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pahchaanta har aadmi hai. wo bhi iss sacience ke yug mai lekin bhai koi to aisa ho jiske aadhar par yeh story apne poore nikhar ke sath chalti rahe.

aapne story achchhi or saaf-suthri likhi thi iss liye yeh proteest kiya tha. agar bura laga to. sorry for that. aage se yeh galti nhi hogi.
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Lost interest for the time being bcoz of updated post. Will take some time to get adapted to new flow of the story. However one thing I want to say.
"Triya charitram, purushasya bhagyam, Devo na janati kuto manushyah"
Itihas gawah hai ki striyon ne purushon ko kaise bewkoof banaya hai. Agar is mein bhi koi bewkoof banata hai to logo ko kya paresani hai.
Aisa lagata hai log khud ko Shamsher ke roop mein dekhane lage hain isliye unhe ye baat pach nahi rahi. Yahan kahani third person kah raha hai. Isliye Shamsher ko tab tak nahi pata chalta jab tak kahani likhne wala khud na bataye. Aurten(Disha) to koi bhi bahana banati aur wo Shamsher ko hajam ho jata. Comments karane wale to aisa lagata ya khud Shamsher hain ya ye khud use ja kar bata aayenge.
Apni story mein ek bahut bara SET BACK.
janu apne bikul sahi kaha aur mr. chodu pahle app deepak ki puri story padho aur tumhari baat ke anusar mr. tulsi das ke dohe ko tumne badhi saralta se likh diya lekin yatharth jindgi mei sabse pahla war apne ghar pe karna aur apni jindgi ki jahlak dekho kesi hogi
ek baat aur yaad rakhna aurat agar narak ka dwar kahi jati hei to swarg bhi uske kadmo se hoqar gujarta hei. bina aurat ke tum swarg ke darwaje taq pahuchna to door ki baat hei usse choo bhi nahi saqte aur mere biradar purush ko peda karne wali bhi ek aurat hei, ausko pratham shiksha dene wali bhi ek aurat hei, aur usko pahla doodh ka niwala pilane wali bhi ek aurat hei, aur tere jesi soch wale galich insan ko apni yoni mei dharan karne wali bhi ek aurat hei, aur duniya mei baap ka darja dene wali bhi ek aurat hei. aurat ki itne per bhi izzat karne ki tamiz nahi to pahle ja kar apne jiwan se aurat ka naam khatam kar dekh phir tu apni atma ko hi nahi kho de to mera naam badal dena

har aurat veshya nahi hoti her aurat haramin nahi hoti agar esa hota to aree arrey bewakophoo prani ye duniya nahi hoti

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deepak bhai meine socha tha appko appke iss edited update ke liye comment deta apka ye update padhke lekin appke cooment ke baad mujhe ehsas ho raha hei appne mere aur logo ke dabaw mei akar apni story badal di hei yaa mujhe lagta hei mere cooments ne appki lekhni change karne mei shayad galat sahyog kar diya

app apni story apne tariqe se update kar le hum galat thee jo iss story ko dill se laga bethe agli baar se hum dhyaan rakhege ek lekhak ki sex story hei koi humare uppar likhi haqiqat nahi

sorry bhai app abb badal gaye hoo aur humari wajha se apppko badalne ki koi jarurat nahi hum soch lenge iss story ko jiss morel valuse ke sath sex ki madak mala mei pirokar appne itna age badhayha tha shayad uska ant samay abb gaya hei warna iss tarha ki kai najayaj sambnadho wali hajaro story net pe uplabhdh hei

lekin girls school meri story collection aaj taq ke record sabse shandar sabse pasandeeda rahi thi lekin mei abb uska personal collection close karne jaa raha hun app bina taqliph ke please meri wajha se apni soch se dabaw hata lo aur poorane tariqe se usse jese chal rahi thi aage badhne dooo log sirf nangi aurat ko beizzat karke chodna pasand karte hei app apni lekhni se usse purn karne mei jara bhi nahi hichke mere taraf se appko abb kabhi bhi comment nahi milenge

