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Old 17th February 2018
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Review on Muche huwa chachi se sacha piyar (true love story)

Es story ko likhny ki kiya zarorat thi, organizers se kehty wo waise hi dibba dedety,
Itna khatarnak accident me b chachi bach jati hai, arry bhai khuda ka khouf karty kam az kam 2,4 hafty hi ussy bister p lita dety, aur true kiya hai es me,
By the way dil chota na karo aisi story pehly kabi ni padhi
Jitna tareef ki jaye kam hai
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Dear cool_guy

I read your analysis of my story.and I think this time you have done some justice.

This is much better when I compare it with your first review.

Scathing remarks are hurtful but may be necessary but to use foul language like 'g''nd maar di' etc are something that's surely not in good taste specifically if you are talking about a fellow xossipian whom you do not know well.

Each of us can abuse. But that's NOT the intention and we can disagree without being disagreeable.

Stories will come and go but what is the requirement of being abusive while reviewing a story, I am unable to understand.

I will suggest that you should enter the contest with something thought provoking that would enrich the contest and not unnecessarily use abusive language without reason.

Abusing does not make you a cool guy.

Hopefully, you will oblige

Trambak
Sorry bro if my stupid words hurts you

I swear it was not intentionally but majak majak mein ho gaya.

I admit that a fellow member should not use foul language even he/she is disagree with the story

But kya karen To Err is Human

Sorry once again and it will be good enough if you accept my appologies and my friendship

Hope we all forget that thinkiing it as a bad dream

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Review on Muche huwa chachi se sacha piyar (true love story)

Es story ko likhny ki kiya zarorat thi, organizers se kehty wo waise hi dibba dedety,
Itna khatarnak accident me b chachi bach jati hai, arry bhai khuda ka khouf karty kam az kam 2,4 hafty hi ussy bister p lita dety, aur true kiya hai es me,
By the way dil chota na karo aisi story pehly kabi ni padhi
Jitna tareef ki jaye kam hai
Good luck for disqualification
sOry dosto mene galat section me shayad galat story ad kar di thi ab 2nd story ad ki he wo umeed karta hoon ke ap logon ko achi lage gi
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Ik mohobat aesi bhi by 123sk

Ap ne 1St story me kuxh khaas nahi kikha kekin ye story best likh,ddali he bohat acha come back kiya he is story me mere to dil ko xhoo gai he ye story
Mere tarf se is story ke liye

10 of 10

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Hosakta tha koi review deta Mager #ag mahan ne bhanda phod diya
Dost apko pehly b bola hai, dobara bol deta hoon shyd ap ne padha ni, humary organizers bady meherban hain ap sirf bol do dibba mil Jaye ga aise dosron ki mehnat p apna nam mat likhwao, and plz don't mind

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Sorry bro if my stupid words hurts you

I swear it was not intentionally but majak majak mein ho gaya.

I admit that a fellow member should not use foul language even he/she is disagree with the story

But kya karen To Err is Human

Sorry once again and it will be good enough if you accept my appologies and my friendship

Hope we all forget that thinkiing it as a bad dream


Dear cool guy

Thanks for your reply.

Surely, let's forget it and move ahead.

Love

Trambak

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आनंद पुलिया by vijay 2309

आनंद पुलिया by vijay 2309

Dear i love this sotry
Bohat acha likhty hi sir nice story
From me 10 of 10
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