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Aaj seema ka aakhiri paper tha aur tough subah subah hi naha dhokar rohtak jane ke liye nikal raha tha jab maaji ne usko toka," ajeet beta!"
"haan maa!" tough ke darwaje ke bahar jate kadam thhithak gaye...
"wo main kah rahi thhi... Ab tu umar ho hi gayi hai.. Roz tere rishtey wale chakkar kaat rahe hain.. Kal hi ek bahut achchha rishta aaya hai... Ladk bahut hi sundar, padhi likhi aur achchhe ghar se hai.. Tu kahe to main unko haan kah doon...?"
"maa.. Main bus tumhe batane hi wala thha.. Wo... Tumhare liye maine bahu dekh li hai..." tough ne thhoda sharma kar najrein jhukate huye kaha...
"arey... Tune bataya nahi... Koun hai.. Kahan rahti hai.. Tu jaldi bata de.. Main unse mil leti hoon beta.. Tere bhaiya ke videsh jaane ke baad to main bahu ke liye taras gayi hoon...
"bataaunga maa.. Bus kuchh din ruk jao!" kah kar tough bahar nikal gaya...
Maa ki aankhein chamak uthhi.... Bahu ki aas mein!
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Seema ne exam khatam hote hi tough ko fone kiya..," kahan ho?"
"sorry seema... Mujhe achanak duty par jana pad gaya.. Fir kabhi milte hain.." tough ki aawaj aayi....

Seema ki shakal par maayusi ke bhav ubhar aaye.. Roni surat bana kar wah boli," par... Main... Tum bilkul gande ho! Main ek ek din kaise gin rahi thhi.. Pata hai? Maine to aaj tumhare saath ghumne ka program banaya thha.. Chhodo.. Main tumse baat nahi karti..!"
"Ghoomne ka programe?... Sach!" tough ki baachhein khil gayi..
"aur nahi to kya... Main mummy ko bol ke bhi aayi thhi.. Ki late ho jaaungi.. Par tumne toh.. Tum sach mein bahut gandey ho..!" seema pyar se labrej gussa jhalkate boli..
"waise chalna kahan tha.. Simmy?"
"Simmy...?" kahkar seema hansne lagi," aise to meri mummy bulati thhi.. Pyar se!!"
"to main kya tumse pyar nahi karta... Bolo!" tough maska lagaane par utaaru ho gaya...
"ummm na! Karte hote to aaj yahan nahi hote kya..?"
"yahin samjho... Tumhare dil mein...!"
"dil mein hone se kya hota hai...? Mousam kitnna achchha hai.." seema aaj kuchh mood mein lag rahi thi..
"kyun irada kya hai..? Badi mousam ki baat kar rahi ho.."
"iraada to thha kuchh... Par tumhare naseeb mein hi nahi hai to hum kya karein!" seema itraate huye bolti park ki taraf aa gayi...
"aaj apna wada poora karna thha kya?" tough ne usko kabhi baad mein kiss dene ka wada yaad dilaya....
"haan karna to thha.. Par tumhari kismat hi khoti hai to main kya karoon...?"
"sach... Sach mein irada thha..." tough uchhalte huye bola..
Tough ko apne liye itna machalta dekh seema ki khushi ka thhikana na raha.. Wah yanste huye boli...," haan... Sachchi... Irada thha..!"
"to chalo chalte hain....!" tough ne pichhe se aakar uski kamar mein haatu daal liya...
"ooyiiiiiiiii..." achanak apne badan ko chhuye jaane se seema uchhal padi... Usko kya pata thha ki tough wahin se uss'se baat kar raha thha..," tummm!"
"aur kya.. Tumhare uss wade ki khatir to hum swarg se bhi wapas aa sakte hain.." tough ne uski chhati par komal ghoose barsa rahi seema ke haathhon ko pakadte huye kaha..
"oh thanx.. Ajeet! Tum aa gaye thhe... Main sach main bahut naraj ho gayi thhi.." seema ne apna sir uski chhati par tika liya...
"ab ye baatein chhodo aur apna wadey ke baare main socho...."
'wadey' ko yaad karke seema sharma kar 'chhuyi muyi' ki tarah kumhla kar tough se door hat gayi... Fone par baat aur thhi.. Aur saamne kuchh aur... Wo sharma kar idhar udhar taakne lagi...
"chalo chalte hain..." tough ne seema ka haath pakadte huye kaha..
"kahan?" seema apna hi wada yaad karke sahmi si huyi thhi..
"kahin to chalenge hi... Aao..."
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Aur gadi 5 minute mein hi seema ke ghar ke saamne thhi...
"mujhe nahi pata... Main kuchh nahi bolungi.. Tum khud hi baat kar lena.. Jo karo.." seema khusi aur sharam se mari ja rahi thhi.. Usne apni maa ko kuchh nahi bataya thha.... Abhi tak.. Wo bata hi nahi payi thhi..
"tum aao to sahi..." kaukar tough uss'se pahle hi andar ghus gaya.. Seema ki maa usko dekhkar chintit ho gayi..
" kya huaa inspecter sahab?" maa ne darwjaje ki choukhat par hi najrein jhukaye khadi seema ko dekhkar darte huye kaha...
"kuchh nahi huaa.. Mata ji..! Aap aaram se baithhiye... Mujhe aapse kuchh jaruri baat karni hai..."
Seema andar aakar apne pitaji ki taswir ki aur dekh rahi thhi... Haath jodey!
"mata ji.. Main aapki beti ko apne ghar le jana chahta hoon... Shadi karke..!"
Seema ki maa bina palak jhapakaye usko dekhne lagi....
"wo kya hai ki aap seema se poochh lo.. Wo bhi yahi chahti hai... Agar aap ijajat dein to main apni maa ko aapke paas bhej doon... Baat karne ke liye..."
Maa k aankhon se nirjhar ashru dhara nikal padi.. ," beta! Mujhe yakeen nahi hota ki hamaari beti ko uske achchhe karmon ka fal bhagwaan ne isi janam mein de diya." apni aankhein ponchhte huye usne togh ke sir ki taraf haath badha diye....
Tough ne apna sir jhuka kar unka aashirwad kabool kiya....
"beti" maa ne seema ki taraf dekhte huye kaha..
Seema aakar apni maa ki chhati se lipat kar rone lagi.. Maano usko aaj hi wida leni ho.. Apni sasural jaane ke liye...
"kya hua beti tum khush to ho na shadi se..." maa beti ko rota dekh poochh baithhi..
Apne aansuon ka galat matlab nikalta dekh seema ne jhat se apni tone badal di...," haan maa! Main chay banati hoon.. Aap log baithhiye..."
"Main 2 minute mein aayi beti" kahkar maa bahar nikal gayi...
Tough ne jaate hi seema ke haath pakad liye.. Aur gungunane laga," jo wada kiya hai wo... Nibhana padegaaa.."
Wada yaad aate hi seema ke gaalon par sharam ki laali aa bikhri.. Najrein jhuk gayi aur hont larjne lagey....

Unke milan ki ghadi ab door nahi thhi....

Seema jab apne haathhon ko tough ki pakad se chhudane ki koshish karne lagi to tough ne usko chhod diya... Seema uski chhati se lipat gayi... Prembel ki tarah!
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Vicky ne aarti ko fone kiya," haan sneha! Maine tujhe wo kaam karne ko kaha tha.. Kya raha?"

Aarti: sir, maine aapko pahle hi kaha thha. Wo aisi ladki nahi hai.. Main usko achchhi tarah jaanti hoon... Wo jaan de degi.. Par apne usoolon se nahi digegi...

Vicky: mujhe bhasan mat do... Sirf mujhe ye batao wo kitne mein milegi...

Aarti: Sorry sir.. Maine har tarah se try kiya, par ulta usne mujhe khari khoti suna di... Aur uski to shadi bhi hone wali hai.. Shayad agle hafte.. No chance sir!

Vicky: saali.. Randi.. Vicky ke liye kahin bhi 'no chance' nahi hai.. Agar mujhe wo nahi mili to tujhe mere kutton se chudwaanga...

Kahkar vicky ne fone kaat diya... Sharaab ke nashe mein dhutt uski laal aankhhon mein ek hi chehra tair raha tha... Seema!

36 ghante se bhi kum samay mein vicky ne uske baare mein har jaankari hasil kar li thhi.. Par kahin se bhi usko positive response nahi mil raha tha.. Har kisi ne usko 'no chance' hi jawaab diya thha....
Aaj tak vicky jitni ladkiyon ko apne haram meim laya.. Wo aisa ya waise seedhi ho hi gayi thhi.... Par Seema ne to usko pagal hi kar diya thha.... Vicky ko uska apne gore sundar chehre se apni lut hatana.. Najrein jhukayein... Chhati par kitab rakhe uski aur aana... Rah rah kar yaad aa raha tha.... Seema pahli ladki thhi jisne uske paise aur hasiyat ko itni jabardast thhokar mari thhi... ' No chance '

Vicky ne apna gilas khali karke jameen par de maara... Maano sheeshe ke toote huye gilas ka har tukda uss par hans raha ho... Par vicky ka ghamand tootne ka naam hi nahi le raha thha.... I will rape her...
''I WILL RAPE HER!" vicky ki hunkar se kothi ka kona kona kaanp uthha.. Usko khane ki poochhne aa raha noukar darwaje par thhithak gaya...

