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1)Simran 13 46.43%
2)Pammi 5 17.86%
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4)Manjeet 1 3.57%
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Doven putla ban khadi rahian. Phir simran nu pata nahi ki hoya. Usne ungli chakk naal lagde khetan di sadak wal ishaara kita. Muhon oh kuch na boli. Ishaare de mutabak sabh thaneedar udhar nu chal paye.

Pammi hairaan ho ke usnu dekhan laggi. Usnu samaj nahi aa rahi c ki usne galat ishaara kyun kita?

"tu paagal e? thalle dekh khoon kidhar nu ja reha" pammi ne zameen wal ishaara kita. Khoon de nishaan kamaad wal nu jaa rahe c " je thaneedar dekh lende fir? Fass sakdi c tu"

Par simran ne koi jawaab na ditta. Oh bas tiktika laga kamaad wal vekh rahi c.

" main tainu keh rahi aa simran" Usnu modhe to hilayundi hoi zordaar aawaz ch pammi boli.

" ki hoya didi?" simran jiven kise supne chon bahaar aayi hove. Ik pal layi usne idhar-udhar dekhya te phir usnu jiven hosh aa gayi.

" tu sahi ishaara kyun nahin ditta?" pammi khij ke boli.

" oh didi...bass...m.m...mainu us bande diya akhan ch sachayi nazar aayi" simran neevi aawaz ch jawaab dindi hai. " Jiven umran da dard usne handaya hove"

" naa tun ankhan chon hi padh leya..? oh v ik pal dekhan naal..! " pammi hairan hundi hai . " Ik gall dassa vaise...? Eh chor-ucchake jinne bhole shaklo lagde aa, unnne hunde nahin ...aahoo"

" Mainu jo laggeya main dass ditta didi...tuhadi gall v sahi aa uven" Simran ne sir hilandeya keha.

" chal chaliye jaldi..phir kite goli na chall jaave" pammi ne keha. Phir doven tez pairan nal ghar wal nu chal paayian.

Oh doven adhi waat hi poori kiti c ki dobara ton goli challan di aawazan aayun laggiya "thahhhh...thishhhhhhhh.....thahhhhhhhhhh". Oh buri tarah darr gayian.

Ghar jana aukha ho gya. Lok jehre v bahar c oh ghar andar vadh gaye. Sabh ne darwaze band kar laye. Aale dwaale dekhya tan khabbe paase ik jagah nazar aayi jisda darwaza khulla si. Usde gate upar vadde vadde akhsara ch likhya c " REHAM BABA DA DERA". Pammi pehla tan udhar jan nu kadam putte par phir achanak usne kadam rok laye. Simran ne v usda hath fadh leya. Asal ch oh doven rabb ch poora vishwaas rakhdiyan sn. Sirf apne dharam di jagah te hi mattha tekdian sn. Par kadi kise dere nahi gyian c.

"thahhhhhh....thahhhhhhhh....thishhhh...." goli diya aawazan hun rukan da naam nain ley rhian sn. Aawaz aini zordaar ki koi v darr jaave. Hun ghar tak jana aukha c. Dere ch jaan to ilawa hor koi chaara dis nahi c reha. Unha de baapu ne v kise v dere jan ton mana kita c. Eh v darr unha de dimaag ch ghum reha c.

Akhir pammi dil haar gayi. Oh dere wal vadhi, par simran ne usnu phir picche khich leya.

" pagal ho gayi ee? Marna hai tun? aaja challiye" pammi aapni baah shudayundi boli. Par simran ne pakad dhilli nahi kiti. " eh v rabb da ghar hi aa"

" nahin didi...asi apne dharam de pakke rehna. Yaad nahin Husanpreet beeji sanu satsang ch samjayunde hunde a. Ik te bharosa rakhna chahida.." Simran pyaar naal usnu samjayundi hain. " So aayo ghar chaliye...je us ik te bharosa hain tan"

Pammi kol isda koi jawaab nahin c. Usne kuch der socheya. Phir oh v himmat kar simran di gall mann gayi. Doven jania mooh ch koi mantar padhdiyan apne ghar wal nu chal payian. Golian diya aawaza hale v aa rahian sn. Par doven apni bhakti ch leen hoiyan ghar sahi salamat pujj gyian.

Goli di aawazan sun shaam tak sara pind laghbhag ikatha ho gaya c. Kayi bande tan thanedaaran nal v galbaat karde dise. Unha ne bahut koshish kiti usnu labhan di, par oh anshapata naqaabposh kite na labbeya. Shaam nu oh khaali hath hi vapis mude. Par pind walya nu savdhaan rehan layi keh ke gaye.

{ LODHE WELE} (SHAAM)

" ah banto dasdi c ki shattheya badmaash aa oh banda jisnu aj thanedaar labde c" Pammi te simran di maa ( Manjeet) roti khandi hoyi makhan ( pammi-simran da peo) nu keh rahi c.

