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My dear friends & girlfriends First episode Ek Tha Launda & 2nd Episode Launde ki Masti posted earlier and now continuing the journey ahead.Thanks to all readers and friends as you like my story and it provides me lots of support to continue further in better way. Keep reading and post your comments.

Episode : Three

Ye kya hua Launde


Us kamre me high voltage music ke beech ladkiya us ladke ke saath kud rahi thi, to kabhi uske god me to kabhi use apne god me bitha rahi thi. Uska bhi man khila hua tha aur un ladkiyon ke madmast badan se ragar kha kha ke uske hathiyar ka haal kisi tuffan se jhoojhte huye ganne ke ped ki tarah tha jo kabhi ek disha me jhukta to kabhi dusre disha me lekin apni jameen ko pakde huye tha, ab dekhna ye tha ki tab tak apne aapko sambhal ke rakh sakta hai.

Uski nazar sneha ke bade bade nitambo ke upar hi tha, jab bhi dusri ladkiya sneha ko uske god me bithate uska man gadgad ho jata tha, uski phooli aur mulayam gaddedar nitamb se dabkar uska hathiyar rasta talashna suru kar deta , ek do baar to usne apne hath ko uske kamar pe rakh ke use sahi rasta dikhane ki koshish bhi ki lekin sneha ko ye sab thoda ajeeb lagta aur vo uske god se uth jati aur phir vo agli bari ka intejar karne lagta.

Abhi use wahan aaye aadha ghanta hua tha aur un ladkiyon ne use masal masal ke laal kar diya tha. Lekin vo daar ke maare unke samano ko hath nahi laga raha tha, ladkiya bhi uske badan se apne badan ko ragar to rahe the lekin abhi tak apne kapdo ko nikala nahi tha, bas eske niche se pura nanga kar diya tha. Uske hathiyar ko hath me leke kabhi hilane lagti to kabhi apne nitambo ko uske hathiyar se ragarne lagti.

Jaise jaise us kamre me garmi badh rahi thi , uska man un logon ko nanga dekhne ka kar raha tha.

“ aur launde , kisi aurat ko nanga dekha hai kabhi tune” puja ne uske hathiyar ko hath me lete huye kaha.

“nahi memsaab , maine kabhi nahi dekha aajtak” usne kisi nadan balak ki tarah kaha.

“ kya naam hai tera? “ sneha ne uske kandhe pe hath rakhte huye kaha.

“ mera naam suraj hai memsaab” usne sneha ki or dekhkar bola.

“ ab ye sab chhoro aur bride ko khush karo tum” kajal ne use kaha aur sneha ko aankh mari.

“ yaar mere se nahi hoga ye sab abhi” sneha ne sarmate huye kaha.

“ try to kar lo didi kya hoga, kuchh nahi” puja ne us se kaha aur use kisi dulhan ki tarah ki sahara dete huye suraj ke hathiyar ke samne lake khara kar diya.

Sneha ki chutar suraj ki tarah ko thi aur aur puja ne sneha ke jeans ke button ko khola aur uske jeans ko niche karne lagi, suraj sab kuchh dekh raha tha aur uska dil aur jor jor se dharakne laga tha. Sneha ne apni aankhe band kar li thi aur jaise hi puja ne uske jeans ko neeche kiye uske chutar pe chipki huyi uski red colour panty suraj ke aankho ke samne thi. Agle hi pal puja ne sneha ki us panty ko bhi neeche kar diya aur suraj ke samne me gori gori chamakti huyi chutar thi jise namga dekh uska hathiyar kisi rod ki tarah sidha khara ho gaya tha aur uske andar ghusne to taiyaar tha.

“ chal be launde suru kar apna kaam, aaj teri kismet bhi khulne bali hai..kabhi aisi dekhi bhi nahi hogi aur aaj tujhe bajane ko mil rahi hai” kajal ne use kaha aur sab log hasne lage. Sneha aankhe band kiye huye intezar kar rahi thi.

Tabhi darbaje pe kisi ne hath marte huye use kholne keliye kaha. Us kamre me kahre sab logon ko jaise shock lag gaya, haste huye sabki aawaj gayab ho gayi , ye sab dekhke puja aage badhi.

“ ruko tum log, dekhta hu kaun hai…dadu ne kaha tha ki koi disturb nahi karega hume” vo aage badhte huye boli. Sneha abhi bhi aankhe band kiye huye thi use music ki aawaj sunai pad rahi thi aur vo es intezar me thi ki kab suraj apna hathiyar andar dalega.

Puja ne darbaja khola aur samne aur koi nahi uske dadu hi the Thakur mahavir pratap.

“ dadaji aap, yahan es samay?” puja samajh hi nahi pa rahi thi ki kya bole aur kaise roke.

