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Kachhi umra ki Kamukata

'kya bat hain, aaj badi bechain dikh rahi ho'.......rashmi ne pass baithi neelu se puchha
'nahi re aisi koi bat nahi'............neelu ne bat talane ke niyat se kaha
'hamesha teri bakbak se, sar me dard paida kar deti ho..........aaj etani khamosh ho, jaroor koi bat hain'
'bharosa rakh aisi koi bat nahi'......neelu ne zalla kar kaha
'thik hain mat bata , main to samaz ti thi hum pakki saheliya hain, ek dusare se koi bat nahi chhupati, magar tu nahi batana chahati hai to main force nahi karungi'......................rashmi ne bramhastra chhoda, joki bilkul sahi nishane pe laga.
'class chhutane ke bad bataungi'........akhir neelu ne man liya
'thik hain'

rashmi aur neelu pakki saheliya thi, shahar ke ek nami convent school me padhati thi,dono hi ssc ki student thi, unaki dosti etani gahari thi,ki baki ladakiya unase jalati thi. rashmi ek uppar middleclass family se thi, to neelu ka pariwar shahar ka pratishthit,amir tha. lekin esase unaki dosti par koi fark nahi padata tha. sirf rashmi ke pariwar wale thode chintit rahate the, unake bich social status ka fark jo tha.

class khatma hone ke bad dono school ke pichhe bane gardan me baith gayi.

'chal ab bata kya hua hain'........rashmi janane ke liye utawali thi
aur neelu soch me pad gayi thi shuruwat kaise kare

'dekh main tuze sab batati hu, par pahale mere kuchh sawalo ke sahi sahi jawab dene hoge'........neelu apani bhumika bandh rahi thi
'kya puchhana chahati hain tu'
'uuuuuuuuumm......'
are puchh na......ye uuuuuuuuuummm kya hain'.........rashmi janane ke liye adhir ho rahi thi.

'tune kabhi sex kiya hain'...............neelu ne bam phoda.
'kya........??? tera dimag to nahi kharab hua, agar aisa kuchh kiya hota to kya tuzase chhupati...?"
'main janati hu ki tu muzase kuchh nahi chhupati,lekin kuchh aisa hua hain,muze puchhana jaroori laga'

'kya hua hain...? kahi tune ekelehi kuchh,mera matlab hain....'
'nahi maine kuchh nahi kiya hain'
'to...... ?'.......rashmi se jigyasa chhup nahi rahi thi.

'tu mere ghar ka design janati hain,mere bedroom se kitchen ke liye jana ho to bhaiyya ke bedroom ke samane se gujar na padata hain'
'han janati hu,tere ghar par kai bar aa chuki hu, tu aage bol.'............rashmi abhibhi kuchh samaz pane me asamrth thi.

'kal rat achanak meri nind khuli,12.30 se upar ka samay hua hoga,muze bhukh si mahasus huie, maine thodi der waise hi sone ki koshish ki, par nind nahi ayi, to maine socha kitchen me jakar doodh wagaira kuchh pi lu,main uthakar kitchen ki taraf chal di,magar...........'
'magar kya....are bol na'.........rashmi suspence ko bardashst nahi kar pa rahi thi.
'muze bhaiyya,bhabhi ke bedroom se kuchh awaze sunai di'
'kya awaze sunai di'.......rashmi ka suspence badhata hi ja raha tha

'wo...wo..bhabhi...bhaiyya se.....kaha rahi ...thi...,wo...wo...'
'are wo...wo...kya kaha rahi hain, ab bak bhi'.........rashmi ab exite ho rahi thi ,use kuchh kuchh samaz me aa raha tha.

'mm....mmm...muze sharm aati hain...'............neelu sachmuch sharma rahi thi
'oye hoye meri sharmili kabootari, ab ye sharmana chhod aur bata bhabhi kya kah rahi thi.

'wo..wo kaha rahi thi.......hai mere raja bada maza aa raha hain,, aur jam ke, hai aur jor se. aap ke jaisa pati pakar to main dhanya ho gayi.....pure mard hain aap to ......ek bat puchhu....?..................etana kah kar neelu chup ho gayi.
'to...age batana,bhabhi ne kya puchha,aur bhaiyya ne kya kaha'...............rashmi ko ab raha nahi ja raha tha

' wo ..bhaiyya ne kaha puchho meri jaan....main bhi to tumhari jaisi madmast,sexy patni ko pakar dhanya ho gaya hu, haye kya ball hain tumhare, puchho jo puchhna hain'
'phir...bhabhi ne kya kaha...'..........rashmi ab bahut hi garm ho chuki thi, puri bat ekdam se sunana chahati thi
'bhabhi ne puchha...aap pichhale janam me ghode the kya....?...ye aapaka etana bada kaise hain..?

phir...are puri bat ekdam se batana, kyo hindi serial ki taraha episodes me bata rahi hain?..........rashmi ab zalla uthi thi.
'aage kuchh sun nahi paie, muze mammi,papa ke bedroom ka darwaza khulane ki awaz aai, to main bhag kar apane bedroom me chali gayi, doodh bhi naahi piy.

jaise hi neelu ki bat khatma hui, dono saheliya,apane chehare pe ajeeb se expressions liye ek dusari ki taraf dekhati rahi, dono ne ekdam nazare zukaly....dono ki hi pantiya gili ho chuki thi
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pl give me ur comments & replies & repps if like this new story.
many more hot episode to come betn rashmi & neelu
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maz agaya teray likhnay ka
ajeeb talent hai itni jaldi aur itni assani sab kuch likh diya
u r a good writer
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im sure this story going to be big in future

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Arey vasu!

Tu to chha gayo re...

Main bhi kahoon apna thread khali kaise hai..

