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The best erotica on exbii till date. 599 53.53%
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One of the best 10 on exbii 185 16.53%
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I know hindi but dont like the story! 65 5.81%
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bro...dnt change the language...ur hindi+english(hinglish) rocks.......
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Thanx shiv and nand!

Aur nand tumhare paass to kuchh aur bhi hai dene ke liye... Kanjoosi kahe karte ho bhaya..!
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Dear shiv!

U r very right a story can be completed fast by increasing the speed of writing. But my dear friend, a life runs at its normal velocity, whether negative or positive.. And as i have told u already; this 'bediyon ka hashr' is not only a story but my life itself..

The brave girl who is desceibed in the story is yet to achieve her target decided by me and it will take almost three year.... Isiliye maine 3 saal kaha... Kyunki... Kahani ( jindgi ) abhi baki hai.... Mere Dost!
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3 years....i m ready to w8 bro...but i m gonna be the first one to read it...its a promise....

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Aur gajab ho gaya... Sanjay ne usko aankhein band karke ghoom jane ko kaha.... Aankhein to wo waise bhi nahi khol sakti thhi.. Nangi apne bhai se najrein milana bahut door ki baat thhi... Ghhumte huye hi uska sara badan wasna ki jwala mein tap kar kaamp raha thha... Uska sara badan jaise ek sudoul dhaanche mein dhala huya sa sanjay ki aur ghoom gaya... Uska lamba patla aur najuk pate aur uske upar taney khadi do santarey ke aakar ki rasbhari choochiyan; sab kuchh jaise thhos ho gaya ho... Ab uski chhatiyon ka raha saha lacheelapan bhi jata raha... Uskki choochiyon ke choochak bhi ab tak bilkul akad gaye thhe... Sanjay ne itna bhavya shareer kabhi blue filmon mein bhi nanga nahi dekha tha... Uska haath apne aap hi apne tab tak tan chuke lund ko kabu mein karne ki chesta karne laga... Par ab lund kahan shant hone wala thha... Wo bheetar se hi baar baar fufkar kar apni narajgi ka ijhaar kar raha thha mano kah raha ho," abhi tak mein bahar kyun hoon; teri behan ki choot se...."
Nisha ke liye har pal mushkil ho raha thha... Ab tak uska shareer mard ke haathon ka sparsh maangne laga tha... Tadap dono hi rahe thhe... Par jhijhak bhi door hone ka naam nahi le rahi thi... Dono ki... Agar wo bhai behan na hote to kab ka ek dusre ke andar hote.... Poori tarah...

Nisha se na raha gaya," bbhiya! Yahan tak mein kaisi lag rahi hoon" matlab saaf thha... Pareeksha to wo poori hi dena chahti thi... Par ab tak ka hisab kitab poochh rahi thhi...

Sanjay kuchh na bola... Bola hi nahi gaya... Usne kahna to chaha thha," ab bus control nahi hota... Aa ja" par wo kuchh na bola...

Nisha ne larajte huye honton se apni sari sakti samet-te huye kah hi diya...," bhaiya! Salwaar utar doon kya? Geeli hone wali hai...."

'Neki aur poochh poochh' sanjay ko agle 'beuty test' ke liye kahna hi nahi pada. Aur na hi nisha ne apne bhaiya se ijajat lene ki jarurat samjhi... Usne salwar utar di... Apni panty ko sath hi pakad kar... Sanjay to bus apni behan ke angon ki sundarta dekhkar hakka bakka rah gaya... Kash usko pata hota... Uski behan aisa maal hai.. To wah kabhi usko behan maanta hi nahi... Uski choot tapp tapp kar choo rahi thhi... Uski choot ka ras uski kele ke taney jaisi chikni aur mulayam janghon par beh kar chamak raha thha... Aur mehak bhi raha thha... Sanjay se raha na gaya," ye ras kaisa hai? " usne apni aankhwin band kiye aanad ke maare kaamp rahi apni pyari aur sundar behan se poochha...
" yyeee issmein se nikal raha hai" nisha ne koi ishara na kiya... Bus 'ismein se' kah diya...
"kismein se?" sanjay ne anjaan ban-ne ki acting karte huye poochha.

