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Mu aei Short Story Series re chota chota sex story post karibaku sthira karichi.Prathama Story ti padhi sariba pare jadi apana mane agraha dekhanti tebe samaya krame mu gotika pare gotie short story post kari chalibi.

Nispati mu apana manaka opare chadili.

N.B: Aei samasta story sampurna kalpanika ebang kebala manoranjan pain udista. Mo dwara post kara jaithiba kaunashi story bastabika jibana sahita kaunashi bhabre bi samparkita nuhen

1. BATERA TOKA, PAGE-1
2. BAR GIRL PAGE -2
3. MAMU JHIA BHAUNI PAGE-2
4. BOU PAGE 3

5. DIDI GO TAME BHARI SUNDAR PAGE-4
6. MALATI SANGARE DINE : PAGE 8
7. SABU MAYA RE BAYA : PAGE 8
8. ASAHAYA MANISHA PAGE -9
9. MU KEMITI BESHYA HELI PAGE-10
10. CHALA PHERI JIBA : PAGE 12
11. GALEI : PAGE 15
12. MANA GAHANE : PAGE 18
13. MILI...Oh...MILI : PAGE - 25
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BATERA TOKA


Practical class sari mu college ru baharila belaku 3 ta baji jae. College sete belaku pura phanka. Mora sabu sanga ati besi re 2 ta sudha college chadi dianti. Tenu saptaheke praya tini /chari din mate ekutia chali chali gharaku pheribaku pade. Bassss…aeithu hin story arambha.......

Mu pheriba batare college ra birat field ta pade. Padia ra gote kana ku Electry department ra bada transformer te basichi. Nirapatta pain praya chari/pancha foot ra chota chota pacheri gherei dia jaithae ta chari kade. Dekha rakha abhabaru ta bhitare budu budikia jungle bhali chota chota buda gudaka aramaa hei badhi jai thae. Ta sangaku thik ta pakhare gote bara gacha taku dhanki dei se jaga taku ahuri parityakta au bhaya shankula kari dei thae. Sei bate ekutia chali chali asila belaku dina 3 ta bele bi mate bhari dara made. Karana ta khali nichatia jaga ku nei nuhen. Derire college ru pheriba dina mu pratyek thara thik sei jagare se badmash ta habuda re pade………

Ekdum bhenda toka te…….Landa munda ku dehare kebala gote half pant. Chehera ta low class toka mananka bhali. Sabubele se sei pacheri pakhare lungu lungu hauthiba. Doora ru jadi se dekhidela je jhia te asuchi tahele se chatapat se transformer ra charipate ghera heithiba pacheri bhitare pasi jai taku apekhya kare. Jhia ta pakhaku asigala matre se Pant ra chain taku kholi dei baan hatare ta banda taku dhari halau halau baharaku bahari ase au ara hatare jhia taku pakhaku asibaku thaare.......

College re admission kala dina thu mu dekhe se toka bishayare praya samaya mo sanga manaka bhitare charcha chale. Se toka ra bada size ku nei bahut thara rasala charcha haba ra mu nije bi sunichi. Sabu bele tara “ seita” bishayare suni suni kautuhala basatah mora bele bele bhari iccha hue je mu tharate bi hau tara dekhanti ki……!!!!!! Kintu mu kana janithili je mora sei “thara te” pain iccha ta mora sabu dina pain mane rahi jiba boli…!!!!!!!!

Bapa jete dina aeithi thile se mate sabu bele bike re nei college re chadi dianti au pherila belaku bi mate nei asanti. Tenu mu college ku jiba asiba nei kebe chinta kari nathili. Hele bapa nkara anya branch ku transfer hei gala pare mate badhya hei town bus opare nirbhara karibaku padila. Town bus re college asila belaku bhida je kahin re kan. Sethire chatara toka gahali bhitare deha re munda re hata mari jaha bore karanti sekatha nakahile bhala. Tebe mora praya sanga semiti abastha re college asanti. Tenu kichi dina adua adua lagila pare mu aste aste satarka hei gali au nijaku se paristhiti sahita khapa khuai neli.

Town bus re tokanka dauratmya ta satarka rahile avoid kari hei jae Kintu dina tini ta bele mu jete bele ekutia college ru phere sete bele bahut thara se batera toka ta habuda re pade. Taku samna na kariba pain mu alaga rasta dhari town bus stand re pahanchila belaku mo halat kharap hei jae. Tini ta belaku bhoka re hansa udu thae. Bata bhangi dui / chari thara gala pare ete bata buli buli jibaku mora dharya rahilani. Badhya hei puni sei bata re hin jiba asiba kali. Sabu dina nahele bi jou dina mu ta habuda re padi jae sedina ta linga maharaj nku darshana kariba nischita. jhia mananku ta musala banda ta dekheibare se batera toka taku ki dharana ra ananda mile kejani mu tara aei bikruta badabhyasa ra matlab ta kichi bujhi pareni. Pherila bele mu chali chali ta pakha pakhi pahanchi gala belaku se hatare phutki mari mari mate jete bele ta pakhaku dake sete bele mu ta adiki nachahin ba pain jete chesta kalebi mo amania nazar ta mana ku mana ta adiki tani hei jae. Gote jhalak bi hau pache, tara kala…mach….mach…chost musala ta opare mo nazar padigale ajanata re bi mo deha bhitara ta kemiti gote hei jae. Mu munhaku talaku poti chupchap kaunashi mate setaka bata bhari santarpana re atikrama kari jae.