" aaho...asi khet ch c, goli di aawaz sun shindi da seeri bhajja-bhajja aaya...kehnda daaku varh aya sade pind" makhan rot khanda bolda hain. Shindi pind da vaasi hai jisde khet makhan de khetan naal lagde hain.

Roti khandian pammi te simran chupchap kol beh sabh gallan sun rhian sn. Pammi usnu ghoor rahi c jiven hale v galat ishaara den te taana de rahi hove.

" maadha sama aa gaya...jawaan munde chori-chakari ch pai gaye..rabb bhala kare sab da" manjeet sir te hath maardi hoi kehndi hain. " ni kudio ajj sabh andar hi soyuge..."

" ji " dona ne dheemi aawaz ch jawaab ditta.

" Nale putt khyaal rakheo...koi khadka hove ya aawaz aave..aap kunda nahi kholna..mainu jaga dena" makhan doven dhiyan nu samja reha hain. " dudh pee ke so jaoo shabaash"

Doven ne haan ch sir hilaya. Roti khaan to baad bhande-tinde saambhe. Phir dudh garam karke sarya nu ditta te aap v peeta. Sabh kamm nabeedh manje te pai gyian. Jhat hi dona nu neend aa gayi. Kuj der magro makhan te manjeet di v akhh lag gayi.

( RAAT KAREEB 1.30 BAJE)

Simran di neend achanak tutti. Usnu pishaab lagga c. Har raat usnu is vele hi pressure painda c. Oh manje to uth khadi hoyi. Hun usnu khyaal aaya ki sabh andar sutte hain, baapu ne keha c ki bahar nahin jana, ya aawaz deke jaana hain.

" Hun ki kahugi? pishaab karna hain.." oh man ch sochan laggi. " kisnu jagavan?"

( Roz oh bahar verhee ( Virandah) ch hi sonde c. Bathroom vehree ch hi darwaze kol lagge nalke naal banya c. Bathroom wale kamre di koi shatt nahin c, naa hi chaar diwaari ucchi c. Udo oh chupchap uthe baith kar lendi c)

" shadd tun...jaldi hi karke aa janni aa, je koi jaag gaya tan keh dyungi phir" usde man ch khyaal aaya. Usne chupchap chapplan paayian te darwaze kol jaa kundi khol layi. Bahar ghupp hanera c. Sirf chandrme di thodi bahut roosshni c. Oh bahar nikal gayi. Dabbe pairan nal nalke wal kadam putte. Raat di thandi hawa usde suit nu cheerke paseene nal lathpath gore badan nu thandak pahuncha rahi c. Akhir oh bathroom tak pahunch gayi.

Oh bhunje pabba bhaar baith gayi te fatafat naala khol salwaar goddeyan tak karli. Nehre ch sirf kaali kameez , lakk te lapeti chitte rang di kasshi te goddeya tak uttri kaali salwar nazar aan laggi. Doven hath paake usne kasshi v utaar godeyan tak salwaar de barabar karti. Usdi fuddi hun nangi c. Dono chitddan ton v salwaar hat chukki c. Par nehre hon karke koi kujh dekh nahin sakda c.

"shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" fuddi chon nikalde pishaab di aawaz aayun laggi. Hanere ch hun bindeya di aawaz ton ilawa usde pishaab di aawaz v goonj de rahi c. Dhaar bahut jabardast c, tanhi poore zor naal zameen nal takra rahi c. Pishaab kardi hoi de chehre te sukoon nazar aaya. Jiven kayi ghanteya ton rokya pishaab hun kita hove. Pishaab karan ton baad oh khadi ho gayi. Kasshi upar kiti. Phir salwaar upar kar naala bann leya.

Oh ghar andar vadh hi rahi c ki achanak usnu koi aawaz sunayi ditti. Jiven koi ghuspus kar reha hove. Usnu apne baapu di gall yaad aayi ki koi v aawaz aaye, kujh nahi karna, sirf baapu nu jaga dena. Oh dobara kamre wal nu vadhi.

" paani...pp...pp..paaani...." aawaz phir ton aayi. Is baar saaf-saaf suni ja sakdi c. Simran aawaz sun dehel gayi. Dhyaan nal sunan te saaf pata lagda c ki aawaz baharle darwaze kolo aa rahi aa. Jiven bahar koi khada hove.

Simran nu achanak pata nahin ki hoya. Oh piche ghum gayi. Usne sidha bahar darwaze wal nazar ghumayi. (TBC)

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wow amazing yaar. You have erotically created the scene of simran at night . Her big ass is my favorite. Hats off to you.. The story has right mixture of suspense and sex.
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bahut hi vadia , suspense kamaal hunda tuhadi stories vich ... waiting for next
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baa kamaal lekhni a tuhadi.....us bhagode da te police da sohna suspense create kita a tusi....upro simran da uste vishwash krna...hun ta shayad simran usde kol v chle jawe....dekhde a ki hundaa agge
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Bhot vdia likh rye oo 22 interesting bandi ja ryi aa story dekhde aa ki kuj hunda agde....

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Bhai apki update Hmesha bindaas hoti h. Ye wala update bhi mast shapa h. Too good.

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