“ kyo main nahi dekh sakta ki tum log kya kar rahe ho..hatho aage se” Thakur saab ne puja ko side me kiya aur kamre ke andar kadam rakha.

Andar aate hi unki najar sneha ke nange badan pe padi aur saath me uske pichhe khare huye suraj pe. Unka dimag kharab ho gaya ye sab dekhkar.

“sneha ye sab kya hai………..” unhone jor se awaaj lagai aur aankhe band kiye sneha ke kano ko cheerati chali gayi. Usne aankhe kholi to dekha ki dadaji uski taraf dekh rahe hai aur gusse se unka chehra tamtama raha hai. Use dhyan aaya ki uski jeans aur panty nikli huyi hai aur jaldi se apni panty se saath jeans ko upar kiya aur use thik karne lagi. Sab daar gaye the, kajal ne music band kar diya aur daru ki bottle ko side kar diya. Suraj bhi samajh chukka tha ki aba age kuchh bura hone wala hai usne bhi apne kapdo ko thik karna suru kiya.

Puja daud ke Thakur saab ke paas aayi aur apne hath jorkar us se binate karne lagi.

“ dadu, humse galti ho gayi hume maaf kar do” usne apni aankhe neeche kiye huye thi.

“ main masti karne ko kaha tha , na ki ye sab….tum logon ke apna sansar bhula diya hai kya? Hum etne bhi advance nahi ho gaye ki masti ke naam pe ye sab karne lage” Thakur saab gusse me lal pile ho rahe the.

Sneha ko to samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha ki vo kya kare, uske paav jaise jam se gaye the, vo hil bhi nahi rahi thi.
Baki ladkiyo ke bhi tote ude huye the, unhe es baat ka daar lag raha tha ki kahi kuchh baat aage badh gayi to musibat ho jayegi un ke liye.

Puja ne morcha sambhala hua tha “ dadu…hum mante hai ki galti kar baithe lekin esko yehi finish karte hai..logon ko agar pata chala to hamari hi izzat pe padega” usne dadaji ko samjhane ki koshish ki.

“ tumhe ab izzat ki padi hai , us time nahi padi thi jab ye sab kar rahe the , ek ki shadi hone wali hai dusre sab abhi unmarried hai…ye sab kaha jaroori ho gaya tumhare liye” dada ji ne ek jor ka thappar laga diya puja ke gaal pe.

Thappar etni jor ka tha ki puja ke gaal pe dadaji ki paancho ugaliya chap si gayi.

“ aap mujhe saza dena chahte ho de do dadaji , lekin baat ko yehi finish kar do” puja ne nazare jhukaye huye kaha.

“ main bhi baat aage nahi badhana chahta hu, lekin tumlogon se main baad me baat karta hu…abhi to es haram ke pille ko sabak sikhana hai” Thakur saab aage badhe aur suraj ke paas pahuche aur apna ek paanv uske sine pe de mara.

Suraj unke laat ki chot jhel nahi paya aur niche ludhak gaya, aur phir kyat ha Thakur saab ne apne lato ne niche rakh liya use ,suraj ko kuchh samajh ne nahi aa raha tha ki apne aapko bachaye kaise…bas chikhte huye unse na marne ki minnat jaroor kar raha tha, lekin Thakur ne use apne lato se marte huye bedam kar diya tha.

“ saab maine kuchh bhi apni marzi se nahi kiya , memsahib logon ne mujhe yahan bulaya tha ki alag se paisa denge esliye aaya tha main” usne apne hath jorte huye binti ki. Muske muh se khoon nikal raha tha, jagah jagah se uske kapde phat gaye the.

“ dadaji, sahi me uski koi galti nahi hai, aapne kaha tha ki ese hamare liye bulaya hai aur main ese yahan le aayi thi. Ye sahi kah raha hai maine ese jyada fee bhi dene ki baat kari thi” puja ne dadaji ko rokne ki koshish ki.

Puja ki baat sunke Thakur saab ke paanv ruke aur usne ghurke puja ki taraf dekha aur apne jeb ke andar unhone hath dala aur uske andar se usne rupiye ki gaddi nikali aur use suraj ke chehre pe marte huye kaha.

“ le pakad ye sab kuchh launde aur chup chap apne aapko ko samet kar nikal ja yahan se , esi raat ke andhere me…aur yaad rahe ki jo kuchh hua yahan pe ye baat aur kisi se bolna bhi mat..chal nikal yahan se, nahi to mere hatho tera khoon ho jayega” Thakur itni jor se dahara ki suraj ne bina kiso or dekhe huye us rupiye ki gaddi ko apne kapde me daba ke wahan se utha aur larkharate huye nikal gaya.

Usne pichhe mur kar dekha bhi nahi ki kya hua wahan , use to laga tha ki aaj uski jaan hi le li jayegi, lekin uski kismet achhi thi ki wahan se nikal paya aur vo bhi etne sare rupiyo ke saath.