Vicky ne botal munh se lagayi aur ek hi saans mein bachi sharaab apne galey se neeche utaar li...
Nasha had se jyada badh gaya thha... Vicky ne doubara aarti ko fone lagaya, saali.. Kutiya... Mujhe no chance bola... Usko to main chodunga hi... Tujhe agar university ke har ladke ke neeche na litaya to mera naam vicky nahi... Nangi karke doudaaunga saali... Aur sun le.. Usko uski suhag raat se pahle chodunga... Main todunga uski seal.. Main.. Vicky!" vicky ke har shabd se uska rutba.. Uska paisa.. Aur uska hathh tapak raha thha...

"pls sir..." ladki ki aawaj kaanp rahi thhi...," aap jo kahoge.. Main karne ko taiyaar hoon... Pls.. Maine apni taraf se poori koshish ki hai .. Main fir koshish karoongi.. Mujhe maaf kar dijiye sir..." bhay ke maarey wo rah rah kar atak rahi thhi...

"Ab tu kuchh nahi karegi.. Ab main karunga.. Tu sirf ye bata.. Wo university aati kab hai.." vicky har shabd ko chaba chaba kar bol raha thha..

"sir.. Ab to exam khatam ho gaye.. Shayad wo ab nahi aayegi...!"
"chup.. Behan ki... To kya main usko ghar se uthha kar laaunga... Bula usko.. Kahi bhi... Kaise bhi..."

"ssssir.. Wo... Mere kahne se nahi aayegi...!"

"haaaap.... Madarchod... Agar tune kal sham 4 baje tak usko kisi bhi tarah se nahi bulaya.. Kahi bahar to samajh lena.. Tu gayi..."

Kahkar vicky ne fone kaat diya aur kapdon samet hi jaker shower ke neeche khada ho gaya... Usko seema chahiye thhi... Har haalat mein...

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Apni jindagi aur ijjat ganwane ke darr se agle din sahmi huyi aarti ne apni ek saheli ko koi bahut jaruri kaam kahkar library bula liya... Aur usko bol diya ki seema ko jaroor lekar aana hai..... Aarti ko pata thha.. Seema uss ladki ke kahne par aa sakti hai...

Aur huaa bhi yahi.... Aarti ke kahne par vicky apni dusri gaadi liye taiyaar khada thha... University gate se thhodi pahle... Z black colour ke sheeshon wali gadi bhi black color ki hi honda city thhi... Aarti ne vicky ko bata diya thha ki unka fone aa gaya hai aur wo bus aane hi wali hain......

Aur vicky ko seema aati dikhayi de gayi... Usi style mein.. Apni laton ko suljhati... Najrein jhalein.. Fark sirf itna thha ki aaj wo saamne se aa rahi thhi... Bajay ki back view mirroe mein dikhayi dene ke...
Vicky pichhli seat par baithha tha.. Driver ne ishara pate hi gadi start kar li... Jab kareeb teen char kadam ka hi faasla rah gaya to vicky achanak gadi se utra.. Seema ka dhyan uss par nahi thha... Wo to najrein jhukayein chal rahi thhi...

Jaise hi wo pichhli khuli khidki ke saamne aayi.. Vicky ne bina waqt gawaaye uski baanh pakdi aur car ke andar dhakel diya.. Achanak lagey iss jhatke se seema apne aapko bacha na saki aur vicky turant andar baithh gaya.. Gadi chal di...

Uske saath wali ladki awaak si khadi dekhti rah gayi.. 2 minute tak usko jaise lakwa maar gaya ho.. Aur jab usko hosh aaya.. To shor macha kar bachane waala kuchh wahan bacha hi na thha......
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Seema achanak huye iss hamle se hatprabh hokar rah gayi... Pahle to wah apni aankhein vismay se faadey vicky ko dekhne lagi.. Aur jab hosh aaya to pagal si
hokar car ke seeshon par hath maar kar chillane lagi.. Par z- Black sheeshon mein kisi ko kya dikhayi dena thha... Ant mein wah vicky ko apni aur ghoorta pakar dusri taraf wali khidki se chipak kar anunay bhari najron se vicky ko dekhne lagi..," y.. Ye kya kar rahe ho... Pls mujhe neeche utaar do...!"
Vicky par uski yachna ka koi prabhav na pada... Wah apni jeet par garv se tana baithha thha... Usko laga.. Seema uski ho chuki hai... Uss raat ke liye...
Kareeb 5-6 minute mein hi car kothi ke gairaaj mein ja ruki... Jaise hi driver ne chabi nikali, 'cut' ki aawaj ke sath khidkiya unlock ho gayi.. Seema ne turant khidki kholi aur car se nikal kar bhagi.. Vicky ne usko rokne ki koshish nahi ki...

Gairaj ka main gate band ho chuka thha... Pichhe ki taraf se 4 seedhiyan chadhkar ek darwaja thha... Wo kahte hain ke jab mout aati hai to geedad shahar ki aur bhagta hai.. Seema bhi usi aur bhagi.. Rasta seedha galary se hokar bedroom mein jata thha... Bhagti huyi seema ko galary mein khade kareeb 6.5 feet ke kaddawar bodyguard ne pakad liya...
"haraamjadey... Chhod use.." vicky ki gurrati aawaj sunte hi bodyguard 2 kadam pichhe hatkar neeche sir karke khada ho gaya..," Sorry Sir!.. Main to aapki khatir..."
"kya M.P. Sahab aaye hain?" vicky ne uske paas Aate huye poochha...
"ji... Sir.. Bus abhi aaye hain...."
"kya program hai... ?" vicky ne palat'te huye bodyguard se poochha..
"din bhar yahin hain... Shayad raat ko jayeinge.. Aalakamaan ke paas.. !"

Vicky apni chal tej karte huye bedroom mein ghusa.... Seema ek kone mein dubaki baithhi thhi... Mantri uske paas hi khada apne gande daanton mein toothpick fasaye.. Besharmi se apna kurta upar karke pate par haath fer raha thha...," aaye haaye.. Chhamiyan.. Kitna sexy gift lekar aaya hai vicky mere liye... Tere jaisi haseen ko chode arsaa ho gaya... Waise pahle kabhi chudwaii ho ki nahi..."
Seema diwar se chipki jameen mein najrein gadaye kaanp rahi thhi... Apne hi shahar mein inn anjaan bhediyon se seema ko raham ki koi ummeed nahi thhi... Uski paas koi raasta nahi thha.. Sivay gidgidane ke.....," Sir.. Pls... Aap to mere pitaji ki umar ke hain... Mujhe jaane dijiye na... Pls... Main aapke pair padti hoon... Usko kahiye.. Mujhe chhod de... Aapko yaad hoga.. Aapne hi pichhle saal mujhe best athlete ka award diya tha.. Annual function mein... Aapne mujhe beti kaha thha sir...."

Neta shikari billi ki tarah apne daant dikhata bola...," main to betichod hoon beti... Meri to samajh mein hi nahi aata ki maine agar tujhe chode bina tujhe award de diya to ye chamatkaar kaise ho gaya..... Khair.. Koyi baat nahi... Sham tak byaj samet wasool kar loonga....!"

"Gud morning sir!" vicky ne andar aate hi netaji ka dhan apni aur kheencha..," very gud morning vicky bhai... Bus yun samajh lo.. Tumhari parti ki taraf se iss baar m.l.a. Ki ummeedwari pakki... Waise kahan se le aaya iss udankhatole ko... Kitni maasoom si dikhayi deti hai... Tu bhi yaar kamaal kar deta hai.... Chal ab thhodi der bahar intzaar kar...." neta ne apna kameej utaarkar apna poori baju wala baniyan utaarne ki taiyaari karne laga.....
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Vicky ne seema ki aankhon ki maasumiyat aur pavitrata ko pahli baar gour se dekha.. Bhay se faili huyi badhawaas aankhon mein iss waqt yaachna ke alawa kuchh nahi thha.. Haan... Nami bhi bharpoor thhi jo darr ke karan aansoono mein badal nahi pa rahi thhi..... Seema ki najrein vicky ki aankhon se milte hi uske dil mein utarti chali gayi... Jaane kyun uska dil chaha ki wah seema ko yun hi jaane de... Par ab wah uske haath mein nahi thha... Uska shikaar uss'se bhi badey saiyaar ke haath mein thha... Ganpat rai ke haathhon mein.. Wah party ka ek kaddawar neta tha, aur iss baar unki sarkaar aate hi C.M. ki kursi sambhalne wala thha...
Aur vicky ko ticket uske hi kahne par milne wala thha... Jo ki vicky ka rajniti par raaj karne ke sapne ko poora karne wala pahla kadam hota...
Vicky nirash hokar bahar nikalne hi wala thha ki uske fone par tough ki call aa gayi...
Vicky wahin khada hokar fone sun'ne laga...," haan ajeet!"
ajeet shabd sunte hi Seema ki aankhon mein dabey pade aansoo chhalak uthhe... Kash! Ye uska ajeet hota....!
"yaar... Kahan hai tu... Main rohtak mein hi hoon... Tujhse milkar ek khushkhabri sunani hai..
"bol bhai!" vicky ne anmane mann se kaha... Uska dhyaan ab bhi seema ki aur hi thha... Wah ganpat ke apni aur badh rahe haathhon ko baar baar apne se door hatane ki koshish karti huyi idhar udhar sarak rahi thhi...
"main shadi karne wala hoon... Isi hafte... Tujhe meri seema se milwana thha yaar... Par wo pata nahi kyun nahi aayi.. Aaj department mein... Socha tumhi ko fone laga kar bula loon tab tak...."
"Seema..?????" vicky ko unhoni ki boo aayi... Kahin yahi to ajeet ki seema....." vicky andar tak hil gaya.. Usne tough ki call ko mute par dala aur seema se mukhatib huaa...," kya tumhari shadi ajeet...?"
Apne top ke galey mein hath daley ganpat ke haath ko apne dono haathon se pakde apni ijjat bachane ki koshish kar rahi seema chilla padi..," haan.. Haan... Pls mujhe bachao.. Pls!" seema kabhi vicky ke chehre ke udey huy rang aur kabhi ganpat ke panje ko dekhti chillayi...!
"isko chhod do sir...!" vicky ne vinamrata se magar aadesh dene waley lahje mein ganpat ko rokne ki koshish ki....
"chal be!... Tu abhi tak yahin khada hai... Bahar nikal ja aur jab tak main na kahoon.. Andar mat aana... Bahut garam hai sali ye to... Bahut der mein thhandi hogi...."
"main kahta hoon ruk ja ganpat! Warna achchha nahi hoga..!" kapde ke fatne ki aawaj sunkar vicky apna aapa kho baithha... Seema uske dost ki jaan thhi...
"kyun be saale.. Teri kya behan lagti hai.. Jo itni fat rahi hai... Aur fir lagti bhi hogi to kya huaa... Main tujhe ticket dilwane ja raha hoon.. Pata hai na!" kahte huye ganpat ne ek jor ka jhataka dekar seema ke angon ko dhake huye top ko cheer diya... Iske sath hi seema ki cheekh nikal gayi... Goli uss'se 6 inch doori se gujri thhi.. Seedhi ganpat ke galey ke aar paar... Ganpat ka bhari bharkam shareer dhadam se farsh par gir pada... Seema apne angon ko apni hathheliyon mein sametey huye aankhein band karke baithh gayi... Dari sahmi....