Nisha ka ek hath apni chhatiyon se takra kar niche aaya aur uski choot ke dane ke upar tik gaya," ismein se!" uski chhatiyan lambi lambi saanson ki wajah se lagataar upar neeche ho rahi thhi..

Sanjay thhoda sa khul kar bola," naam kya hai jaan iska?" uski behan uski jaan ban gayi thi... Uski premika!

Nisha sharam se dohri ho gayi... Par khulna wo bhi chahti thhi....,"... Ch..... Choooo...?"

"poora naam le do na!... Pls jaan... Bus ek baar"

"...choot!" aur wo ghoom gayi diwar ki taraf... Uski sharam ne bhi had kar di thhi.. Koyi aur hoti to iske baad kahne sunne ke liye kuchh bacha hi na thha... Bus karne ke liye bacha thha... Bahut kuchh!"

Sanjay ne uski gaand ko dhyaan se dekha... Uske dono chutad uski choochiyon ki bhaanti sakht dikhayi de rahi thhe...gaand ke neeche se uski ubhar aayi choot ki motayi jhalak rahi thi... Aur ab bhi uski choot tapak rahi thi...

Sanjay uske pichhe gaya aur uske kaan mein bola... Jaan tumse jyada sundar koyi ho hi nahi sakta...
Nisha uske bhayi ki pareeksha mein pratham aayi thi. Ab sahna uske vash mein nahi tha... Aakhir usko bhi to first aanrle ka inaam milna chahiye.. Wo ghumi aur apne bhayi... Sorry..! Premi ban chuke bhai se lipat kar apni tadap rahi choochiyon ko shant karne ke koshish ki...! Sanjay ko uski choochiyan Pni chhati mein chubhti huyi si mahsoos ho rahi thhi... Wah wahi baith gaya aur apni premika behan ki tarasti choot par apne hont tika diye....

"please.. Bed par le chalo!" nisha ne apni sundarta ka inaam maanga...

Sanjay ne usko dulhan ki bhaanti uthha liya... Aur le jakar bed par bichha kar usko inaam dene ki koshish karne laga.... Uske munh mein...

"uffffff ! Sahan nahi hota... Jaldi neeche daal do!" nisha boukhlayi huyi apni choot ki faankon ke beech ungali ghusane ki koshish kar rahi thi..

Sanjay ne mouke ki najakat ko samjha... Wah neeche late gaya aur nisha ko apne upar chadha liya... Dono aur pair karke...

Nisha ko ab aur kuchh batane ki jarurat nahi thi.. Wo apni choot ko uske lund par rakhkar ghisane lagi... Lagatar taezi se... Aur sanjay haar gaya... Sanjay ke lund ne pichkari chhod di... Uski choot ki garmi paate hi... Aur lund ka amulya ras uski choot ki faankon mein se bah nikla... Sanjay ne buri tarah se nisha ko apni chhati par daba liya aur i love you nisha kahne laga.. Baar baar... Jitni baar uske lund ne ras chhoda... Wah yahi kahta gaya... Nisha to tadap kar rah gayi... Wah lagatar uske yaar ke lund ko apni choot mein dena chahti par lagatar chhote ho rahe lund ne saath na diya... Wah badhawas si hokar sanjay ki chhati par mukke marne lagi... Jaise sanjay ne usko bahut bada dhhokha de diya go...

Par sanjay ko pata tha usko kya karna hai... Usne nisha ko nee he giraya aur apna rasbhara lund uske munh mein thhoos diya... Wasna se sani nisha ne turant usko ' 'munh mein hi sahi' sochkar nigal liya... Aur uske ras ko saaf karne lagi.. Jaldi jaldi...

