%
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wow amazing yaar. You have erotically created the scene of simran at night . Her big ass is my favorite. Hats off to you.. The story has right mixture of suspense and sex.
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bahut hi vadia , suspense kamaal hunda tuhadi stories vich ... waiting for next
Bahut bahut shukriya doston story read karan da and encourage karan layi.
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baa kamaal lekhni a tuhadi.....us bhagode da te police da sohna suspense create kita a tusi....upro simran da uste vishwash krna...hun ta shayad simran usde kol v chle jawe....dekhde a ki hundaa agge

Bahut khushi hoi reet dear ki tuhanu story pasand aayi ji. Hanji in future story ch hor v bahut modh aayunge. Bane rheo hamesha ji

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Bhai apki update Hmesha bindaas hoti h. Ye wala update bhi mast shapa h. Too good.
Tuhada sarya da bahut shukriya. Tusi story read kar rahe ho and review kar rahe ho. Thanks for encouraging me

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" paani...pp...pp..paaani...." aawaz phir ton aayi. Is baar saaf-saaf suni ja sakdi c. Simran aawaz sun dehel gayi. Dhyaan nal sunan te saaf pata lagda c ki aawaz baharle darwaze kolo aa rahi aa. Jiven bahar koi khada hove.

Simran nu achanak pata nahin ki hoya. Oh piche ghum gayi. Usne sidha bahar darwaze wal nazar ghumayi.

Uthe jo nazar aaya, usnu dekh oh dang reh gayi. Ohi naqaabposh jisnu dupahre thandeaaran ton bhajde dekhya c, oh saamne khada c. Usde jhakmi modde te hun patti nazar aa rahi c, par oh pyasa jaapda c. Hole saahan naal paani-paani kurrha reha c.

Do pal layi simran da dimaag sunn ho gaya. Usnu samaj nahi aayi ki oh kare tan ki kare? Ik khyaal aaya ki chuphap andar vadh jaave jiven kujh dekhya hi nahin. Par dujje pal usda naram dil usnu kise dard nal kurrha rahe zakmi di madad karan nu kehn lagga. Do vichaara de ghol vich aakhir usda naram dil jitt gaya. Oh banda simran wal hi dekh reha c. Simran ne hath nal ishaara kita. Jiven usnu rukan layi keh rahi hove. Phir oh chucphap ghar andar vadh gayi.

Sabh pehla di tarah hi ghook neend ch sutte paye sn. Bina koi aawaz kite usne pittal da glass apne manje thalleo chakkeya te ghade ton paani bhar bahar nu aa gayi. Oh dabbe pairan naal holi-holi usde kol aayi. Pata nahin kyun usnu oh banda saccha jaapda c. Jis bande nu saara pind baddmash ya daaku keh reha c, simran bina darre usde kol jaa rahi c. Bilkul darwaze de kol aake andarle paase khlo gayi. Par darwaza kholeya nahin.

Naqaaposh ne usnu dekhya. Dovan diya nazran da dobara takra hoya. Kujh pal layi duniya ton anjaan hoye oh ikduje diyan akhan ch jiven gwaach gaye.

" ahhh..." Dard nal oh dobara kurraheya. Phir jaake doven ankhan di mulaqat ton bahar aaye. Simran nu khyaal aay ki oh hath ch glass chak khadi hain.

" ahh laoo ji" Simran ne usnu kandh upron di glass farhaya. Glass farhde saar oh ik ghutt ch hi saara paani pee gya. Jiven sadiyan ton pyaasa ghumm reha hove.

" hhhhhhhh" khaali glass kandh te rakhdeya usne lambaa saah leya.

" hor leyavan ji?" simran ne dobara pucheya.

Oh muho kujh na boleya. Bas naah ch sir hila ditta. Par usdiyan akhan simran nu shukriya keh rahian sn.

" tusi kaun ho? nale bhajj kyun rahe ho ji?" Simran ne dimaag andar ubaale maar rahe saawal us wal sutte.