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deepak bhai meine socha tha appko appke iss edited update ke liye comment deta apka ye update padhke lekin appke cooment ke baad mujhe ehsas ho raha hei appne mere aur logo ke dabaw mei akar apni story badal di hei yaa mujhe lagta hei mere cooments ne appki lekhni change karne mei shayad galat sahyog kar diya

app apni story apne tariqe se update kar le hum galat thee jo iss story ko dill se laga bethe agli baar se hum dhyaan rakhege ek lekhak ki sex story hei koi humare uppar likhi haqiqat nahi

sorry bhai app abb badal gaye hoo aur humari wajha se apppko badalne ki koi jarurat nahi hum soch lenge iss story ko jiss morel valuse ke sath sex ki madak mala mei pirokar appne itna age badhayha tha shayad uska ant samay abb gaya hei warna iss tarha ki kai najayaj sambnadho wali hajaro story net pe uplabhdh hei

lekin girls school meri story collection aaj taq ke record sabse shandar sabse pasandeeda rahi thi lekin mei abb uska personal collection close karne jaa raha hun app bina taqliph ke please meri wajha se apni soch se dabaw hata lo aur poorane tariqe se usse jese chal rahi thi aage badhne dooo log sirf nangi aurat ko beizzat karke chodna pasand karte hei app apni lekhni se usse purn karne mei jara bhi nahi hichke mere taraf se appko abb kabhi bhi comment nahi milenge

Bye
No words to reply ur great comment..

Just hope u will pardon me and continue to guide..

I am really hurted friend.. Agar mujhe ye ahsaas nahi hota ki story se kitne dost dil se jude huye hain aur agar main uss tarhakathit twist ke baad khud asamanjhas mein nahi hota toh mein update ke turant baad ye kyun likhta ki mujhe khud nahi pata ki maine kya likh diya....

U r right friend.. This is the time to say a bye to Girl's school!
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pahchaanta har aadmi hai. wo bhi iss sacience ke yug mai lekin bhai koi to aisa ho jiske aadhar par yeh story apne poore nikhar ke sath chalti rahe.

aapne story achchhi or saaf-suthri likhi thi iss liye yeh proteest kiya tha. agar bura laga to. sorry for that. aage se yeh galti nhi hogi.

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janu apne bikul sahi kaha aur mr. chodu pahle app deepak ki puri story padho aur tumhari baat ke anusar mr. tulsi das ke dohe ko tumne badhi saralta se likh diya lekin yatharth jindgi mei sabse pahla war apne ghar pe karna aur apni jindgi ki jahlak dekho kesi hogi
ek baat aur yaad rakhna aurat agar narak ka dwar kahi jati hei to swarg bhi uske kadmo se hoqar gujarta hei. bina aurat ke tum swarg ke darwaje taq pahuchna to door ki baat hei usse choo bhi nahi saqte aur mere biradar purush ko peda karne wali bhi ek aurat hei, ausko pratham shiksha dene wali bhi ek aurat hei, aur usko pahla doodh ka niwala pilane wali bhi ek aurat hei, aur tere jesi soch wale galich insan ko apni yoni mei dharan karne wali bhi ek aurat hei, aur duniya mei baap ka darja dene wali bhi ek aurat hei. aurat ki itne per bhi izzat karne ki tamiz nahi to pahle ja kar apne jiwan se aurat ka naam khatam kar dekh phir tu apni atma ko hi nahi kho de to mera naam badal dena

har aurat veshya nahi hoti her aurat haramin nahi hoti agar esa hota to aree arrey bewakophoo prani ye duniya nahi hoti

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theek kha hai aapne lekin puri kahani padne ke baad yeh comment diya hota to jyada achchha tha.maine to aisi aurtain bhi dekhi hai jo pati ke bister par hi oosko need ki goli khilakar ooske paas lekar bhi sex karti hai. lekin yeh story hai bhai isme gunjayes nikal sakti hai chariter chitteran ho sakta hai.


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No words to reply ur great comment..

Just hope u will pardon me and continue to guide..

I am really hurted friend.. Agar mujhe ye ahsaas nahi hota ki story se kitne dost dil se jude huye hain aur agar main uss tarhakathit twist ke baad khud asamanjhas mein nahi hota toh mein update ke turant baad ye kyun likhta ki mujhe khud nahi pata ki maine kya likh diya....

U r right friend.. This is the time to say a bye to Girl's school!

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