Sedina thae sani baar. Aei dina ta College jaldi phanka hei jae. Se dina mu practical sari pherila belaku praya tini ta baji baku jau thae. Akasha ta meghua hei andharia dekha jau thae chari ada. Feriba rasta re kehi kuade dekha jau nathanti. Mu tharila chati re munha talaku poti poti ekutia chali chali town bus stand paryanta asu thae. Kichi bata asichi jhipi jhipi hei barsha arambha hei gala. Barsha ru rakhya paiba pain mo pakhare chata ba rain coat kichi bi nathae. Mu odhani taku munda opare ghodei hei padi bhagya ku adari jor jor pada pakei aga ku badhili.Chali chali mu thik sei bada bara gacha pakhare pahanchi chi ki nahin hathath sei tranformer ku gherei hei rahithiba pacheri bhitaru sei toka ta bhuta bhalia baharaku bahari asila……….

Se ta pant ra chain taku kholi tara tengei thiba chost banda taku dekheila bhalia hatare dhari thae. Mo samna re asi bata ogali thia hei padila. Taku dekhi dei mora hosh udigala. Kan karibi kichi bujhi paru nathae. Chari adaku bikala hei nazar bulei anili. kehi kuade nahanti. Rasta opara tare kebala se au mu. Se mate kichi kahu nathae. Khali mo adiki anei hasu thae au ta banda taku dhari mo agare halau thae. Mu chitkara kariba pain bhabili kintu mo tanti sukhigala. Pati khali atha atha hei jau thae. Se sete belaku ta hatare mate khali barambara aslila ishara karu thae au mate thari kari se pachiri adiki dekhau thae. Mu bujhi gali je se mate se nicha pachiri bhitaraku jiba pain ingita dauchi. Ta matlab ta bujhi pari mo deha ru se barsa re bi paraste jhala bohi galani. Se mate uskeiba pain tara chost banda taku dhari mori agare haleibare lagi thae..

Ta kabalaru kemiti khasi ki jibi mate kichi budhi bata dekha jau nathae. Mu palei jiba pain chesta kale se tara di hata melei mate atakau thae. Mu dhari neli je aji mo katha sarila. Tara udeshya purana kariba pain mo tarapha ru kaunashi samarthana napai se mora di baha ku jabudi dhari mate bhidi bhidi se pacheri ada ku nei gala. Sete belaku bali ku jauthiba cheli bhali mo abastha. Pacheri adhualaku nei gale se mo sathire kan kariba mu sekatha thik jani paru thae. Bali padiba purbaru sesha thara pain atma rakhya karibaku mu chitkara kariba pain paru paryanta chesta kali hele mo pati khani marigala. Mo chitkara mo tanti bhitare hin kouthi atki kari rahigala. Mo deha ta khali thara thara hei tharu thae au se mate jabardast bhidi bhidi se pacheri adaku nei jau thae. Ta dehara takat agare mora paratirodh kichi kama karu nathae. Bhidi bhidi mate pacheri pakhaku nei gala pare se mo anta ku jabudi dhari sunye sunye teki kari se pacheri ghera bhitaraku nei gala…………

Baragacha ra gahalia patra adhuala jogu khande jaga sukhila thae . Se mate seithi naram ghasa opare jabardast suai dei mo di jangha opare anthei kari madi basila. Mu ta adiki atankita hei chahin rahi thae se mo sahita kan karuchi dekhibaku. Se mate hatare puni thare aslila ishara dela au thari kari jaha kahila mu bujhiparili se kahuchi “mate chupchap dekheide….tate gehi sarila pare mu tate chadi debi”. Mu se paryanta jani nathili je toka ta ghunga boli. Mo akhiru luha bohi jau thae. Mu taku kakuti minati hau thae mate chadi daba pain. Se munha taku bikruta kari mo gala beka chatti chari adiki khali tharaku thara chuchumi pakeila au mo doodha ku muthei dhari pula pula kari chipi pakeila. Tara tengei kari thiba musala banda ta mo jangha sandhire jor re chapi hau thae. Dress ta nathile mo kama sarithila jana. Se mate ete sighra sighra chuma mari chali thae je mo gala beka chatti chari ada tara lala re oda heigala. Mo doodha di taku se thik sponge ku chipila bhalia dali pakau thae. Hatasha re mu pura nirbed hei padi rahi thae. Mane mane bhabi nei thae je shikari ra shikar hei sarila pare jai aji mora mukti……