" Jiyunda reha tan dssuga " Rohbdaar aawaz ch oh boleya. " Maharaj tuhada bhala karan"

"Chor...chor....chor...." Naal de kothe ton koi aadmi ucchi-ucchi cheeka maaran lagga. " fadh laoo...fadhh laoo....daaku labh gya....daaku labh gyaa"

Rola sunde hi oh naqaabposh bhajj ke naal de khetan ch alop ho gaya. Simran v darr gayi. Oh v tez kadma naal andar vadh gayi te darwaza band kar ditta. Hale oh apne manje te payi hi c ki usda baapu jaag gaya.

" bahar raula ki pai reha?" Trabhak ke makhan manje ton utheya te kunda khol bahar wal nu pajjya. Usdi maa manjeet v uth gayi. Pammi hale v ghook neend ch sutti payi c.

Simran de saah tez chall rahe c. Oh baar baar bach gayi ki baapu usde andar aayun to baad utheya. "Je kite pehla uth jaanda tan...hayee?" Oh man ch soch rahi c.

" Jassa rola paa reha...kehnda oh daaku sade ghar de aale-dwaale dekhya usne. Tusi bahar naa aayeo...kunde bandh rakheoo....main aayaa" makhan bhajda bhajda andar aa ke dasda hain. " main aayuna zara" kehke oh bahar chala janda.

Manjit kunde changi tarah band kar dindi hai. Simran manje te paayi dhoongi soch ch gwaach gayi. Pammi hale v ghook neend chon bahar nahi aayi.

( AGLI SAVEER)

" ni uth khad kudiye..chaa da time ho gaya" manjeet ne sutti payi simran nu aawaz lagayi. Ankhan maldi hoi simran utthi. Raat nu kawele saun karke usdi ajj ankh der nal khulli. Saver de 5 vajje sn.

" baapu tera khetan kanni gya...chah farah aabo doven putt ..acchaaa" manjeet ne kaha. Udro pammi aj uston pehla uthh chukki hai.

" Naha ley hun...phir chaliye..." pammi ne simran nu baah ton khichdeya keha. " jaldi karin...tere karke baapu ton gaalan pai jania nahin taan"

Simran ne haan ch sir hilaaya. Phir kapre chakk bahar veerhe ch aa gayi. Usde man ch hun v raat wali ghatna ghumm rahi hai. Bathroom wale kamre ch pahunch ik-ik karke kapre utaaran laggi. Pehla kameez, phir salwaar laah ke naal killi te tang ditti. Hun sirf kasshi te bra usde ghundwe shareer nu dhakk rahian sn. Je koi usnu is roop ch ik nazar v takk lave tan rabb nu v bhull jaave.

Bra ton Shaatiyan sambhaal nahin c hundiyan. Shayad rabb ne chaar-panj killo maas usde gol-matol ladduan te vaadhu hi laaya c. Gore rang de mummean upar kaale rang di bra sohne te suhaga jaap rahi c. Usde thalle c patla dhidh. Usde bicho-bich c paatal ton v dhoongi dhunni. Jisdi mori ch ik vaar jeeb payun layi koi saadhu v apne saalan di tapassya shadd daye. Patle dhidh thalle c motte-motte patt jo makhan di tarah mulayam nazar aa rahe sn. Doven pattan vichkaarli anmulli cheez utte kaali kasshi da parda c. Par eh andaza saaf lagda c ki fuddi utte sanghne waal sn. Yaani simran da badan poore joban te c.

Oh bra-kasshi ch hi nahayun laggi. Paani da dabba usde pinde te jado painda, tan paani makhmali shareer ton tilakda hoya bhunje diggda. Bhijji bra-kasshi ch tan oh jannat ton uttri hoyi pari laggan laggi. Shaatiyan da bhaar dugna ho gya, chitad hadh nalo vadh hillan lagge, fuddi utte aaye kaale waal saaf-saaf nazar aayun lagge. Eh tan shukar hain koi mard is avastha ch usnu dekh nahi reha. Kyun jo dekh lenda tan simran da kaawarapan ithe hi khatam ho janda. Oh poori reej nal sabban laa nahayi. Jism da ik-ik kona ragar-ragar saaf kita. Phir kapre naal gilla shareer saaf karke peele rang da punjabi suit paa taayar ho gayi.

Chah da dollu farh doven behna hale ghar di jooh tapp hi rhian c ki unha nu aawaz paayi.

