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Old 22nd July 2009
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Jamkar chudi pooja...jiju se

this story is a work of fiction. please give your feedback. i am writing first time on exbii.i m a big fan of sexpeare.the story is about-How a beautiful virgin gets thoroughly fucked by his landlord.will continue in episodes if u guys like it.here it goes....

Ye kahani ek ladki ki hai jisne 19 saal ki umar main college join kiya tha.Ghar se door rehne aayi akeli ladki ko room milne main bahut dikkat aa rahi thi.aur is shehar main main kis ko janti bhi nahi thi.but finally she got a place to stay...her landlord is around 28 yrs.married hain, unki wife bhi bahut sundar hain.wo unhe pyar se did ji kehti thi, aur unke pati ko jiju.
samir,her landlord, ek hatte katte sharir ke maalik hain. mast body hai. and abhi bhi ladkiyan un pe marti hain. pooja, our heroine, jo ki jawan thi, uska dil bhi samir jiju ko dekh ke machal gaya. hua yoon, ki ek din pooja subah subah did se kuch mangne gayi. aur darwaza khola jiju ne. Jockey ki short si undie pehne hue samir ko dekh ke woh dang reh gayi.uska barpoor tana hua lund undie se bahar aaane ki taiyari main tha. woh laal ho gayi.
"arey pooja tum, kya baat hai" samir ne adhkuli aankhon se poocha.
ji..woh..mai...jiju...
kya hua.samir se aankhe masa;te hue bola
ji main, cheeni lene aayi thi.didi hain.?
woh toh so rhi hai,tum hi andar aake le jao.samir bola
woh andar gayi.samir bhi peeche peeche aa gaye.cheeni kitchen main upar rkhi thi.woh nikalne lagi.toh saamir ne peeche se pakad liya.
aur zor se mamme masal daale
"jiju ye kya kar rhe hain."
i love u pooja-samir ne ye kaha aur apna jockey utar ke pooja ke hath main rakh diya.
pooja kachchi kali thi.itna mota lund delkh ke pagal ho gayi.kuch samjh nahi aaya kya kare.badi mushkil se pooja jaldi wahan se bhag khadi hui.
kamre main pahunch ke woh us jockey ki chaddi ko dekhti reh gayi.use samjh nahi aarha tha ki use kya ho rha hai.smir jiju use bahut passand the.lekin aaj jo harkat unhone ki thi? woh?
becahri..samjh nahi pa rhi thi.lekin samir ne aag lagaa di thi.unka lund uski aankhon ke samne abhi bhi latak rha tha.ye sochte sochte pooja ki ungliyan chalne lagi.
woh jhadne lagi.ek toofan aake chala gaya tha.par is se bhi bada toofan abhi aan baaki tha..

to be continued...
Tell mehow u like the start.will comtinue on the basis of ur feedback.
cya

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