Lund bhi utni hi jaldi apna sampuran aakar prapt karne laga... Jyon jyon wah badha nisha ka munh khula gaya aur lund uske munh se nikalta gaya... Aakhir mein jab sanjay ke lund ka sirf supada uske munh mein rah gaya to nisha ne usko munh se nikalte hi badi besharmi se sanjay se kaha," mmmeri choot mein daal de isko... Main mar jaaungi nahi to...

Sanjay ne der nahi lagayi.. Wah nisha ke neeche aaya aur uski taange uthha kar unhe door door kar diya... Nisha ki choot gili thhi aur jaise jor jor se sanse le rahi thi... Sanjay ne apna lund uski choot ke chhed par rakh diya... Nisha ko pata thha mukabla barabar ka nahi hai... Usne apne aap hi apna munh band kar liya..

Sanjay ne dabav badhana shuru kiya to nisha ki aankhein bahar ko aane lagi dard ke maare... Par usne apna munh dabaye rakha... Aur 'fachchh' ki aawaj ke sath lund ka supade ne uski choot ko chhed diya.. Dard ke marey nisha bilbila uthhi... Wah apni gardan ko 'mat karo ke ishare mein idhar udhar patakane lagi.... Sanjay ne kuchh der usko aaram dene ke iradey se apne 'driller' ko wahin rok dia... Aur uski chhatiyon par jhuk kar uske taney huye dane ko honto ke beech daba liya... Nisha kya darx kya sharam sab bhool gayi... Uska haath apne munh se hatkar sanjay ke balon mein chala gaya... Ab sanjay uske honto ko choos raha tha... Pahle se hi laal hont aur rasile hote gaye... Aur unki jeebh ek dusre ke munh mein kabaddi khelne lagi... Kaamdev aur rati dono charam par thhe... Premika ne apne chutadon ko uthakar lund ko poora kha sakne ki samarthya ka ahsaas sanjay ko kara diya... Sanjay uske honton ko apne honton se dabaye jor lagata chala gaya... Baki kaam to lund ko hi karna thha... Wah apni manjil par jakar hi ruka...sanjay ne lund aadha bahar kheencha aur fir se andar bhej diya... Apni premika behan ki choot mein... Nisha sisak sisak kar apni pahli chudayi ka bharpoor aanand le rahi thi.... Ek baar jhadne par bhi uske aanand mein koi kami na aayi... Haan maja ulta dugna ho gaya... Chikni hone par lund choot mein sattasat ja raha tha... Neeche se nisha dhakke lagati rahi aur upar se sanjay... Dour jam gaya aur kafi lumba chalta raha... Dono dhakke lagate lagate ek dusre ko choom rahe thhe; chaat rahe thhe... Aur i love you bol rahe thhe... Achanak nisha ne ek 'aaah' ke sath fir se ras chhod diya... Uske ras ki garmi se sanjay ko laga ab wah bhi jyada chal nahi paayega.... Sanjay ko charam ka ahsaas hote hi apna lund ek dum se nikal kar nisha ke patle kamar se chipake pate par rakh diya... Aur nisha aankhein band kiye huye hi sanjay ke lund se nikalne wali bouchharon ko gin-ne lagi... Aakhri boond tapkte hi sanjay uske oopar gir pada....

Nisha ne uske maathhe ko choom liya aur uski aankhon mein dekhkar kahne lagi," main tujhe kisi ke paas nahi jaane doongi jaan... Tu sirf mera hai... Mera yaar... Mera pyar....

Sanjay gour se duniya ki sabse sundar lagne wali apni behan ko dekhne laga.... Par ab usko Gouri yaad aa rahi thhi.............
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Shiv bhai! 3 saal to door ki baat hai... Aaj to isika aanad uthhao! Bade achchhe mood mein likh raha hoon!
Jaldi to nahi hogi na!!!
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bhai....merey mann key toh poocho mat...agar app 100 update ek saath karogey..toh saari padh jaoonga....ek saath....itna mazza aa raha hai...but i wnt stop ya.....jo bhi apko theek legey...but yes atlst 20% toh speed badaooo....

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