Goli ki aawaj sunte hi body guard ek pal bina gawaayein apni Stengun taaney andar ghusa... Aur apni rivolver ki naali ko dekh rahe vicky par gun taan di... Usne dekha... Ganpat ko ab body guard ki jarurat nahi padegi... Uski body mein saans bache hi nahi thhe.....
"sala.. Ab mujhe hi aalakamaan ke paas jana padega... Ticket lene ke liye..." vicky ne guard ko dekhte huye kaha....

Guard samajh gaya... Politics mein power aani jaani cheej hai...," iska kya karna hai sir......
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icky apne chehre ko apne pak ho chuke hathon se dhak kar sofe par baith gaya.. Usmein apni hone wali bhabhi ka saamna karne ki himmat nahi ho rahi thhi... Ganpat ko tapkaane ka usko katai afsos nahi thha par apne jaani dost ki jaan ke
saath anjaane mein jo kuchh wah karne ja raha tha; uske paschatap ki agni ne uski aatma ko buri tarah jhulsa diya tha... Jo kuchh bhi wo aaj tak karta raha thha.. Wah sab uska nihayat hi bachkana lagne laga... Usko aaj ye ahsaas ho raha thha ki mard ki hawas ka shikar ban'ne wali ladkiyan hamesha hi paraya maal nahi hoti.. Wo bhi kisi na kisi ki behan hoti hongi, beti hoti hongi, jaan hoti hongi.... Aur hone wali
bhabhi hoti hongi.....
Seema ne apne aap ko jaise taise sambhal kar chadar mein lapeta.. Aur apna fone dhhoondhne lagi... Par shayad fone gadi mein ya kahin sadak par hi gir gaya thha...
Vicky baar baar aa rahi tough ki calls uthhane ki himmat nahi kar pa raha thha... Aakhir mein usne fone seema ki aur badha diya...
," hello!"
"ji koun?" tough sapne mein bhi seema ke wahan hone ke baare mein nahi soch sakta tha...
"main.... Main hoon jaan... Tumhari seema!"seema foot foot kar rone lagi thhi..
"seemaaaa???" kahan ho tum?"
"yahin hoon.. Tumhare dost ke paas... Sec 1 mein..." aur seema kya kahti....
Tough ke upar mano bijli si gir padi... Pata nahi ek hi pal mein usne kya kya soch liya," Seema.... Tum bhi....?" kahkar usne fone kaat diya.. Aur apne ghutne pakad kar baithy gaya... Usne seema ko galat samajh liya thha....
seema fone karti rahi par tougu ne fone na uthhaya... Usne koi safaai sun'ne ki jarurat na samjhi........
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Seema ne thhoda hichakte huye vicky ke kandhe par hath rakha," wwwoo.. Mera fone nahi utha rahe.. Pls mujhe jaldi se wahan le chalo.. Mere ajeet ke paas... Mera dum nikal raha hai yahan..." rah rah kar wo farsh par padi ganpat ki lash ko dekh leti...
"main bahut hi bura aadmi hoon seema ji... Maine aaj tak ladki ko khilouna hi samjha tha.. Mujhe nahi maloom tha ki ye ek din mere hathon ko khoon aur visvaasghat se rang denge.... Par mujhe kuchh ho jaye.. Parwah nahi... Main tumhare beech ki galatfahmi ko door karke rahunga..." kahkar vicky ne fone uthhaya aur tough ke paas msg bhej diya..' seema ko main jabardasti utha laya tha.. Main bahut sharminda hoon bhai... Tum kothi par aa jao!'

Jab tough ne apne fone par ye msg dekha to wah pahle hi kothi ke bahar aa chuka thha.. Intkaam ki aag mein jhulsata hua... Badla lene ke liye.. Seema aur vicky dono se....
Msg padhne ke baad uski aankhein aur laal ho uthhi...
Gatekeeper ne vicky ke ishare se gate khol diya.. Tough dandanata hua andar ja ghusa...
Darwaje par kadam rakhte hi basi hote ja rahe khoon ki durgandh ne uska matha thhanka diya..
Farsh par padi lash... Dushala audhe khadi subak rahi seema aur chintit vicky ko dekhkar usko apni aag thhodi der apne seene mein hi dafan kiye huye pahle poori baat jaan'ne ko vivash kar diya.. Usne seedha seema se sawaal kiya," kya hua hai yahan..?"
Apne pyar ki aankhon mein apne liye jara bhi humdardi aur pyar na pakar seema andar tak toot gayi... Hona to kuchh aur chahiye thha..Kaas uska ajeet usko bahon mein bharkar uss mar chuke giddh ke haanthon ki chhuan se lagi kalikh ko saaf kar deta... Uske halak se tadap se bhari aur mari si aawaj nikli," maine kuchh nahi kiya jaan.. Main waisi hi hoon jaisi yahan layi gayi thi.. Jabardasti.. Maine tumhara fone aane tak khud ko bachaye rakha.. Aur baad mein isne mujhe lutne se bacha liya..

Tough ko thhodi tasalli huyi.. Usne vicky ke chehre ki aur dekha.. Uske chahre par khud ke liye glani ke bhav thhe.. ," mujhe koi kuchh bataega.. Ki aakhir hua kya hai..?"
Vicky ne najrein jhuakey apne seema ke bhakshak se rakshak hone ki poori dastaan suna di...
Halanki tough ke mann mein ab bhi vicky ke liye ghrina ke bhav thhe.. Par aakhirkaar usne seema ko lutne se bachaya hi thha..

Tough bhag kar seema se jakar lipat gaya.. Seema sisak padi.. Apne yaar ki bahon mein aakar.. Uske hath chadar mein lipate thhey thhe; par uske hont aajad thhe.. Apna pyar aur begunahi pradarshit karne ke liye.. Usne tough ke galon par apne hont rakh diye.. Apna wada poora kiya.. Tough ko kiss karne ka.. Jaane kab tak wo aise hi liptey rahe... Honto ne honto ko chooma.. Apne pyar ke jinda hone ki mohar lagayi...
Tough ne seema se alag hote huye vicky se poochha... ," ye kya kar diya? Tum isko maare bina bhi seema ko bacha sakte thhe..!"
"pata nahi.. Mujhe kya ho gaya tha.. Mujhe ek pal bhi sochne ka mouka nahi mila dost..." vicky ab tak lajjit tha.. Tough se najrein nahi mila raha tha..
"tumhe pata hai.. Kya hoga? Ab iss'se kaise niptoge..?"
"jo hoga dekha jaayega dost... Par mujhe koi fikar nahi.. Sivay iss baat ke ki kya tum mujhe maaf karogey...!"
"28 taarekh ko shadi mein aa jana... Agar tab tak andar na pahuncho to!" tough ne rukhe shabdon mein usko apni shadi ka nyota diya aur seema ko apne se sataye bahar nikal gaya...
Seema ko sunkar aseem sukh mila.. '28 taareekh!'
Gadi mein baithte hi seema ne tough ki aur dekha," kya tum mujhe kusoorvaar maan rahe ho..?"
Tough ne mushkurate huye seema ki aur dekha," 28 taareekh ko baaaunga.. Abhi bahut taiyaari karni hai..."
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Aakhir kaar wo raat aa hi gayi jis raat ka tough... Or haan, seema ko bhi beshabri se intjaar tha.. Baraat chhoti hi rakhi gayi thi par reception par tough aur uske doston ne apne saare shouk khul kar poore kiye.. Gaanv se vani aur disha bhi aayi thi... Shamsher ke sath... Vicky aaya tha magar seema ke saamne jaane se katra raha tha...
Tough uske paas jakar bola..," uska kya kiya...?"
"abhi tak to uski laas bhi nahi mili hai... Guard ko maine 2000000 dekar desh se bhaga diya... Dekhte hain kya hoga...." vicky ne tough se kaha...
"hamarey sath foto nahi khichwayga?".....
"mujhe maaf kar de yaar..."
"arey bhool ja uss baat ko... Wo sab anjane mein hua tha na! Maine teri bhabhi ko sab bata diya hai.. Wo bhi tujhse naraj nahi hai ab... Chal aa!"