All the best...
guruji,
apaki hi sikh par chal raha hu
ashirwad dijiye
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Originally Posted by amir_khan8718;
maz agaya teray likhnay ka
ajeeb talent hai itni jaldi aur itni assani sab kuch likh diya
u r a good writer
keep it up
im sure this story going to be big in future
aapko mere iss thread pe dekha dil bagbag ho gaya
jarra navazi ka shukriya
ab aap se gujaraish hain zara mere pahale thread
rohits journey from hell to heavan par bhi gaur farmayiga
bande ne bade hi dilse likha hain
apake jaise kadradano ki nazare enayat ho to, banda apaka mashkoor rahega
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VASU ROCKS!!!

Unbelievable!!! Just close to perfact...
he he he he he

guruji aap to sharminda kar rahe hain

ab thanx bhi kahu to kaise kahu.
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rashmi aur neelu, sahi mayane me aaj ke jamane ki ladakiyo ko represent karati thi..............ess modern jamane ke ajad khayal maa,bap ki utanihi ajad khayal ladakiya. apani hi betiyo ko short skirts me dekhane se unke mathe pe shikan tak nahi aati thi,........unaki skirts se zankati bhari bhari gudaj janghao,aur t-shirt se zankati unaki thos chuchiya, unake dimag me koi khatare ki ghanti nahi bajate the. aam taur par, sabhi pariwaro me mammy,daddy, bhaiyy,bhabhi, badi ya chhoti bahane,apane apane bussiness meetings, clubs,kitty partiya, sports events,college ki gatherings etane wyast rahate the ki, kisiko kisi ke bare me jada janane,ya bat karane ki fursad mi nahi milati thi. ek hi pariwar ke sadsya ek hi ghar me aise rahate the mano, room partners ho, ya ek hi hotel me ruke musafir ho, jinka ek dusare ki jindagi se koi wasta na ho...........aisi sthiti main agar ye kachhi umra ki kaliya, unake aaspas ke mahaul se, tv,filmo me dikhai dene uttejak,sexy drishyo se,club,party,pubs ke mahaul se, waquat se pahale hi khil kar phool banane ki koshish kare to esme koi hairani bat nahi thi

rashmi aur neelu bhi apani umra ke aise hi najuk mode par khadi thi.

"chalo ghar chalate hain"............neelu ne kaha
"uuum........kya?.....han chalo..........rashmi abhi bhi uttejana se bahar nahi nikali
thi.
dono ne apane apane school bags uthaye aur school gate ki tarak chal di.
dono hi khamosh thi,uparse, dil me tufan utha hua tha

"kya soch rahi ho "............neelu ne khamoshi toda
'kuchh bhi to nahi'
'ab tum zuth bol rahi ho'
'nahi nahi,aisi koi bat nahi'
ess par neelu ne jada kuredana uchit nahi samza................thoda waquat aur khamoshi me bita.

"kya tumne unhe karate huye dekha tha"............achanak rashmi ne puchha.
kuchh pal ke liye neelu kuchh samazi hi nahi, lekin jaise hi usake samaz me aya, wo sharma se lal ho gayi.
"dhat,...kuchh bhi bolti ho"
"ab ye sharmana chhod,aur sach sach bata..!"
"muze ichha to hui thi.......par dar bhi lag raha tha"
'huuuuuuuummm......."

neelu aur bhi kuchh kahana chhati thi, par himmat nahi juta pa rahi thi
"rashmi..."..............neelu ne halkisi awaz me pukara
"kya hain..?"
"maine bhaiyya bhabhi ko to nahi dekha tha .......magar."
rashmi ke kan ekdam khade ho gaye, ankhe chamak uthi.
"magar kya ....saf saf bol na"
"tu kisi se kuchh kahogi to nahi"............neelu ne darate,hichakte puchha
"pagal ho gayi ho....!maine aaj tak,hamare mere bich jo bhi bate hui hain kya kisiko batai hain"
"maine....maine...ek bar blue film dekhi thi,chori se,achanak hi"........neelu abhi bhi hichkicha rahi thi
"kya......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....tune ye bat muzase chhupake rakhhi,apani pakki sahelise..!mainto samaz ti thi tere mere bich kuchh bhi chhupa nahi hain."

neelu khamosh rahi

"kab dekhi thi, kaha aur kaise dekhi thi".........rashmi ab firse uttejit ho rahi thi. blu films ke bare me usane bhi sun rakha tha,dekhana bhi chahati thi, sirf jigyasa wash.

ek bar jab ghar me koi nahi tha, maine bhaiyya ke kamare se ek CD utha layi th,muze laga tha wo koi comman hindi film ki hogi,uspar koi cover bhi nahi tha,..........lekin jaise hi maine CD player me dali...........usame ekdam nangi ladakiya aur ladake the,ek bar maine soch CD nikal kar wapis bhaiyya ke kamare me rakh du, ..........lekin wo ...wo..muze utsukata ho rahi thi es liye puri dekh li.
neelu ne ek sans me puri bat kah dali, bat karate karate hi usaki sase tez chalane lagi thi............jaise wo khud us film ki heroin thi

"ab kaha hain wo cd'..........rashmi exitment ki had par kar rahi thi.
"mere pass hi hain"
"kya abhi bhi tere pass hi hain..?' rashmi ke ankhoki chamak fir badhane lagi.
"han bad me rakh dungi, soch kar maine apane pass hi rakh li"

"muze bhi dekhani hain"..........rashmi ki awaz tharthra rahi thi, uttejana se jism kamp raha tha.

"kal dopahar ko mere bedroom me dekhenge,us waquat ghar par koi nahi hota"

tabhi neelu ki car use lene aagyi,dono hi car pe sawar ho gayi,
dono hi khamosh thi,dono ka man kal ane wale anand ki kalpana se mast,mast ho rha tha
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