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Mera naam Kamil Alvi hai, lagbhag 4 saal se main alag alag site par sex ki kahani parh kar maze le raha hoon aur apni sex ki tharak ko poora karta hoon. Maine kabhi kuch likhne ke bare me soocha bhi nahi tha, kiunke mujhe kuch sooch kar aur kahani bana kar likhna nahi aata aaur na hi pehle kabhi meri zindagi me koi aisi ghatna hooi ho jise likhoon. Magar 2 saal pehle 2012 me mujhe ek ladki mili, aur os ne mere zid par apni zindagi ki kahani soonai. Main jitni bhi kahani parhi oosme se 99% kalpanik fantasy hoti hai aur shayed 1 percent saachi ho ti ho, mostly kahani sirif entetenment ke khatir kalpanic hoti hai bahut kam kahani aisi hoti ho jise parh kar koi sabaq milta ho aur apni bhool ko sudharne ka giyaan aata ho.

Aap sab samajh gaye hoon ge ke yeh meri apni kahani nahi hai, magar yeh bilkul sachi kahani hai aur iss kahani ke sab loog aaj bhi zinda hain auur kuch apni ghaltioon par pachta rahe hai aaur sari zindagi pachtaa te rahein ge aaur kuch apne kie ki saza jhel rahe hain.

Yeh kahani ek husband aur wife ki kahani hai. Iss kahani se ek sabaq milta hai ke jab shauhar kaam kaj me itna busy ho jata hai ke ooske paas apni biwi ke liye time hi nahi hota aur biwi ke liye ooski jo zimmadari hoti wo bhool jata hai to ooski qimat osse chookana to parta hai aur biwi ko bhi samajhna chahye ke ooska shauhar oos se bahut piyar karta hai magar apne parivar ko achi zindagi dene ke karan din raat mehnat karne ki wajah se wo oos pat tawajjah nahi de pata hai to iss ka matlab yeh nahi ke ooska piyar khatam ho gaya hai, aisi situation me biwi ka ek oothaye howe galat qadam oose zidagi bhar pachtane par majboor kar deta hai. Iss kahani ki ladki se kahani soonne ke baad main khud ja kar iss kahani ke baqi logoon se mila aaur kured kured kar on se aur on se talluq rakhne waloon se bahut kuch maloom kia, phir ja kar mujhe bahut kuch maaloom hoowa aur jo kuch maaloom nahi hoowa oose main apne vichaar aur andaze lagaa kar likha. Jab main ye kahani likh kar oos ladki ko paraya to woh hairaan rah gai aaur boli ke mai jo bhi apne dimagh se sooch kar likha hoon woh aadhe se ziyada bilkul waisa hi likha hai jo kuch haqiqat me hoowa tha. Phir mere kehne par oosne bahut kuch issme correction karwa kar iss kahani ko poora karwa diya.

Iss kahani ke three part hain, pehla part mere bare me hai iss me app sab ko meri zidagi ke bare me har baat maaloom ho ga, ab app poocho ge jab yeh meri kahani nahi hai to main apne bare me kiun likh raha hoon. woh iss iss liye ke qismat mujhe bhi kisi na kisi soorat me iss se jor diya hai iss liye pehle mujhe apne bare me likhna zaroori tha. Waise bhi mai apne bare me detail me ja kar apka time kharab nahi karoon ga, balke koshish karoon ga ke bahut short cut me likh kar apne bare me bataoon. Second part hi asal me wahi kahani hai jis ke liye mujhe likhne par ooksaya. Aur third part is kahani ka end ho ga.

Iss kahani me sirif name ko badal diya hai baqi city aaur sab baat wahi hai jo sach hai. main koi writer nahi hoon sirif apne taur par iss me sex ka masala dal kar isse likhne ki koshish kia hi issliye meri bhool chook ko maaf kar dijye ga aur ap sab se binti hai ke apne comment barabar de kar meri bhool ko theek kijye ga. Maine kahani shooroo karne se pehle aap sab ka bahut time le liya magar yeh zaroori tha, aaur haan iss kahani ko kia naam doon yeh meri samajh me nahi aaya iss liye iss kahani ko “No Name Story” ke naam se post karoon ga kahani parh ke iss ka naam app choose karo ge.