Kuha jae bipada re padithile bi banchi jiba ra thile kemiti hele bi mukuli jibara bata aape aape pahanchi jae. Tokata mate jemiti bibhascha bhabare sambhog karibare lagi padithila mu ta kabala ru se dina rakhya paibara sabu asha chadi dei badhya hei atma-samarpana karidei thili. Hatath se “heiiiiiiiiii” boli bhayatura chitkara te chadi spring bhalia thia hei padila. Kan hela boli hatath kichi bujhi napari mu bi bhayare uthi thia hei padila belaku dekhili birat eke saapa sei bata dei sar….sar…. hei palei gala. Barsha agaa dekhile dhamana sapa baharanti. Mo pain kintu aeita gote badhia suyog thila. Mu se toka ku samasta bala kharcha kari dhakae pakeili. Se bhush kina tale mati kamudi padigala matre mu se jagaru baharaku bahari asi eka niswasha re daudi bare lagili. Daudi daudi se nichatia rasta ta paar hei gala pare mu pacha ku buli chahinli kale se toka mo pachare godauchi ki kan boli. Hele se toka ra chinha barna nathila………

Jhia te emiti kain dauduchi boli jie nahin sie dekhile sandeha kariba boli mu prakutistha hei jor jor chaliba re lagili. Mo deha ta barada patra bhalia tharu thae. Barsha jor re arambha hei gala ni sete belaku. Mu main road oparaku palei asila pare mo mana ru bhaya bahu pari manare kami jai thae. Gadi guda ka ..pin…paan.. hei jau thanti. Kemiti ghara ku pheribi boli kichi upaya na pai mu semiti chali chali ghara munha eka ..eka ….ageiba re lagi thae. Hatath dekhili ama ghara pakha basti re rahu thiba rickshaw bala ta khali rickshaw dhari ghara munha pheruchi. Mu taku hata dekheilaru se “ gharaku jauchi au bhada karibini” kahi paleibaku basila. Hele mu taku badhya kari atkeili. Kahili "gharaku jaucha jadi mate nei jao..... tama ghara pakhe ame rahuchu…mora accident hei gala mate tike ghre chadi dia” kahi ta rickshaw re basi padili. Rickshaw aga ku gadiba arambha kala matre mu shanti re nishwas marili. Mane mane bhabu thae aji nischita dharshana kaand ru mu alpake rakhya paigali. Saapa ta bahari nathile se toka aji mate nischita aintha kari sari chadi thanta. Bata jaka prabhu nku mundia mari mari asu thae. Surakhita bhabare ghare pahanchi gali. Deha jaka mati lagi thae. Ghare bi gote cycle bala sahita accident heijibara bahana kari mu hazare kaifayat daba ru banchi gali. Bhala kari dhoi dhai hei padi dress change kari ghodei hei basi garam cha au garam garam chana hei thiba pakudi khau khau bhabu thae jadi aji kichi aghatana hei jaithanta tebe mo abastha ete belaku kan hau thanta…..se toka mo sahita jaha jaha kari pakeila tara dukha apekhya krasta harini Bagha habuda ru banchi jaithiba ra ananda re mu besh aswastha anubhaba karu thae. Jhir…jhir hei musala dhara re barsa abirat chali thae.Ghara ra surakhita chari kantha bhitare nischinta hei mu kete bele je bed opare soi jaichi mu janiparini………



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Bhai Mane......

Story jadi Bhala Na lagila......tahele bi mote janantu. Bhala na lagibara Karana bi jadi lekhi parante tebe parabarti story ku lekhila belaku mu tara abshyaka care nei paribi. Aei short story section re Bibhinna Variety ra story post karibi boli bhabichi. Sex story tharu arambha kari Romantic story , incest ebang jadi lekhi parili Horror story madhya post kariba pain chesta karibi.

Tebe kaunashi story lekhiba purbaru apana manankara matamata pain mu apekhya nischaya karibi......karana andha bhali story lekhi chalile taha one sided heijiba swabhabik. Story lekhibara kasta utheiba purbaru jane writer kichita proschahana ra akankhya rakhiba swabhabik. Forum re story post karibara eka matra akarshana apana manakara matamata.

Matamata apekhya re rahili..........
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Bhai Atrupta, Story ta interesting thila aau lekha b bahuta bhala thla. Bhauni upare kichi lekha, 10th ki +2 jhia upare lekha aahuri maja lagiba. tama lekha saili bahuta bhla.

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Bhai Atrupta, Story ta interesting thila aau lekha b bahuta bhala thla. Bhauni upare kichi lekha, 10th ki +2 jhia upare lekha aahuri maja lagiba. tama lekha saili bahuta bhla.
OK Bhai .... nischaya chesta karibi
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