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Dear Tushar Bhai,

Abhi kahaani shuru ki hai aur page 3 tak pahunchin hun. Mazaa aagaya.

Looking forward to reading the rest of it soon.

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Dear Tushar bhai,

Abhi tak page 66 per pahunchi hun. Story bahut mazedaar chal rahi hai.

Ek baat to hai ki aapki pakarh ladkiyon aur auraton ki feelings aur sentiments per
bahut achhi hai.

I am a female reader ( age 25, unmarried ) and I imagine that if I were in a similar
situation I wud also feel exactly the same. Probably mere dialogs aur baten bhi
waise he hongii jaise aapne describe kiya hai.

Ess se pahle episode mein kheton per kapre dhone a scene aur battein bilkul natural lagtin hain.

Looking forward to continue reading.

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lajawab, excellent what a story ,,, shabad nahi hai tariff karne ke liye ... bahut umda likha hai ... anand aagaya ......

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Great ending to a great story.

The best thing I liked most is that there is no villain and no violence. Everybody is
enjoying a good dose of great sex.
This is the celebration of sex.
Looking forward to your next story.

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