Kareeb 12:00 baje sabne tough aur seema ko nayi jindagi ke liye shubhkaamnayein dekar vida kiya...

Car mein jaate huye pichhe rakhe gifts mein se ek chhota sa dibba aagey aa gira... Seema ne dibbe ko uthhaya... Uss par likha tha.." Happy married Life!"--- vicky.

"Dekhoon ismein kya hai...?"
"dekh lo!" tough ne kaha...
"nahi.. Tum guess karo!" seema ne ajeet ki doordarshita jaan-ni chahi...

"humm... Koi ghadi ya fir..... Nahi ghadi hi hogi.. Sure!" tough ne dibbe ka size dekhkar kaha...

"nahi.... Mujhe lagta hai... Ismein koi ring honi chahiye..! Chalo shart lagaate hain..." seema ko maskhari soojhi...

"kaisi shart?"

"jo tum kaho..." ab seema ko usk kisi shart se aitraaj nahi tha... Wo jaan'ti thi ki tough koi sharaarat hi karega... Shart ke bahane..!

"tum ghar tak mujhe choomti rahogi... Agar main jeeta to...!"
"aur agar main jeeti to... " seema ne thhoda sa sharmaate huye kaha...
"to main tumhe choomta rahunga...!"
"na ji na!... Fir gadi koun chalaayega..."
"rok denge!"
"fir ghar kaise pahunchenge...?"
"kya jarurat hai...."

Baaton baaton mein seema ne packing khol dali.. Aur kholte hi uchhal padi.." oyiii maa!" aur dibba uske haath se chhoot gaya...

Tough ne dekha... Dibbe mein 4 condoms rakhe thhe... Aur sath hi likha tha... Jansankhya badhane ki jaldi ho to isko use mat karna...!

Tough bhi iss shaitaani par hanse bina na rah saka... 22 saal ki umar ki seema iss gift ko dekhkar sharam se laal ho gayi... Aur bechain bhi...

Apni jaan ki baanhon mein aane ke liye... Jiske liye aaj tak usne apne koumarya ko bachaye rakha tha......
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Seema suhag sez par baithhi apne suhag ka intzaar kar rahi thi. Uska badan pani pani ho raha tha.. Apni jin sharirik kaamnaao ko usne badi sahajta se saalon dabaaye rakha, wo aaj jaane kyun kaabu mein nahi thhi.. Kuchh pal ka intzaar usko baar baar seedhiyon par 'apne' ajeet ke kadmon ki aahat sun'ne ko vichlit kar raha tha... Aakhirkaar uski khuddari, sahansheelta, aur bhagwan par atoot visvas ne usko uski niyati se rubaroo kara hi diya... Aaj wo apne aapko apne ajeet ko soupne wali thi... 'Tan' se! Mann se to wo kab ki usi ki ho chuki thi... Pahla pyar sabko itni aasani se naseeb nahi hota... Aur jinko hota hai, unko duniya mein kisi aur ki kami mahsoos nahi hoti....

Udhar tough ka bhi yahi haal tha.. Tough rah rah kar uthhne ki koshish karta par uske dost usko tadpane ke liye pakad kar 'thhodi der aur' kah kar baitha lete... Aakhir kar unhone usko apni suhagini seema ke paas jaane ki ijajat de hi di.

Upar aate kadmon ki aahat sunkar seema ka dil dhadakane laga.. Joron se; mano apne mehboob ke aane ki khusi mein naach raha ho.. Tough ne andar aakar darwaje ki chitkani laga di.. Sadi utaarkar salwar kameej pehan chuki seema ke pair jaanghon samet ek dusre se chipak gaye... Romanch mein... Aaj wo ajeet ko apna koumarya arpit karne wali thi... Aaj ajeet usko ladki se naari banaane wala tha... Poorn pavitra ardhangini...

Tough ne dekha; seema simti huyi hai, bed ke ek kone par... Uski palkein jhuki huyi bhartiya patni ke sarvshresth avtaar ko chitrit kar rahi thi.. Uske pair ka anghoothha dusre pair ke angoothhe par chadha uske dil ki umangon ko chhalka raha thha.. Uske hathon ki ungliyan ek dusri ke galey milkar ghutno par tiki apni beshabri dikha rahi thhi.. Mano ek haath 'ajeet' ho aur dusra swayam seema... Uske komal adharon par lagi surkh laal lipstick honton ke gulabipan ko ek naya hi rang de rahi thi... Kaam trishna ka rang...

Aisa nahi tha ki tough pahli baar kisi ke sath humbister hone ja raha tha.. Par aaj ka har pal usko iss baat ka ahsaas kara raha tha ki aaj ki har baat juda hai, alag hai.. Yun to wah kab ka insaan ban chuka tha.. Par aabhas usko ab jakar huaa tha ki apne 'pyar' se pyar karne ka romancu kya hota hai... Kal tak jis'se baat kiye bina wah rah nahi pata tha.. Aaj uss'se baat kahan se shuru karey, tough ko samajh hi nahi aa raha tha...

Aakhirkaar tough jakar seema ke pairon ke paas pair neeche rakhkar baith gaya.. Safed kurte payjaamein mein uska lamba chouda kaddawar shareer shandaar lag raha tha... Seema ke angoothho ki hulchal tej ho gayi.. Pair thhoda sa pichhe sarak gaye....
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Tough ka dil pyar ke gahre samander mein hilourein maar raha tha.. Uska dil aise dhadak raha tha mano kisi naajnee' se pahli baar rubaroo hone ja raha ho. Jaise hi tough bed par Seema ke paas jakar baitha; wah kisi chhuimui ki tarah apne hi pahloo mein simat gayi.. Mano murjha jane ke darr se pahle hi kumhla gayi ho.. Ya shayad iss raat ke ek ek pal ko apni saansein rok dene ke liye majboor kar rahi ho...

Tough ne seema ka dahina haath apne haath mein le liya," Seema! Mujhe abhi tak visvas nahi ho raha, main itna khuskismat hoon."

Seema kuchh na boli; sirf tough ke hath ko hulke se daba diya, mano usko visvas dila rahi ho ' jaan! Ye sapna nahi; haqeekat hai. '

Tough ne seema ke hath ko pyar se upar uthhaya aur choom liya.

Seema Sihar uthhi. Uska pyar, uski chahat uske saamne thhi. Par wo hichak rahi thi, apne armaano ki sez par baithi seema unn palon ko sada ke liye apne pahloo mein saja lena chahti thi.. Par haya ki jheeni chadar ne usko rok rakha tha.. Usne hulki si najar inayat karke tough ko dekhne ki chesta ki.. Wo muskura raha tha; foola nahi sama raha tha, apni kismat par.
Tough ne seema ki thhodi par hath rakh kar uska chehra upar uthha diya; aur seema ki kajraari aankhein sharm se jhukti chali gayi.. Chehra surkh laal ho gaya. Seema ke chehre se uski bekaraari saaf jhalak rahi thi.
Tough thhoda sarak kar uske aur paas baith gaya aur auki baahon ke neeche se apne haath nikal kar usko aamantrit kiya; seema bina ek pal bhi gawaaye uss'se lipat gayi," I love u, Ajeet"
Tough seema ke kaan ke paas apne hont lejakar houle se barsa," I.. love u too jaan!"
Seema ne tough ko kaskar thhaam liya.. Kaano se hoti huyi tough ki aawaaj siharan bankar seema ke saarey shareer mein tej sugandh ki tarah fail gayi.. Uska badan akadne sa laga; aur shareer mein varshon se sanjo kar rakhi gayi prem ki agni dahak uthhi...

Seema ne apne aapko samarpit kar diya; tough ko kaskar apne prem pipasu seene se laga liya.

Tough ko ahsaas huaa, pyar karna.. Sex karne se kahin jyada romanchak hai.. Seema ke chharhare badan ki gandh ne tough ko sammohit kar diya. Apna chehra pichhe karke tough ne ek baar seema ko gour se dekha aur uske sulagte labon par apne larjate hont rakh diye. Seema to dahakni thi hi, tough ko bhi yun ahsaas hua mano usne angaaron par hont rakh diye hon. Tough ke sare 'paap' bhasm hote chale gaye...

"Kya main tumhe chhoo sakta hoon?" tough ne kareeb 2 minute baad kuchh kahne ke liye apne honto ko aazad kiya.
Seema ne apni najrein jhuka kar tough ke hathon par apne komal haathhon ki jakadan ko hulka sa kas diya, ye uski sweekriti hi to thhi... Jisko tough samajh na paya ya fir jaan boojh kar nahi samajha," Bolo na!"
Seema ne sharma kar apna sir tough ki sudoul chhati par tika diya aur apna shreer dheela chhod kar aankhein band kar li.... Ab bhi koi na samjhe to na samjhe.. Bus!