" Niii simran....tera glass kithe aa? Oh v maanj hoju" Bhande maanjdi manjeet ne ucchi aawaz ch pussheya.

( Udo lokan de gharan ch bhande-tinde ghatt hi hunde si. Ginti de hi glass, kohlian, plates hundia c)

Eh gal sunde hi simran da mattha thankeya. Oh man ch sochan laggi. "Raat nu glass tan oh naqaabposh ne kandh te rakheya c. Jdo rolla peya tan oh glass vapis andar laike nahi gayi. "

Usne kandh te dekhya. Koi glass nahi nazar aaya. Usne darwaze de andar- bahar, khabbe-sajje, upar-thalle, har paase labbheya. Par usnu kite koi glass nahi mileya.

" kithe gya phir ?Ithe hi tan rakhya c usne" Oh man ch sochan laggi. " phir kisne chakkeya hona?"

Pammi v usde mooh wal dekh rahi si. Manjeet usde jawaab da intezaar ka rahi si.

" Bebe yaad nahin aa reha hun...aa ke dassdi aaa" Simran ne kaahli ch keha.

" theek aa puttar" manjeet ne jawaab ditta.

Doven jaania roj di tarah khetan nu chall payian. Simran ne pele rang da punjabi suit paaya c jis vich usda gundwa shareer niraa saroo da khideya full lagg reha c. Pammi v neele rang de suit vich apna lakk matka rahi c.

" tainu hale huni yaad bhullan lagg geya? buddhe ho ke tera ki hovega?" Pammi ne hassde hoye simran nu pucchheya.

" Didi oh kal rolle karke neend khull gayi si, phir changi tarah neend aayi hi nahin. oh iskarke dimaag nahin jyada chall reha" Simran ne mitthi aawaz ch jawaab dtta.

" naaa ...udda tu mere nalo do classa vadh padhi aa. Athvi (8th class) paas walya nu v bhullan di beemari ho jandi?" Hassdi hoi pammi ne majaak kita.

" Shedo naa didi...sar bahut dukh reha" Simran matthe te hath ferdi kehndi hai.

Happy de khetan de kolo langhdi pammi ne aj lakk nahi lachkaya. Happy aj uthe nahin si. Pammi de chehre te nirasha saaf dissan laggi. Phir v simran nu is gall da usne pata na laggan ditta.

Akhir oh pehla payundia baapu kol pahunch gyian. Baapu nu chaah da dollu farha doven saamne paye ik hor manje te baith gyian. Makhan de naal baitha seeri( jassa) simran de baithan nal neeve hoye manje nu ghooran lagga.

" kinna bhaara lakk eee....Manja jma thalle ho gaya" jassa ankhan ankhan ch maaze len lagga.

" baapu ki banya us daaku da? fadh leya ?" Utawle ho pammi pushdi hai. Simran de v kann khull gaye.

" naa putt kithee..Labhde rahe saari raat. Par oh kite na mileya. " baapu ne chaah diya chuskiyan lendeya dasseya.

" ah jasse ne hi rolla paaya c kal? Kehnde dekhya c isne?" pammi dobara saawal puchdi hai.

" ki hoya putt? sehet theek ee?" makhan ne pammi da sawaal ansuna kita te simran nu puccheya. Simran ne matthe te hath jo rakheya hoya c.

" Ehda sir dukhda baapu...raat de rolle karke neend nahi aayi changi tarah" pammi ne jawaab ditta.

" chah pee laa putt...kuj aaram milu" baapu ne keha. " jasse chah da glass de simran nu"

" nahin baapu ji....rehen dayoo" naah ch sir hilayundi simran boli. Udo tak jassa glass ch chah bharke usde kol aa chukka c.

Pammi te baapu kal raat de rolle diya gallan ch veyast ho gaye. Simran nu chah fadha jassa uthe hi khada reha.

" Ik gall puccha ji" jassa poli aawaz ch boleya.

" Ji" simran ne chah da ik gutt bhardeya keha.

" Sir kall de rolle karke dukhda hai ya glass gwachan karke?" jassa usdiya ankhan ch dekhda hoya puchda hai.

Eh sunke simran ne pairan thalleo zameen nikkal gayi.

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