PART- 1

Mera naam Kamil Alvi hai sab mujhe Kamil ke naam se boolate hain, main 1972 UP ke capital Lucknow me paida hoowa iss waqat 2014 me meri age 42 years ki hai, meri height lagbhag 6 feet hai, bachpan hi se sports aur excersise ke karan mazboot badan healthy aur dekhne me saaf rangat ka handsome mard hoon, mere lund ka size 8 inch lamba aur 21/2 inch mota hai, mera privaar ka shoomaar Lucknow ke rich logoon me hotaa tha. Main apne Maa Baap ke akluti aulad tha. Meri Maa bahut pahle khuda ko piyari ho gai thi.. Mere baap ki Lucknow me bahut izzat thi, wo bahut hi mazhabi nek insaan the, jo bhi zaroorat mand oonke paas aata wo kisi ko bataye beghair choop chaap ooski madad kar dete. Onka sanstkar mujhe mila aur daulat mand hote howe bhi kabhi bure raaste par nahi chala. Jab collage join kia to wahan mujhe ek ladki se piyar ho gaya, ooska nam Samina tha, wo ek bahut ghareeb gharane se talluq rakhti thi. Wo bhi mujh se piyar karne lagi aur ham dono ek dosre ki zindagi ban gaye. main eek khat likh kar apne dil ki baat apne walid ko bata diya, aur wo meri khushi ke liye isse maan kar mera rishta karwa diya. Ham dono ne jaise hi apni graduation ki hamari shadi karwa di. Jab hamari shadi hoowi to mai 23 saal ka tha aur samina 21 saal ki.

Shadi se pehle mai ne kabhi kisi ladki ke saath sex nahi kia tha, ab iska matlab yeh nani ke mai sex ke bare me kuch nahi janta tha, maine VCR par kabhi kabhi blue film dekh liya karta tha jo mujhe collage ke dost dete the, choodai ki film dekh kar apni garmi moth maar kar nikaal leta yha isslye mujhe maloom tha ke choodai kaise kia jata hai magar Abba ke dar aur sharam ke karan kabhi kisi ladki ko choodne ki himmat nahi kar saka. Meri zindagi ka pehla sex suhagraat me apni biwi Samina ke saath howa, wo bhi bari mushkil se kiunke ham dono mia biwi kanware aur anari the.

Shadi ke baad ham dono ek dosre ki muhabbat me is tarah dube ke 6 mahine kaise guzre ke hame pata hi nahi chala, achanak ham par ek qiyamat toot para, mere Abbu ko heart attack howa aur wo mar gaye. ye mere liye bahut bara hadsa tha aur samajh me nahi aataa tha ke ab aage kia karma hi, aur kia karoon, kiuke fresh collage ne nikalne ke baad meri shadi ho gai thi aur abhi paractical life me qadam bhi nahi rakha tha issliye Abbu ke business ke bare me mai ABCD bhi nahi janta tha. Iss moqa par hamare porane aur wafadar mulazimoo ne mujhe hausla diya aur oonki madad se mai ahista ahista sab kuch samajhne laga aur har chez mere control ane laga.

Multi millions ka Bank Balance tha, darjano qimti plots the, Maha Nagar ke posh residential jagah par 5 banglos the jiska har mahine rent aata tha, ghar ke Safe me 3 kilo se ziyada ke gold ke khandani zewar the aur hamare rehne ka 9 room ka mahal ki tarah ghar tha aur in sab ka malik ab mai akela tha.

Ahista ahista zindagi normal hone lagi. Meri zindagi me sirif kaam ke waqt kaam aur kaam ke baad meri Samina thi aur mai tha. Dosri activity na hone ke barabar thi. Mai aur Samina ek dosre ko joonoon ki had tak chahte the aur hamari muhabbat din badin bharti hi ja rahi thi. Shadi ke do saal baad jab Samina ne yeh bataya ke wo pregnant ho gai hai, is news ne mujhe khushi se pagal kar dia, phir ham dono ek ek din ane wale bache ke intezar me guzarne lage. Akhir Khuda Khuda kar ke wo din aa gaya aur ham Samina ko le kar hospital pahunch gaye, Samina ko labour room me le gaye aur mai, Samina ke ghar wale, mere mulazim aur qaribi dost aur rishtedar bahar khushkhabri ke intezar me bechaini se tahel rahe the, taqriban do ghante ke baad labour room ka darwaza khula aur lady doctor bahar aai ham sab tezi se ooske paas gaye, ossne jab yeh bataya ke bacha mara howa paida hoowa jis ke karan case bahut complicated ho gaya tha aur har koshish ke baad bhi wo Samina ko nahi bachaa sake aur wo bhi Allah ko piyari ho gaii. Iss khabar ko soon kar aisa laga ke dunya khatam ho gai aur qiyamat aa gaya. Mai gham aur sadme se apne hoosh me nahi raha.

Marne wale mar jate hain aur guzarte waqat ke saath log osse bhool kar dunya ki khubsurti ke maze lene lagte hain. Marne ke baad ahista ahista Samina bhi apne Maa, Baap, Bhai, Bahen aur sahelioon ke liye ek bhooli hooi dastaan banti gai magar mere liye nahi, din ho ya raat wo her waqat mere dil o dimagh me rehti. Raat thek se so nahi sakta. Waqat guzar ta raha aur dekhte hi dekhte 5 saal guzar gaya magar mere liye to ooski maut jaise kal ki baat ho, sab loog mujhe doosri shadi ja mashwara dete magar Samina ki yaad mujhe kisi dosri ladki ko apni zindagi me shamil nahi hone deta, sachi baat to yeh thi ke mai dimaghi taur par ek phyco ban gaya tha. Sookoon ke liye maine sharab pini bhi shoro rar di thi. Samina ke beghair poora Lucknow mujhe katne daur taa. Akhir mai ne Lucknow choor kar kahi aur basne ka faisla kia aur bahut sooch kar Bangal ke Capital Kalkatta aa gaya. Paise ki kami nahi thi, apna poora cash aur kuch plot aur Bangle beech kar Kalkatta aa gaya, yahan apne rehne ke liye ek posh elaqe me chota sa bangle aur car khareed lia, ek saal tak koi kam shoro karne ke bajaye study karta raha ke kia kaam shoroo karoon. Akhir leather garments aur leather ki bani hooi items ko Europe, Usa aur Canada export karne ka faisla kar lia saath hi Kalkatta elaqe chowrangi ke main road par ek bara sa show room bhi bana liya. Qismat se mujhe bahut ache aur imandar staff jo iss field ke mahir the mil gaya, aur phir mera business din badin taraqqi karne laga.