Par tough bhi ek number ka khiladi tha.. Aaj permission liye bina aagey badhne mein kya maja tha.. Usne seema ko pyar se apne se thhoda door hata kar poochha..," ab kab tak sharmati rahogi? Bataao bhi.. Tumko chhoo loon kya?"
"chhodo bhi.. Mujhe tumhare dil ki dhadkan sun'ne do..." kahkar Seema fir uski chhati se lipat gayi.... Apne youvan falon ko tough ke shareer se sata kar...
Tough ne seema ko kas kar apne seene se laga liya.. Aur ek pyar bhari mohar uske mathey par laga di," kya baat hai? Koyi pareshani hai kya?"
Seema aaj tough ke sath eksaar hone ko mari ja rahi thi," mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum itne buddhu ho" kahkar seema ne sharaarat se tough ko chikouti kaat li...
"aauch!" tough ko signal mil gaya tha.. Tough ne late kar karwat badal li aur seema ka jism tough ke neeche aa gaya.
Seema ne ek hulki si 'aah' bharkar muskurahat ke sath apni bekaraari jaahir ki.. Tough ne uske dono haathon ko apne haathhon mein pichhe le jakar daboch liya aur uski gaalon aur galey ko betahasha choomne laga..

Seema aagey badhne ko lalayit thi, tough ke betahasha chumbano ka jawaab wo apni sharmaayi huyi si aawaj mein aahon ke sath dene lagi...
Tough ne thhoda sa pichhe hatkar seema ke kamsin pate par apna haath rakh diya aur suit ke upar se hi seema ke tann mein hulchal paida karne laga.. Haath dheere dheere upar aata gaya aur seema bekaaboo hoti chali gayi..," i Love u ajeet.. Aah" hath jyon jyon upar sarakta gaya, seema ke shareer ki ainthan badhti gayi..
Achanak tough ke hathon ko unki pahli manjil mil hi gayi.. Tough ne seema ke gole stano par hathon se siharan paida karni shuru ki to Seema aape mein na rah paayi..," aaaaah ajeeeeet... Plsssss!"
Ye 'pls' tough ko rokne ke liye nahi tha.. Usko aage badhne ko prerit karne ke liye thha.. Jaldi se! Kunwari seema ki tadap har chhuaan ke saath badhti chali gayi..

Tough ne seema ko baithhaya aur uski kameej ko upar uthhane laga....
Seema ne kameej ke pallu pakad liye,"light band kar do pls!" uski aankhein ek baar fir band thhi..
"kyun?" tough usko ji bhar kar dekhna chahta thha..
"Mujhe Sharm aa rahi hai...pls kar do na" Seema ne apne hont tough ke kaano se chhaua kar kaha...
Tough apni jaan ki itne pyar se kahi gayi baat ko kaise taal deta.. Dekh to wo fir kabhi bhi sakta tha.... Tough ne uthh kar light off kar di!

Uske baad seema ki taraf se koi pratirodh nahi hua.. Uska har vastra tough uske shareer se alag karta chala gaya...

Aur ab andhere mein hi seema ke adwitiya shareer ki aabha ne jo chhata bikheri, tough deewana ho gaya.. Seema ke gaalon se shuru karke tough ne neeche aatey huye uske shreer ke har hisse mein kampan sa paida kar diya, kasak si bhar di.. Jyon hi tough ka haath seema ki ananya komal sudoul jaanghon ke beech aaya.. Sisakati huyi seema ne uske haath ko pakad liya," aaaah... Jeeeeet!"
Tough to pahle hi apni sudh budh kho chuka tha..," plsssss seeema.. Mat roko ab.. Ho jaaane do.. Jaane kitna intjaar kiya hai.. Iss raaat ka... Pls.. Ab aur na tadapaao..!"
Seema to khud tadap rahi thhi.. Iss 'khas' pal ke liye.. Wah behak sigayi..," I love u jaan!"
"I love u too sweet heart!" kahte huye tough ne seema ke seene ke ek ubhar par masti se haath fera aur dusre par moti ki tarah tike huye daane ko apne honto ki pyaas se waakif karaya.. Dono ki saanse dahak rahi thi.. Saanson ki thirakan bhari aaweshit aawaj se mahoul sangeetmay ho gaya.. Aur dono uss jhankaar mein doobte chale gaye....

Uske baad jo kuchh bhi huaa.. Na tough ko yaad raha.. Na seema ko.. Bus dono ekakaar hokar ek dusre mein samaane ki koshish karte rahe.. Shuruaat mein seema ki peeda ko tough ne apne chumbano se hulka kiya aur jab seema tough ko 'sara' apne andar jhelne ke kaabil ho gayi to tough ne apne kasrati badan ka kamaal dikhana shuru kiya.. Har dhakke ke sath seema pyar se aah bhar uthhti.. Dard ab kahin aaspaas bhi nahi tha.. Sirf aanad tha.. Premanand!

Aakhirkaar jab tough ne apne sachche pyar ki funharon se seema ke garbh ko seencha to seema bhi pratyuttar mein ras se tough ki mardaangi ko nahlaane lagi..

Dono pasine mein nahi uthhe thhe.. Dono ne kaskar ek dusre ko pakda aur swarnim suhaagraat ke baad kaafi der tak ek dusre ko 'i love u' bolte rahe.. Har spandan ke saath.....

Nirvastra Seema se lipta hua tough apne ko duniya ka sabse soubhagyashali insaan samajh raha tha. Aisi najakat, aisi mohabbat, aisa
pyar aur itna haseen shareer har kisi ko naseeb nahi hota. Pyar ke taraaju ke dono palade ab barabar thhe, seema ko tough mil
gaya aur tough ko seema... Hamesha ke liye!!!

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Ab to khush ho na!
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Tough ki jindagi mein seema roopi fija ne aisi chhata bikheri ki uski jindagi grihasthi ki patri par sarpar doudane lagi, udhar siddhanton ke shastri vasu ki jeevan roopi rail patri se utar'ne wali thi.....

Neeru, apni taj tarrar juban, shandaar vyaktitav ke karan 'adwitiya sundarta ke baawjood' apne aapko 'prem nigahon' se bachakar rakhne wali neeru ye samajh hi nahi paa rahi thi ki uske saath ho kya raha hai. Vasu ka chehra khayaalon mein aate hi uska ang ang angdaayi le baithta.. Vasu ke bhole chehre ke pichhe chhipi mardaan'gi ki wo deewani ho uthhi thi aur din raat vasu ko ek najar dekhne ke liye vyakul rahti. Uski nigahon mein achanak nari sulabh vinamrta jhalakne lagi, uske angon mein youvan ki meetthas bhar utthi.
Wah chhuttiyan khatam hone ke intjaar nahi kar sakti thi.. Ek din achanak sham ke kareeb 5 baje ek copy aur 2 books ek polythene mein daali aur disha ke ghar ki aur chal di....

Disha aur vani dono hi ghar ke aangan mein baithi batiya rahi thi. Neeru ko dekhte hi disha prembhav se uthi aur neeru ka abhivadan kiya," didi, aap?"
"Haan Disha! Kya sir upar hain....?"
'sir' sun'te hi disha ke mann mein shamsher ki tasweer ubhar aayi.. Apne honto ko gole kar'ke tirachhi nigaahein karke thhoda achraj se poochha,"kyun?"
Apne aapko iss najar se disha ko ghoorte pakar neeru mann mein chhipakar rakhi gayi bhawnaao ke chalte thhoda sa saham gayi....," nahi.. Bus kuchh poochhna thha.. Koi aitraaj hai..?"
Disha ko apni galati ka ahsaas huaa," arey nahi didi! Main to bus aise hi poochh rahi thi.. Haan upar hi honge.. Badey ajeeb se nature ke hain.. Shayad hi kabhi apne room se bahar jhankte hon... Aa baith.. Tujhe shikanji pilaati hoon.."
Vaani usko ghoor kar dekh rahi thi.. Jaise uski najron ki bekaraari ko pahchaan gayi ho..ki... Ek aur gayi kaam se!

Kuchh der neeche baithhe rahne ke baad neeru ne upar ka rukh kiya.. Uski chhatiyon ka kasav badh gaya.. Dil jor jor se dhadkane laga tha. Upar ka darwaja band tha. Neeru ne band khidki ki jhirri se andar jhanka. Aalthi-paalthi maarey, kamar seedhi karke baithey huye vasu ji kuchh padh rahe thhe.. Neeru ne apne kapdon ko thheek kiya aur darwaje par dastak di....
"koun hai?" vasu ki vinamra aawaj neeru ke kaano mein padi.
"ssir.. Main hoon.. Neeru!"
Vasu ko kuchh pal ke baad yaad aaya ki neeru se wo mil chuka hai....
"kya prayojan hai devi? Main jara Adhyan kar raha tha.."
"sir! Mujhe kuchh sums karne thhe!" neeru ko apne swagat ka tareeka nahi bhaya..
"par main ladkiyin ko akele mein nahi padhata devi.. Apne saath kisi ko laai ho..!"
"nahi sir... Par aap ek baar darwaaja to khol dijeye.." hataash neeru ne kaha...
"ek minute!" kahkar vasu ne apni pustak ek taraf rakhi aur darwaje ki taraf aaya....

Darwaja kholkar bahar hi khadi neeru ko usne pravachan dena shuru kar diya," devi! Nari ke charitra ki solah kalaaon mein se ek ye hai ki usko apne pita, bhai, aur mard ke alawa kisi purush ki sangati mein akele gaman nahi karna chahiye.. Charitra bada hi anmol aur naajuk gun hai jo kisi bhi kshan maryadaon ko laanghte hi chhinn bhinn ho sakta hai...nari ka Charitra..."

