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Sirf 5 ghante ki neend ke baad ab tabiyat kaisi hai huzur ki??
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gajab sarkar par niharika ka kam or hamari jyada halat kharaab ho rahi thi.... wasie rai sahab or unki patni dono is updt ke anusaar bohot hi bhale dikhai de rahe hai.. aage ka pata nahi hai... bohot hi behtareen likha hai sarkar.... kahani aisi hai ki man kar raha hai ki puri ki puri kahani ek hi saans me padhta chala jau..... or sarkar updt likhne ke naam par me busy hota hoon padhne ke naam par nahi is liye aap chinta na kare or kosis kare ki kam se kam samay me jyada se jyada updt likhne ki......


aapko pasand aa jaye to baat hee kya Sarkar. Aise hee pyare aur manbhavan cmments evam sujhaav dete rahiyegaa.
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Sirf 5 ghante ki neend ke baad ab tabiyat kaisi hai huzur ki??
5min ki bhee neend nahi aane ke karan dosto ki chitthi-patri baanchane chala aaya.
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wow nice update alok bhai

story jaise jaise aage barte ja raha hai suspense hote ja raha hai. aise likh te rahe ya alok bhai aur ha :kahani abhi baki hai :

waiting for next update

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@ jawed ji aap to larki ki naam pe jada dhyan de rahi hai ji

mare gurudev ki boli huyi ek baat yaad aa giya : hum pyer karte hai aap se koyi mazak nahi :
jawed bhai! Aap ye kya kar rahi hain abhi dada select bhi nahi kar payi aur aapne dono ko lapak lee
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bhaiya aapne update diya or bataya bhi nhi huh...

galat baat

welll now reading...

fir comment krti hu
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bhaiya bhut badhiya update... abhi detail main review nhi de rahi hu... aapki story k karan cell se login kiya hai

bt jaldi 1st nd 2nd update ka detailed review dungi...

chhutaki ke reviews ka to bade-2 writers ka intjaar rahta hai, meri to baat hee kya.
4 ur appreciative words
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5min ki bhee neend nahi aane ke karan dosto ki chitthi-patri baanchane chala aaya.
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I have always appreciated you as a reader and the way you reply...decent....intelligent....sociable and matured...although there is no actual inter linking... still in my mind...I always considered my-self, yourself and javedji as one club members and coincidentally our replies also appear serially and sequentially most of the time....when I find a story under your signature, how I could have left it unnoticed...moreover the story it-self appears quite interesting right from the beginning........

Language is very homely.....plot seems jabardast....it will be enchanting once the story takes the required pick up.....carry on buddy ......there are enough admirers to appreciate and encourage your good work and “YOURSELF “ emerging as a promising writer........

your kind n lovely words are too precious for me. U just make me feel honoured by all ur words. M glad that u liking my effort. Keep suggesting n cmmenting as it alws required.
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aalok bhai bahut hi badhiya ja rahe hai

niharika kitana sundar naam hai aur sath me sulochana

ab aage update ka intajar me aap ka
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First of all Congratulation for starting new story....

abhi tak story nahi padhi... abhi padh ke counter reply deta hun...

Sorry NTS bro....

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