Apne qadam theek se jamane me mujhe lagbhag 3 saal lag gaya, saath hi saath Samina ki yaad bhi halki hoti gai to dil aur dimaagh ne oopar wale ke fesle par apna sar jhooka dia aur zindagi normal hone lagi, jab zindagi normal ho gai to lund sar oothane laga choodne ke liye kisi aurat ko mangne laga. Shooroo se hi mai aurat ke mamle me sharmila aur bahut phattoo qisim ka admi tha iss liye kisi ladki ko nahi phansa pa raha tha to blue film aur net par jaa kar apni tharak poora karne laga aur muth maar kar garmi nikalne laga. Kisi se yahan ke randi khane soonagachi ka soona to ek din raat ke andhere me soonagachi pahunch gaya. Soonagachi jab pahuncha to wahan ke dallaaloon ne gher liya aur har koi apne apne ladkiun ki tareef karke mujhe apne sath lejana chahta tha, onme se ek dallal mujhe thek laga aur main osko sath le kar wahan k eek tea stall par baith kar chae mang waya aur chae pite howe oska naam pocha, oss ne apna naam Jagdesh bataya, wo lagbhag 30 saal ka tha aur Bihar ka rehne wala tha. Ek hazar rupae night par sauda hone ke baad wo mujhe apne saath Neelkamal nami building me le gaya, chalet howe wo mujhe bata diya tha ke Sonagachi me sab se achi ladkian sirif Neelkamal me hi milti hai. Neelkamal ek 4th. Storied building the aur har floor par line se hotel ki tarah room bane howe the, bahut se room ke darwaze band the aur jo darwaza khula tha wahan ek ladki khari har ane wale ko apni taraf boola rahi thi, Jagdesh ne mujh se kaha, “sahib ladkioon ko dekhte raho aur jo pasand aa jaye mujhe bool dena.” Main haan me sar hila kar osske saath har ladki ko dekhta hoowa chalne laga, akhir 2nd floor par ek ladki mujhe achi lagi to mai ooske paas ruk gaya, Jagdesh samajh gaya aur mujhe kamre ke ander le ja kar biche howe bed bar baitha kar oss ladki se bola jo hamare saath hi kamre me aa gait hi.
“Manisha sahib pehli bar aaye hain, inki sewaa me koi kasar nahi rahe.”

“Too fikar kiun karta hai re Jagdesh, Manisha Jagdesh se bool kar meri taraf dekh kar muskurate hoowe poochi, “Saheb ek baar baitho ge yaa raat bhar baithna hai ?”

Main pehli baar randi khane aaya tha main baithne se ooka kia matlab hai nahi smajh sakaa, main yahi samjha ke baithne ka matlab baithna hi hota hoga issliye bola, “main yahan baithne ke liye nahi aaya, main sab kuch karne ke liye aayaa hoon,” meri baat sonte hi Jagdesh aur Manishi zordartariqe se thathaa mar kar hansne lage, Jagdesh to apni hansi ko qaboo kar liya magar Manisha to pet pakar kar hanse ja rahi thi.

Thori der baad jab Manisha ki hansi rooki to Jagdesh bola, “Saheb yahan ek baar baithne ka matlab hota hi ek baar choodna aur raat bhar baithne ka matlab hota hai ke sari raat ladki ke saath raho ge.”

Main yeh baatsoon kar sharmida ho gaya aur bola, “Yar peli baar ayaa hon aur bikul anari hoon issliye samajh nahi saka.”

“Koi baat nahi sahib ate rahoge to sab samajhne lago ge, ab tum 1000 Rupia Manisha ko dedo, aur kuch pine aur khane ka magwana ho to Manisha ko bool dena yeh mangwa de gi, magar har cheez ke paise alag se dene hoon ge.” Jagdesh meri tarafdekhte hoowe bola.

Main sar hila kar Jagdesh se kaha, theek hai aur dekho sobah main akela yahan se bahar nahi jaaoon ga issliye tum sobhah aa jana aur mujhe yahan se bahar main road par choor dena, isske elawa tum se aur bhi kuch zaroori bat bhi karni hai. Jagdesh theek hai keh kar chala gaya.


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