Neeru ne vasu ko beech mein hi tok diya," pata hai sir.. Par mujhe ye sawaal samajhne bahut hi jaruri thhe.. Isiliye..!"

"aksar main ladkiyon ko dutkaar deta hoon.. Par tumne meri chand asamajik tattvon se ulajhne se bachane ki poori koshish ki thhi.. Isiliye tumhara mujh par ahsaan hai.. Andar aa jao.." kahkar vaasu peechhe hat gaya..

Neeru andar aakar darwaja dhaalne ke liye mudi to vasu tunak pada," nahi nahi devi.. Darwaja khula chhodiye.. Bulki dono kapaat kholiye.. Achchhi tarah se... Haan aise... Aa jao!"
Neeru ko vasu ki baatein sunsunkar pasine aane lagey.. Wah bed ke paas aakar khadi ho gayi..
"baith jaao.."
Jaise hi neeru bed par baithne lagi.. Vasu ne usko fir rok diya," bister par to main baithha hoon.. Aap wo kursi le aayiye pls..
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Neeru anmaney mann se kamre ke kone mein rakhi kursi uthha kar laayi aur bed ke sath rakhkar usspar baith gayi. Hulke neele rang ke badey galey wala kameej pahne huye neeru ke kandhon par uski bra ki safed pattiyan uske ubhaaron ko sambhaley huye thi. Gala bada hone ki wajah se Neeru ke madmast ubharon ke beech ki ghati kaafi gahraayi liye huye dikhayi de rahi thi. Neeru ne shayad jaanboojh kar apni chunni ko thhoda sa neeche kheench rakha tha, taki usko deewani karne wale
buddhu ke mann mein prem-ras ki umangein upaj sakein.

"Laao! Kounse sawaal hain...?"
"Ssir.. Ye! " neeru ne aagey jhukte huye jab book vasu ke aagey bed par rakhi to vasu ki najar uske youvan falon ke beech anjaane mein hi jakar atak gayi... Vasu ko achanak hi hanuman ji yaad aa gaye..," Hey Ram!"
Vasu ne sharma kar apni najrein ghuma li.
"kya hua sir?" neeru vasu ke mann mein uthhey bhanvar ko samajh gayi, par himmat karke anjaan bani rahi....
"kkkuchh nahi...! Ek minute ruko.." vasu ne uske ishtdev 'hanuman' ki aur dekha. Unhone to aankhein band kar rakhi thi.. Par paas hi 'shree Ram ji' mand mand muskura rahe thhey, mano kah rahe hon " bahut huaa vats! Tapasya poorn huyi... Uthho; aagey badho aur brahmcharya ke vrat ka nispadan karo...."

Par shayad vasu, shree ram ki muskaan ka arth samajh nahi paye.. Vasu ne sambhalne ki koshish ki, par kaheen na kaheen unn bharwan urojon ke wajan taley wo bechaini mahsoos kar raha tha," nahi.. Aisa karo; tum upar hi aa jao devi! Wahan se mujhe 'asahaj' mahsoos hota hai.."
Neeru hulki sharaarati muskaan ke saath uthhkar upar baith gayi aur vasu ke saamne aalthi-paalthi maar kar baith gayi.
Chhatian ab bhi aise hi seena taaney khadi thi, par ek aur had ho gayi.. Neeru ki uski jaanghon se chipki huyi salwaar neeru ke upar se neeche tak 'khatarnaak' dhang se madak hone ka saboot de rahi thi.
Vasu shastri vichlit huye bina nahi rah saka. Usko apne aapko 'girne' se bachaane ka ek hi rasta soojha," yyye.. Sawaal mujhe nahi aatey!"
"kyun Sir ji! Aap to maths ke hi teacher hai na..." neeru ne mann masos kar kaha..
"haan.. Par....!" vasu ke maathhe par pasina chhalak aaya.. Ab wo neeru ko kaise batata ki usko dekhkar uska mann dolne laga tha...
"par kya sir????" neeru vasu ko apne se najrein hataaye dekh samajh gayi....
"kkkuchh nahi... Fir kabhi samjha doonga.. Aaj meri tabiyat theek nahi hai..." vasu ki tabiyat sachmuch pahli baar kharaab hone lagi thhi.
Neeru.. Vahin baithi rahi.. Aur sharaarat se vasu ke haath ko apni komal ungaliyon mein pakad liya..," sir! Aapka badan to tap raha hai.. Kya mein aapka sir dabaa doon..."

Vasu ko kuchh samajh hi nahi aa raha tha..," nahi.. Rahne do.. Tumhare jaane ke baad thheek ho jaayega..!"
"to kya main jaaun sir?"
"haan! Tumhara jana hi uchit rahega.. Tum chali hi jaao.!" vasu ka dil aur dimaag ek dusre ka saath nahi de rahe thhe...
Neeru bura sa munh banakar uthh gayi.. Achanak hi ek idea uske dimag mein aaya," Sir! Aapne mujhe yog aur aasan sikhane ka wada kiya tha.."
"kab..!" vasu ne adhkhile dil se neeru ki aur dekha..
"jab hum shahar gaye thhe sir...!"
"kya sach mein.. Mujhe to yaad nahi aa raha.. Aur fir ... Akele kya tumhara roz aana thheek rahega??"
"haan. Sir! Aapne wada kiya tha.. Pls sir.. Aapne hi to kaha thha.. Yog se badhkar iss duniya mein kuchh nahi.."
"wo to thheek hai.. Par.."
"par kya sir.. Pls.. Mujhe yog seekhna hai.. Pls sir pls.." vasu ko hathiyaar daalte dekh Neeru ne machal kar uska haath pakad liya...
Pourush ke chalte ek haseen jawaan ladki ki iss tarah anunay ke chalte vasu buri tarah ukhad gaya... Ladki bhog ban'ne ko lalayit thhi.. Ab ijjat vaasu ke haath mein hi thi.. Apni bhi aur neeru ki bhi....
Kuchh pal vicharmagn hone ke baad vasu ne mann hi mann ijjat ko taak par rakhne ka faisla kar liya..," theek hai neeru.. Kal subah 4:30 par aa jao!"
Neeru khusi ke maare uchhal padi..," thank yiu sir.." aur khushi se machalti huyi wahan se wida le gayi...

Aaj tak apne aapko sambhale huye dono' aaj jaane kaise ek dusre ko samarpan karne ko taiyaar thhey.....
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"mummy! Mujhe subah 4:00 baje utha dena; tuition padhne jana hai." Neeru ka dil balliyon par tanga tha.
"arey. Koi dhang ka time nahi mila.. 4:00 baje ka time bhi koi time hota hai; ghar se bahar nikalne ka.." mummy ne kapde rassi par sookhne ke liye daalte huye kaha.

"wo.. Uske baad sir ke paas time nahi hai.. Din mein unko aur bachchon ko bhi tuition dena hota hai.. Fir 5 baje to din nikal hi jata hai..." Neeru ne ye nahi bataya ki wo tuition kis cheej ka padhne jaayegi...

"arey din nikalne ki baat nahi hai beti.. Gaanv mein har kisi ko pata hai.. Iss naye sir se shareef insaan shayad hi koi ho.. Usko kisi ne aajtak najrein uthhaye bhi nahi dekha.. Bus main to yunhi kah rahi thi... Ki subah unko pareshani nahi hogi kya?"

"unhone khud hi to ye time diya hai mummy.. Aap kyun pareshan hoti hain..?" kah kar Neeru apne kamre mein chali gayi.." vasu poori tarah uske dilo-dimaag par chha chuka thha.....

Agli subah Neeru theek 4:30 par disha ke ghar ke saamne thi.. Ghar ka mukhya dwar andar se band tha.. Neeru ne aawaj lagaayi to vani unghati huyi bahar aayi..
"koun hai?"
"main hoon, Neeru! Darwaja kholo vani.."

"kya huaa didi? Itni subah..." vani ne darwaja kholte huye achraj se poochha..
"wo... Vani.. Maine yoga seekhna shuru kiya hai.. Sir se! " fir hichakte huye kaha..," tu bhi seekh le.. Bahut hi faaydemand hota hai..."
" theek hai didi.. Main abhi didi ko kahkar aati hoon..." vani turant taiyaar ho gayi..
Neeru ke to maano armaano par paani fir gaya.. Usne to yun hi kah diya tha.. Usko maaloom nahi tha ki vani taiyaar ho jaayegi... Ab na wo vasu par khulkar dorey daal paayegi.. Aur na hi vasu khulkar usko dil ki baat kah sakega.. Kitni taiyaari karke aayi thi wah.. Patla sa lower aur ek t-shirt daalkar aayi thi wah.. T-shirt uske mad-mast figure par tight thi, jis-se uske angon ki lachak kapde mein chhip nahi pa rahi thi. Lower bhi ghutno se upar uske shareer se chipka hua tha.. Jaanghein yoni se thhoda sa neeche ek dusri se chipki huyi thi aur yoni ka ubhar makhmali se kapdey mein se ajeeb sa nasha paida kar raha tha.... Sachmuch Neeru ke roop mein 'menaka' ne vasu jaise vishvamitra ki tapasya bhang karne ki thhan rakhi thi.. Par ab.. Vani.. Sarey kiye karaaye par paani fir jaayega....