Suraj ki maa apne bête ko luhlahan dekh ke cheekh hi padi thi “ ya sab kya ho gaya beta, kisne mara tumko ..kya hua tere saath” maa ka bura haal tha use dekhke.

“ kuchh nahi hua maa, main wapas aa raha tha to kuchh logon ne mere upar hamla kar diya aur usi me ye sab ho gaya..kisi tarah se apne aapko unse bach ke aaya hu” suraj ne apni maa kuchh alag baat bol ke bachna chahta tha.

Uski maa ko sayad uski baton me vishwas ki kami najar aayi lekin suraj ne use saant kiya aur use apne kapde me chupaye huye rupiye ki gaddi ko maa ke hath me diya.

“ ye le maa kal ye sare paise hum dekar apna karz chukta kar denge aur yahan se chale jayenge” suraj ne apni maa se etna kaha aur ghar ke andar chala gaya.

“ yahan se kahan jayenge, yahan apna ghar hai, apne log hai..tum kahan jana chahte ho suraj beta” maa bhi uske pichhe aate huye boli.

“ kahi bhi lekin main yahan nahi rahna chahta hu ab, main kuchh karna chahta hu..ye kya jeevan hai…main kya se kya ban gaya hu maa” usne apni maa ki or dekha aur uske aankho me aansuo ki bunde jhalak rahi thi jo agle hi pal bahni suru ho gayi.

Uske aansuo ko dekhte hi maa aage badhi aur use apne se chipka liya “ tu dukhi mat ho beta, tujhe jahan jana hai ja, main yahan tera intezar karungi..main tumhare saath rahungi to tumhare raste ko rora hi banungi…main yahan rah lungi , sab apne log hi to hai..gujara ho jayega mera, tu ja apni zindagi ji le apni tarah se”

“ lekin maa…main tumhe akele yahan nahi chhor sakta hu” suraj maa ki or dekhte huye bola.

“ meri fikar kyo kar raha hai, lekin kya karega bahar jake beta” maa ne uske chehre ko hath me liye apni ungaliyon se uske chehre pe lage khoon ko saaf karne lagi.

“ main apne baba ke sapne ko pura karunga maa, main padhunga aur ek bada aadmi ban ke hi wapas aaunga” suraj ne apni maa ko samjhana chaha, lekin usne ye nahi bataya ki aaj jo kuchh hua tha us se vo kaphi dar sa gaya tha.
Kahi dur …….

“ are mera packet hai…rama jara dekho , uske bina mera utrega bhi nahi”

“ kya kya aadat paal li hai aapne, ab mujhe kya pata ki kahan rakhi thi aur kahan gayi”

“ ab mujhe ye mat batao ki tum kya karti ho main kya, bas kahi se lakar do mujhe”

Ye sab baten ho rahi thi ek adher aadmi aur aurat ke beech jo shayad pati patni the , aur ek ladki jo un baton ko sun rahi thi.
“ are papa, kya hua?” us ladki ne aage badh kar apne papa se kaha.

“ beta dekho na , maine raat me apne cigarette ka packet rakha tha yahan..dekha kya tumne?”

“ maine li thi, ek bachi hai aap le lo” usne apne hath me pakdi us eklauti cigeratte ko uske taraf badhate huye kaha.

“ baah beta bas yehi sab rah gaya hai tumhe sikhne ko…din bhar ladko ke saath rahte rahte , laundiya se launda ban gayi kya tum bhi” uski mom ne uski tarah dekhte huye gusse me kaha aur kamre ke bahar chali gayi.

Ab aage kya hoga suraj ka? Kyo bhag raha hai sab se chhup ke ? ye ladki kaun hai? Kya suraj aur es ladki me koi samanta hai?

Aage bahut kuchh hone bala hai shayad, bas padhte rahiye , aage dekhte hai kya hota hai. Kuchh kami lage to vo bhi bata dijiye, behtar karne ki koshish karenge. To chaliye milte hai agle mahine agle episode ke saath, tab tak ke liye .






To be Continued......
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Accha ghumaya story ko ! Agar us raat wo sab ho jaata jo hone ki larkia umeed kar rahi thi tho kahani se bari naaumeedi hoti !
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Have some mercy on Xing Readers

Introducing new thing is acceptable if it results.
Before USC you started stories in Xing, one could relate it to promotion of USC. That's Ok.

now as USC is over IMO after completion of the running stories it should be discontinued. Please do not make it at 100 episode type thing.

Rather if a short story showcased in format of comic divided in 2-3 parts at max, would be better.

Leave aside NHB there are links in each part of story section, except dev bhai in NHB is there any response.

I do appreciate that you modified Rang Manch into interviews in each section. But make it short dude just crispy no details else interview looses

just my opinion you are in-charge do whatever you feel right.

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