Neeru apne dil mein madhur si kashish liye seedhiyon par chadhi. Badan mein ajeeb si kasak thi jo Neeru ke ang ang ko kisi khas anand se alankrit kar rahi thi. Ganv ka har ladka yahi kahta tha ki na jane neeru kounsi mitti ki bani huyi hai jo kisi manchale ya diljale par uski najrein inayat nahi hoti. Par aaj ye mitti vasu ke khas andaj, mridul swabhav, mardana takat ke taj matra se hi bharbhara uthhi thi.. Vasu ke duniya se hatkar charitra ko dekhkar jane kounsi khas ghadi mein kaamdev ne usspar premban chala diya ki wah sab kuchh bhool kar, sari maryadayein tyag kar krishan ki meera ki tarah uss insaan ki deewani ho gayi..... Usne pichhle 15 din badi mushkil se kaate thhe, vasu ke saath ekaant ki tamanna liye aur aaj uski ichchha poori hone hi wali thi ki vani ne tusarapat kar diya...

Wah uparchadhi hi thi ki pichhe wo anokhi gudiya roopi harman pyari vani bhagti huyi si upar aa chadhi... Vani ka youvan din pratidin chameli ke fool ki bhanti nikharta ja raha tha... Uske harpal khilkhilatey swabhav ke alawa uske badan mein se lagataar utsarjit hone wali sammohit kar dene wali madak mahak har kisi ko ek hi baat kahne par majboor kar jaati thi...'kass!' uske roop aur alhadta ke to kahne hi kya thhe.. Manu ka khumaar uske dil se nikal chuka thha aur wo ji bhar kar apne ghar uchhalti koodti chhuttiyon ka anand le rahi thi, aur de rahi thhi; uss'se rubaroo hone wale har shakhs ke dil ko ajeeb si thhandak.....

Vani apne night suit mein hi upar aayi thi..... Neeru darwaje par khadi kuchh soch rahi thi.. Ki vani ne aakar uski kalai ko apne komal haath se pakad liya," mera intjaar kar rahi ho didi.."
"darwaaja khatkhataao na!" Neeru ne vani se anurodh kiya...

Vani ne jhat se darwaaje par dastak di...

"wahi ruko.. Bahar! Main wahi aa raha hoon.."

Vasu aaj raat dhang se so bhi na paaya.. Yun to usko ladkiyon se kabhi lagaav nahi raha.. Par aaj pahli baar kisi ladki ko yoga sikhane ke naam se hi badhajmi si ho rahi thi.. Koi aur insaan hota to shayad Neeru ko andar bulakar bed par hi saare asan sikha deta.. Par vasu to vasu thha...

Vasu 2 chataai uthhaye bahar nikla.. Aur ek ki jagah 2 kanyaaon ko dekhkar achambhit ho gaya," Vani tum????"

"haan sir ji! Main bhi yog sikhungi..." vani utsukta se boli.

"chalo! Ek se bhali do" vasu ne lumbi saans li aur chataayiyan aamne saamne bichha di.. Bahar chhat par hi.. Neeru prempujarin ki tarah ektak uske chehre ko dekhe ja rahi thhi..

Vasu ek chataai par swayam baith gaya aur unn dono ko apne saamne dusri chataayi par baithhne ka nivedan kiya," baith jaao.." jaane kyun aaj usne unmein se kisi ko bhi 'devi' nahi bola......
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Vani Neeru ke mann mein ho rahi hulchal se anjaan, yunhi, beparwah si chatai par baith kar utsukta se vasu ki aur dekhne lagi. Vani ke angon ki mast bhool bhulaiya uske ast vyast kapdon mein se kisi ko bhi apni aur kheech sakti thi... Sir se pair tak gadrayi huyi wo jawaani ki devi vasu ki tarah hi kamar seedhi karke, seena taan kar chataai par viraajmaan thi.

Neeru 'yoga' ke liye khas taiyaari karke aayi thi. Uske vakshon se chipki huyi uski T-Shirt fat padne ko betaab thi.... Uff! Itni tight! Itni sexy!
Neeru ne apni tshirt ko neeche kheencha, pahle se hi uss mein ghutan mahsoos kar rahe youvan fal kasmasa uthhe aur uchhal kar apna pratirodh jatate huye shirt ko wapas upar kheench liya.. T- shirt ke upar uthhne se Neeru ka chikna pate anavrit ho uthha.. Aisi sunder nabhi dekh kar bhi vasu ne aah nahi bhari to koi kya kare....

"sabse pahle aap meri tarah aasan lagakar baith jaayein.....

........ Aaj ke liye itna hi prayapt hai.. Hum dheere dheere yog chakra ki Aawriti badhate jaayenge.." kareeb 15 minute tak kunwari kaliyon ke kamsin badan ko tod marod sikha kar vasu apne aasan se uthh baitha..

Usne aisa kuchh nahi kiya jis'se neeru ko ummeed ki koi kiran dikhayi de...

Vasu ke kahte hi vaani neeche chali gayi.. Par neeru kuchh kadam vaani ka sath dekar wapas palat aayi...," Sir!"
"bolo devi!" vasu fir se devi par aa gaya..
"wo.. Kuchh nahi sir!" neeru se bola na gaya..

"Koyi baat nahi!"
Vasu ke mann mein jara si bhi utsukta na dekhkar neeru man masos kar rah gayi...
"sir...!"
"haan.. ?" kamre mein ja rahe vasu ne palat kar fir se jawaab diya..
"mere pate mein dard ho raha hai.. Jyada!" neeru ne bahana banaya..
"kya tum shouch Aadi se nivrit ho li thi.." vasu ke chehre par shanka ke buav ubhar aaye...
"aur nahi to kya?" neeru ne jhenpte huye kaha...

"lagta hai tumne aalom vilom karte huye udar par adhik dabav daal diya.. Jara thhaharo.. Main tumhe ek vishesh chay pilata hoon.. Asmik bhasm wali.." vasu ne neeru ko andar aane kaa ishara kiya..

Par neeru to kisi aur cheej ki pyasi thi.. Uska rog to prem rog tha, jo jadi bootiyon ka nahi, vasu ki kripa dristi ka deewana tha.. Par chalo, kuchh bhi nahi se kuchh na kuchh hi sahi," thheek hai sir..." kah kar neeru kamre mein aa gayi..

"agar peeda adhik hai to late jaao...!"

Neeru apni dono bahein pichhe karke bed par kamar ke bal late gayi... Wah kya aasan tha, chhaatiyan kasmasa kar tan gayi.. Neeru ka gora muulaam pate nabhi se upar tak apni jhalak dikhane laga.. Neeru aankhein band karke iss kalpna mein doob gayi ki vasu ji uske badan ko dekhkar pagal ho gaye honge....

Par vasu to nischint hokar chay bana raha tha, apni prem pujarin ke liye.. Ashmik buasm wali!

Chay banakar jaise hi wah kamre mein aaya, neeru ki sthiti dekhkar ek baar ko uske kaano mein se hawa nikal gayi.. Chay girte girte bachi aur kuchh pal ke liye vasu ek tak iss abhhootpoorv soundarya partima ko dekhta rah gaya......
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Neeru bed par iss tarah bahein failakar aankhein band kiye leti thi mano wah suhag ki sez par palkein bichhayein apne piya ki khatir khud ko nyochhawar karne ke liye leti ho.... Uski chhatiyan chhatiyon ki tarah nahi balki shikaar ko lalchane ke liye daley gaye amrit kalash hon, jinko dekhne matra se hi shikaar unn nayab 'amrit patron' mein amrit dhhoondhne ko betaab hokar unn par toot padey aur jaane anjaane unn ghatiyon ki bhool bhulaiya mein hi khokar rah jaye, hamesha ke liye..

Ye vasu ka brahamcharya hi tha jo wo abhi tak apne aap par kaabu rakh pa raha tha, koi aur hota to.. Intjaar nahi karta; ijajat tak nahi leta aur neeru 'Nari' ban jaati.. Kanya se," Neeru! Ab bhi dard ho raha hai kya?"
Neeru ne aankhein nahi kholi; ek lumbi si saans lekar vasu ke brahmcharya ko digane ki koshish karte huye apne seene mein ajeeb si halchal paida ki," haan sir!"
"lo chay pi lo... Theek ho jayega..!" vasu ek baar neeru ke machhalinuma badan ko aur ek baar apne isht dev ko yaad kar raha tha.
"sir; uthha tak nahi ja raha... Kya karoon!" Neeru ne madak aah bharkar kaha.
Ab tak youvan sukh se anjaan vasu ko apni prem pujarin ki aamantranpuran aah, asahaneeya dard se peedit ladki ka bilakhna laga.. Haan dard to tha.. Par pate mein nahi.. Kaheen aur!
"ch.. chay to peeni hi padegi.. Nee..." nabhi se neeche ke katav ko dekhkar jindagi mein pahli baar vasu ki jubaan fisal gayi," warna.. Peeda kam kaise hogi..!"
Neeru kuchh na boli.. Chup chap pate dard ki noutanki karti rahi....
Vasu ne ek baar fir hanumaan ji ko dekha, usko hanumaan ji krodhit dikhayi diye.. Vasu ko laga jaise bhagwan ne unke mann ki duvidha ko bhaanp liya hai aur apne haathon mein uthhaye pahad ko uss par fainkne hi wale hain....

"hey prabhu.. Kya karoon..?" vasu ki ek aankh apne isht dev ko aur dusri uski hasaraton ko jawaan karne wali apratim sundari ko yahan wahan se jhank rahi thi...

Kahte hain aawashyakta aawiskaar ki janani hai.. Vasu apne chhote se mandir ki aur gaye aur hanuman ji ki murti ke aagey ek dusri murti laga di... Jai shree Krishna!

Neeru ki taraf chalte huye ek baar fir vasu ne palat kar dekha, shree krishan ji houle houle mushkura rahe thhe, mano kah rahe hon.. Vasu tu karam kar de; fal ki chinta mat kar..

Iss baar vasu ne jaise hi Bed par bal khaye leti navyoyovana ko dekha, usne jhatka sa khaya.. Premaaweg ka.. Aurat aadmi ko kahi ka nahi chhodti.. Usko apna kuchh kuchh dekar, uska sab kuchh le let hai...," Neeru!"
"aah sir.. Main uthh nahi sakti.. Bahut dard ho raha hai.." Neeru ne bhi jaise kasam kha li thi...
"mere paas ek baam hai.. Peeda harne waali...... Mmm main... Malish kar doon?" vasu ki jaan nikal gayi thi.. Ye chhoti si baat kahte huye..
Neeru ek baar aur 'aah' kahna chahti thi par uske munh se kuchh aur hi nikla," Hayyyee..." aur wo chahti hi kya thi.. Neeru ke badan mein jhurjhuri si uthhi aur usko panty ke andar se kuchh rish'ta huaa sa mahsoos huaa...
"kar doon kya.. Neeru.. Theek ho jaaogi...!" vasu vishvamitra tapashya chhod langoti fainkne ko tatpar ho uthha tha...

"hummm!" Neeru apni jhijhak aur kasak chhipane ke liye aankhein band kiye baithhi rahi....," kar do.... Sir!"

Vasu leti huyi neeru ke katil utaar chadhav ko dekhkar pagal sa ho gaya tha.... ,"Sach mein.. Kar doon na... Maaalishhh!"
Neeru ke mann mein aaya apni T-shirt ko upar chadha kar vasu ko bata hi de ki wo uss 'maalishhh' ke liye kitne dino se tadap rahi hai.. Par abhi wah sirf soch hi sakti thi.. Pahal karne ki himmat sab ladkiyon mein kahan hoti hai.. Wo bhi kunwari ladkiyon mein........

Ab tak vasu bhi khayaalon hi khayaalon mein iss kadar laachaar ho chuka tha ki ijaajat ke bina hi apni almaari se pati nahi kis marj ki sheeshi uthhaayi aur bed par jakar Neeru ke udar (pate) ke sath baith gaya....
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Apne karam aur fal ke taney baney mein uljha hua vasu ek najar niharne ke baad Neeru ke nangey pate ko sahlane ko bekaraar ho uthha.. Neeru ke mann mein iss'se bhi kahi aage badh jane ki vyakul'ta thi. Taki wah bina hichak uss ati-shaktishali shastri ko apna sab kuchh sounp kar uska sab kuchh hamesha ke liye apna kar sake.

Vasu ne apne kaanpte haathon se Neeru ki t-shirt ke nichle kinare ko pakda, dil kiya aur upar utha kar pahli dafa apne aapko kaam-gyan ka bodh kara sake. Par uski himmat na huyi," kahan dard hai neeru?"
Neeru ne bina kuchh kahe sune apna hath vasu ke hath se thoda upar rakh diya aur aankhein band kiye huye hi apni gardan dusri aur ghuma li. Nabhi se kareeb 4 inch oopar neeru ki ungali rakhi thi, iska matlab tha ki t-shirt ko wahan tak uthhana hi padega.. 'pyar' se malham lagaane ke liye.
"aa.. T-shirt thodi upar uthhani padegi? Kya main utha doon..." vasu aise poochh raha tha jaise koi karigar gadi ki marramat karte samay kuchh 'jugad' fit karne se pahle malik ki ijajat le raha ho.. Kahin aisa na ho baad mein lene ke dene pad jaayein...
Neeru ke chehre par sharm aur haya ki lali tair gayi.. Wo andar hi andar jitni khush thi, uska andaaja vasu jaisa nadan khiladi nahi laga paya.. Neeru ne apna hath utha kar wapas peechhe kheench liya, bina kuchh kahe.. Seene ka ubhar apni sarwadhik sunder awastha mein punn: aa gaya.
Vasu ab kahan tak kaabu rakhta; t-shirt ka sira fir se pakda aur uss kamsin bala ke haseen badan ke uss bhag ko anawrit karta chala gaya, jahan par wah dard bata rahi thi.. Vasu ke dil ki dhadkan Neeru ke lochdaar pate ke saamne aane ke sath hi badhne lagi.. Kucyh aur bhi aascharyajanak dhang se badhta ja raha tha. Vasu ke bhole bhale 'yantra' ka aakar.....
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Wah Bhai Wah...Kya baat hai...Yeh story kam kisi stupid chat room ke thread jyada lagta hai....I am seriously disappointed by the fact that this is a story section but Mr. Sexpeare002 has created this as a Chat or a spam room of stupid discussion..

I agree with the fact that the story is good and we are here to read the story and compliment the story but I guess Mr. Sexpeare002 has something different in his mind. The story masala is less but he is encouraging people for posts and increasing his TRP...Currently he is busy in his campaign but forgotton to do his real job for which he got so much of popularity...

I am new to exbii and respect the decorum of this place but somehow I am very disappointed with this thread.....10-15 replies for 1 post and that too 10 lines on an average....

I am not jealous of anyone as I am so new but I guess people joining this thread if they see that this place has less of updates but so much of spam, they might loose interest visiting this place...There should be some rules so that decorum can be maintain on each thread and we get pleasure of reading....325 pages :-) I am sure if clean update is there it will not take more than 20 pages to complete this story...

It is hard to believe that how come 1 story can make anyone an hero..It takes lot of effort to prove someone about his wills and efforts....and here my readers friends who unknowingly putting their posts for such story that has no end either or no update...

If any new person wants to read this story he has to scroll down to 325 pages and 10 post per page :-) ..I am asking MOD do you see anyone will find interest in reading this crap...how will the popularity of exbii will increase if such crap is getting posted here...

MODS please forgive me if I had said something wrong...but as a reader please bring some rules so that we read story as a story...People who are posting story should be appreciated and complimented but to a limit so that story looks like a story only...

Mr. Sexpeare002 I salute you for your marketing, one story you marketed so well,what you wished, you are getting....

I feel pity on my readers friends, kya soch kar compliment karte hai...there are other people on this story section posting their story but ensuring regular updates without any selfishess ....they enjoy posting stories and we enjoy reading them..rather doing some other work...

There are people who are quite old in this system and they have proved themselves, and they are the people who should be paid for their efforts...Anyways nothing personal but it's my feeling that I expressed, rest other readers are their to judge themselves what is correct or wrong...

I wanted to put this long time back but I thought my exbiian friends and the readers should not feel that mein kissi opponent ki taraf sey yeh likh raha hoo...now the last date for the nomination acceptance was yesterday so could not stop myself to tell what I feel about this thread.....

Good night friends and I am out from this thread...but I still request the Mods to bring some rules so that we enjoy for what we are here for...not for doing marketing..


Apne karam aur fal ke taney baney mein uljha hua vasu ek najar niharne ke baad Neeru ke nangey pate ko sahlane ko bekaraar ho uthha.. Neeru ke mann mein iss'se bhi kahi aage badh jane ki vyakul'ta thi. Taki wah bina hichak uss ati-shaktishali shastri ko apna sab kuchh sounp kar uska sab kuchh hamesha ke liye apna kar sake.

Vasu ne apne kaanpte haathon se Neeru ki t-shirt ke nichle kinare ko pakda, dil kiya aur upar utha kar pahli dafa apne aapko kaam-gyan ka bodh kara sake. Par uski himmat na huyi," kahan dard hai neeru?"
Neeru ne bina kuchh kahe sune apna hath vasu ke hath se thoda upar rakh diya aur aankhein band kiye huye hi apni gardan dusri aur ghuma li. Nabhi se kareeb 4 inch oopar neeru ki ungali rakhi thi, iska matlab tha ki t-shirt ko wahan tak uthhana hi padega.. 'pyar' se malham lagaane ke liye.
"aa.. T-shirt thodi upar uthhani padegi? Kya main utha doon..." vasu aise poochh raha tha jaise koi karigar gadi ki marramat karte samay kuchh 'jugad' fit karne se pahle malik ki ijajat le raha ho.. Kahin aisa na ho baad mein lene ke dene pad jaayein...
Neeru ke chehre par sharm aur haya ki lali tair gayi.. Wo andar hi andar jitni khush thi, uska andaaja vasu jaisa nadan khiladi nahi laga paya.. Neeru ne apna hath utha kar wapas peechhe kheench liya, bina kuchh kahe.. Seene ka ubhar apni sarwadhik sunder awastha mein punn: aa gaya.
Vasu ab kahan tak kaabu rakhta; t-shirt ka sira fir se pakda aur uss kamsin bala ke haseen badan ke uss bhag ko anawrit karta chala gaya, jahan par wah dard bata rahi thi.. Vasu ke dil ki dhadkan Neeru ke lochdaar pate ke saamne aane ke sath hi badhne lagi.. Kucyh aur bhi aascharyajanak dhang se badhta ja raha tha. Vasu ke bhole bhale 'yantra' ka aakar.....

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